@Anum
This is a very long outline.how many pages it took and how much time ?

[QUOTE=Anum Zara;1059426]Other things I have explained above. About conclusion and introduction, it is impossible for me to write them now. I wrote that essay more than a year ago and that too in examination hall. Also, I wrote this essay in the examination hall without any prior preparation or knowledge. This was the only essay on which it was possible for me to write. I started writing paragraphs by leaving 5-6 pages blank. I wrote introduction and outline at the end. All paragraphs were written in a simplest possible language. Just 4 to 5 sentences. Each paragraph had a introductory sentence and a concluding sentence. Body had 2-3 supporting sentences. Introduction was like executive summary that usually business students write in their projects and reports. I basically wrote summary of my entire essay in it. In conclusion I wrote that why it is absolutely necessary to get rid of colonial mentality. I also elaborated that what further consequences it can bring if we do not get rid of it.[/QUOTE]

Mam hats off! Let me congratulate you on your attaining such a high score. You are a super woman! It is impossible for me to do such exceptional job! I am really pleased to tell you that if you have had attempted your CE-18 essay like that of same style,you will get through and I am looking forward World Time Magazine to read your success story. Thumbs Up! If you could give me your email address, I will be more than happy to get my write up checked by you. Please just have a glance at my essay and give me review. I just need your 5 minutes to read my essay that I have attempted. It will be matter of honour if you give me your feedback.

[QUOTE=Mcbeth;1059453]Is this true that if the outline isn’t well written then the essay is considered fail?
I wrote a really good essay and left outline for the end but unfortunately couldn’t manage time and had to write outline in haste. Consequently, couldn’t mention arguments properly, since then essay paper has become like a nightmare for me. Is there any hope for me? The rest of my exam went pretty good so what should I expect?


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I cannot comment about your outline without actually reading it. It should be well structured and comprehensive without any mistakes. Same goes for introduction and conclusion.

[QUOTE=Breaking Bad;1059457]@Anum
This is a very long outline.how many pages it took and how much time ?[/QUOTE]
Yes, I know it was really long. It took me 3 hours. I wrote it in examination hall. Pages were above twenty but less than 25 as I did not take any extra sheet.

[QUOTE=Perfectionist;1059467]Mam hats off! Let me congratulate you on your attaining such a high score. You are a super woman! It is impossible for me to do such exceptional job! I am really pleased to tell you that if you have had attempted your CE-18 essay like that of same style,you will get through and I am looking forward World Time Magazine to read your success story. Thumbs Up! If you could give me your email address, I will be more than happy to get my write up checked by you. Please just have a glance at my essay and give me review. I just need your 5 minutes to read my essay that I have attempted. It will be matter of honour if you give me your feedback.[/QUOTE]
Thank you. :)
This time, my essay was in same style but shorter than this. 20 pages only including outline of more than 3 pages. This time I have 2, 3 spelling mistakes. Rest my essay was okay. I am really expecting passing marks if not good marks.
About checking your essay and giving my opinion, I am no expert. Many others on this forum are far better than me. My teachers point out many mistakes in my writings. However, if you still want my opinion, I can check your essay. I cannot mention my email here. If you have mentioned yours in your profle, I will contact you.

@Anum
More than 3 pages for outline is something I have never heard before.Some teacher told you to write this long outline?

[QUOTE=Breaking Bad;1059483]@Anum
More than 3 pages for outline is something I have never heard before.Some teacher told you to write this long outline?[/QUOTE]
No. It was due to my large writing. Points were not that many. I am working on my presentation skills. I also want to keep my paper neat. Speed is also very important for me. So, I practice a lot. Not just essays but other things as well. I am facing one problem that my writing is getting large. Due to this reason, I usually write 3 pages long outline and total length of my essay reaches above 20 pages. My teacher said it is okay as long as my essay is relevant.
In my experience, I have learnt that length does not matter. You can write as many pages as you want but minimum 14 pages including outline is a reasonable length. Many of you write 1800-2200 words which is less than requirements. If I have written more than that, I do not see any harm in it. The only requirement that he checks is relevant material, direct hit on topic, correct spellings and flawless structure.
I have seen students writing 2.5 to 3 pages long outlines. Mine was just a little bit more than that due to my large writing. Whoever has seen my essay practice, they have always liked it. I do make a few spelling and grammatical mistakes but length of my essays and my ideas were never criticized by anybody. As long as one writes relevant and to the point according to the demand of statement, no body can fail him or her. My marks in previous year essay are prove of that. One can pass or get 40 marks with luck once, I can accept that. Only a handful of students get above 50 marks in essay every year. I do not accept that I have passed just by luck. My essay definitely had something which attracted him.
I do not get why you people are making a big deal about it. I have just posted because I got a request for it. I have not asked anybody to follow my techniques. It is upto you people that what you want to do and what you do not want to do. Whoever thinks that my technique is good and they should follow it, they can follow it. Whoever does not think so, they can keep using their own. There is certainly no need to judge my technique. I have proved with my marks that my technique is good.

[QUOTE=Anum Zara;1059592]No. It was due to my large writing. Points were not that many. I am working on my presentation skills. I also want to keep my paper neat. Speed is also very important for me. So, I practice a lot. Not just essays but other things as well. I am facing one problem that my writing is getting large. Due to this reason, I usually write 3 pages long outline and total length of my essay reaches above 20 pages. My teacher said it is okay as long as my essay is relevant.
In my experience, I have learnt that length does not matter. You can write as many pages as you want but minimum 14 pages including outline is a reasonable length. Many of you write 1800-2200 words which is less than requirements. If I have written more than that, I do not see any harm in it. The only requirement that he checks is relevant material, direct hit on topic, correct spellings and flawless structure.
I have seen students writing 2.5 to 3 pages long outlines. Mine was just a little bit more than that due to my large writing. Whoever has seen my essay practice, they have always liked it. I do make a few spelling and grammatical mistakes but length of my essays and my ideas were never criticized by anybody. As long as one writes relevant and to the point according to the demand of statement, no body can fail him or her. My marks in previous year essay are prove of that. One can pass or get 40 marks with luck once, I can accept that. Only a handful of students get above 50 marks in essay every year. I do not accept that I have passed just by luck. My essay definitely had something which attracted him.
I do not get why you people are making a big deal about it. I have just posted because I got a request for it. I have not asked anybody to follow my techniques. It is upto you people that what you want to do and what you do not want to do. Whoever thinks that my technique is good and they should follow it, they can follow it. Whoever does not think so, they can keep using their own. There is certainly no need to judge my technique. I have proved with my marks that my technique is good.[/QUOTE]
If anyone still thinks that my essay is long, See essay outlines by Dr. Qurat ul Ain Malik (PAS). She has got 68/100 marks in essay. She has qualified CSS twice. She is in PAS.

[QUOTE=Anum Zara;1059596]If anyone still thinks that my essay is long, See essay outlines by Dr. Qurat ul Ain Malik (PAS). She has got 68/100 marks in essay. She has qualified CSS twice. She is in PAS.[/QUOTE]
Aoa. This is a very nice essay, great job :)

How did your psychology paper go?
I think the questions in part 2 subjective were quite general in nature and not like previous years psychology papers....
What are your thoughts on psychology’s second portion?

Quite Balance
 

Good balance outline.