seniorz and CSPs plz coment on the outline

[jawad akbar]

FALLING STANDARDS OF EDUCATON IN PAKISTAN; CAUSES AND REMEDIES

OUTLINE:-

1. Importance of education defined + (quotation/ hadith).
2. Developed nations and their education system.
3. Lack of education gives rise to moral and social evils
4. PAK scenario: present literacy rate. increasing number of primary and secondary schools still not sufficing
5. Causes include, lack of funds to support healthy education, scarcity of universities, shortage of research facilities and inadequate significance given by the govt. to the matter.
6. Education system is infected due to intervention of politics.
7. Remedies: raise the funds provided, need of the role of hec, build new universities and research laboratories.
8. Ensure the reach of I.T to each single institute of Pakistan.
9. Purify the educational institutes from the politics.
10. Make more vocational training institutes to educate the labor and make them skillful
11. Adopt the modernized way of learning in the institutions , no ratta system
12. Follow the internationally practiced and approved educational systems
13. Make a platform where the information about the international scholarships could be communicated efficiently to the students.
14. Educate the teachers from good foreign universities
15. Free newspaper provision for one year to the college students to inculcate the habit of newspaper reading and help them observe the society, learn and thus groom
16. Paper checking in universities should be done on the pattern of intermediate board, so to counter the undue influence on paper checkers
17. Epilogue
The issue of education system needs to be catered with a serious attitude. The govt. of Pakistan should look into the matter of education policies and ensure the provision of quality education to every child of Pakistan. Only here lies the key to success we are after since the inception our country.

[Ali Ahmad Syed]

Good attempt but you populate your outlines with more general and mediocre stuff. Try to put technicality in your essay. Write outline from an educationist point of view. Since your are discussing "Falling Standards of Education in Pakistan: Causes and Remedies", you have to give an insight into present education system rather putting general and common stuff. For instance, you should include:

Standards in terms of:
• Curriculum
• Textbooks and Learning Materials
• Administrative Issues
• Teachers and teacher's training
• Learning Environment

Geographic and Economic Disparities
• Geographic Disparities
• Economic Disparities

Gender Differences
Parallel Systems in Education

On these lines you may expand this beyond.

Regards,

[shakeel ghori]

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[aariz]

Uniform syllabus ko add karo remedies mey
The outline is very good.

[jawad akbar]

dear shakeel, you can use microsoft word to give the desired format to your text, copy it and then can paste that copied stuff in our post.
regards