Why do you need to add causes here? Like how does it relate to the question?

The essay would be baseless if mere mentioning reports are the order of essay....check out countries fighting war on terror from India to Nigeria from Mao rebels to boko haram the conflicts stemed from any of these causes or all of these causes and facing the aftermaths its not america Pakistan or Afghanistan or any other other facing this menace its the whole world particularly middle east and subcontinent that are facing sectarian violence owing to political tussels becoz no democratic set up ...hence proxy wars started to penetrated in order to take advantage the docile policy of any country ...check out Yemen conflict check out bok haram creation check out Taliban how they formed
...they did not hail from above immediately...unemployment created them poverty nouriseh them and of course political tussel in country whether pak or Iraq or any other country .hence started. War on terror that contributed to growing abuse of rights of humans.... to be cult we made them ....its a cyclone in which gyres are from small to big and massive...

I tried to write like that based on current scenario some outlines I mentioned I made it simple .what was in my knowlege .....baqi Allah Maliq hai

Unemployment rates are high in countries such as Greece too, but there isn't this type of violence there. The question is War on Terror has contributed to growing abuse of human rights? First of all how is being unemployed, which is a problem in many nations a cause to all this? Yes unemployment magnifies the issue but it is not the cause. War on terror occurred after 9/11, against Al Qadea to be exact at the time, which led to a marginalisations of Muslims, they were alienated and discriminated against. So War on Terror through this perspective breached one of the human rights to not be discriminated against. The way Muslisms and Islam is treated in the international arena has exacerbated the problem, leading to many more groups developing. The war in Iraq did not help as it destabilised the Middle East. But Middle East had begun to destabilise during the Cold War era.

It is a superficial argument saying unemployment etc are the causes. In fact causes are only part of the essay the main body is how war on terror contributed to abuse of human rights. And lets not pretend before 9/11 human rights were a-ok. They existed for example, gender based violence has always existed but war on terror took this to the next level. Privacy was breached before war on terror, but the breaches have become extensive since the war on terror. Right to fair trial has been abused in favour of national interest etc.

I was talking about middle east and sub continent bases on current situation .... Conditions are different in greece look at economy of greece .unemployment is not a leading cause it is one of the causes look at nigera boko haram terrorist outfit ..the mao rebels in india unemployment created due to population explosion .economic downfall ...not all people i m talking abt but some of them u cant compare fata with punjab u can compare sindh with punjab and u cant compare nigera with pak

I am really sorry, but how does this argument related to war on terror?

Look u know poor country 2 economic downfall 3 poverty 4 maximum labour power but no utilities then produce unemploynent .they take arm and fight t or join any militant group because of injustice ...... Check out pakistan blf group and taliban though produced through proxy wars had recuited many extremist like them some them became victim of injustice they didnot get any job

So when one country fights war on terror it leads to growing abuses of human rights we fight to finish terrorist but we see how theses terrorist are formed some of them are not given their right of employment

Wish maker your attempted essay is comprehensive,the following is my attempted contents of the eassy,
I attempted by adding following contents,
War on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of the human rights.
1.Introduction
Instead of eliminating terrorism,the war on terror has added fuel to the human rights abuse of the people in the region generally and in Pakistan particularly.
2.America's unilateral declaration of war on terror
3.Pre-emptive attacks: America's foreign policy
4.Iraq War
5.Afghan war: the land of human rights abuse
6.Repercussions for Pakistan
a.Drone attacks:a negative phenomenon
b.Terrorist's anti-state activities
c.Forced veil for women in Pakistan in FATA
d.Denial to rights to education to girls
7.Conclusion
I quoted the Naum Chaumisky and J.K.Cooley the author of Un-Holy war in the essay by supporting how the WoT has contributed the abuse of human rights abuse by quoting Naum Chomisky's words that the WoT had broken out the unending chain of human rights violation,and by j.k.Cooley that how WoT effects the internal political environments of the Pakistan.
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