6.5 pages including outline - Essay Passed :)
 

The topic i selected was "Great Nations win without fighting". Outline of only 5 lines and i strongly addressed the topic leaving aside irrelevant details. I heard an aspirant passed essay paper by writing 8 pages, but i think i am lucky enough to break that record :) Got 40 marks.

[QUOTE=sheikh87;770008]The topic i selected was "Great Nations win without fighting". Outline of only 5 lines and i strongly addressed the topic leaving aside irrelevant details. I heard an aspirant passed essay paper by writing 8 pages, but i think i am lucky enough to break that record :) Got 40 marks.[/QUOTE]

OMG :pp What a Luck , One step right or one step left and you were done - out :laughing

[QUOTE=sheikh87;770008]The topic i selected was "Great Nations win without fighting". Outline of only 5 lines and i strongly addressed the topic leaving aside irrelevant details. I heard an aspirant passed essay paper by writing 8 pages, but i think i am lucky enough to break that record :) Got 40 marks.[/QUOTE]

confusion here...you mean 3.5 sheets? (1 sheet = Front page + Back page)?
also please tell about number of words of essay?

[QUOTE=sheikh87;770008]The topic i selected was "Great Nations win without fighting". Outline of only 5 lines and i strongly addressed the topic leaving aside irrelevant details. I heard an aspirant passed essay paper by writing 8 pages, but i think i am lucky enough to break that record :) Got 40 marks.[/QUOTE]

Hahahaha. That's great dear. Paper checker boht rehmdil the essay kay koi, ya to paper check e ni hue hain :)

[QUOTE=exclusively;770083]Hahahaha. That's great dear. Paper checker boht rehmdil the essay kay koi, ya to paper check e ni hue hain :)[/QUOTE]

dear what about you in CE-14? Why have you not shared your mark sheet?

[QUOTE=noomee;770091]dear what about you in CE-14? Why have you not shared your mark sheet?[/QUOTE]

This time, I failed in Composition & Islamiat with very low marks. In the rest subjects, I got good score and that's acceptable. :) Now going for third attempt.

[QUOTE=exclusively;770095]This time, I failed in Composition & Islamiat with very low marks. In the rest subjects, I got good score and that's acceptable. :) Now going for third attempt.[/QUOTE]

dear can you please share your DMC?

[QUOTE=xeeshanqureshi;770076]confusion here...you mean 3.5 sheets? (1 sheet = Front page + Back page)?
also please tell about number of words of essay?[/QUOTE]

Yes ! 3.25 sheets in other words. :)

I don't have joint hand writing and give spaces while writing. There might be maximum 120 words on one leaf.

My outline was of just five lines.

1. Introduction
2. Why do Great Nations win without fighting.
3. How to Great Nations win without fighting.
4. When do Great Nations win without fighting.
5. Conclusion

I am 99% sure that i did not do any spelling or grammar mistake. I used very natural and simple English. Didn't use high vocabulary but decorated my essay with transitional words. In-fact, while preparing for essay, i focused only on my spellings and the usage of transitional words.

[QUOTE=sheikh87;770188]

My outline was of just five lines.

1. Introduction
2. Why do Great Nations win without fighting.
3. How to Great Nations win without fighting.
4. When do Great Nations win without fighting.
5. Conclusion

.[/QUOTE]

No offense but its the most simplest and unusual outline I have ever seen :con
will glad to know what you wrote in the essay? :ninja:

[QUOTE=Sania Kahn;770199]No offense but its the most simplest and unusual outline I have ever seen :con
will glad to know what you wrote in the essay? :ninja:[/QUOTE]

For me, its the most relevant outline which encompasses every aspect of the topic. Even in 2016, i will try to address the topic clearly instead of writing lengthy and irrelevant outlines.

It's just CSS paper where you see a lot of outlines in essay. I scanned through the essay books of other national and international exams and found them totally different.


1. Introduction.
2. Meaning of Great Nations.
3. Great Nations of History.
4. Great Nations in contemporary world.
5. Characteristics of Great Nations
6. Politics in Great Nations
7. Economy in Great Nations
.
.
.

87. Meaning of Fighting
88. Fighting in History
89. Fighting in the contemporary age
.
.
124.
125. Conclusion

:con

I don't feel good doing this. Though i had a small outline and could have written more, but for me its better and unique. Maybe i have a different style. The topics in 2014 essay paper were unlike previous papers. A statement was given and you had to discuss it. And every paragraph of my paper was addressing the topic itself from different aspects.