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[QUOTE=Ur iphone;1059662]Aoa. This is a very nice essay, great job :)

How did your psychology paper go?
I think the questions in part 2 subjective were quite general in nature and not like previous years psychology papers....
What are your thoughts on psychology’s second portion?[/QUOTE]
My paper went well. Yeah I totally agree with you that questions were general and analytical type. Previous year, questions were n like that and pretty straight forward from syllabus topic. This time examiner has adopted applied approach. Actually I like these kind of questions. They are my specialty. I am kind of weak in cramming and straight forward stuff.

[QUOTE=Anum Zara;1060180]My paper went well. Yeah I totally agree with you that questions were general and analytical type. Previous year, questions were n like that and pretty straight forward from syllabus topic. This time examiner has adopted applied approach. Actually I like these kind of questions. They are my specialty. I am kind of weak in cramming and straight forward stuff.[/QUOTE]
Well said.
I am akso not good at memorizing.
I hopeall of your papers went well :)
Best of luck for the results :))

Your outline has 50 points. Each point has to be a separate paragraph in the essay. Minimum length of a paragraph has to be 80 words. So you wrote this long outline, and a 4000 word essay in 3 hours? Truly remarkable! Hope you replicate such success in 2018.

[QUOTE=Ur iphone;1060183]Well said.
I am akso not good at memorizing.
I hopeall of your papers went well :)
Best of luck for the results :))[/QUOTE]
Best of luck to you too. :)

[QUOTE=zaindy;1060209]Your outline has 50 points. Each point has to be a separate paragraph in the essay. Minimum length of a paragraph has to be 80 words. So you wrote this long outline, and a 4000 word essay in 3 hours? Truly remarkable! Hope you replicate such success in 2018.[/QUOTE]
I have not counted my points. Obviously each point was a separate paragraph. There is no minimum or maximum length of paragraphs. I did not count words of my paragraphs but apart from introductory paragraph, I am pretty sure I wrote less than 80 words per paragraph. Each paragraph just had 4-5 sentences i.e topic sentence, at least two supportive arguments and conclusion. All paragraphs were too the point. I tried not to beat about the bush in the essay. I have not counted words of entire essay but approximately they were 3500-3700 words. My writing speed is very high due to extensive practice over the years. I gives me edge sometimes.
I believe that I had sort of committed blunder by writing such a long essay in 2017. I have tried to correct it in 2018. This time I focused more on content and less on length. I am pretty hopeful about passing this time too (In Sha Allah).
Well good luck for your result.

[QUOTE=Anum Zara;1059366][CENTER][B][SIZE="5"][COLOR="Red"]Essay[/COLOR][/SIZE][/B][/CENTER]

[B][SIZE="4"][COLOR="Indigo"][CENTER]Is colonial mentality impeding Pakistan’s progress[/CENTER][/COLOR][/SIZE][/B]

[SIZE="3"][B][COLOR="Green"][CENTER]Outline[/CENTER][/COLOR][/B][/SIZE]

[B][SIZE="3"]1.Introduction[/SIZE][/B]
[B][COLOR="Red"]Thesis statement:[/COLOR][/B] Colonial mentality is absolutely impeding Pakistan’s progress

[B][SIZE="3"]2. What colonial mentality is[/SIZE][/B]
(i) Defining the term “Colony”
(ii) Defining the term “Mentality”
(ii) Interpretation of the term “Colonial mentality”

[B][SIZE="3"]3. Ruling strategies of British masters—cause of present day colonial mentality in Pakistan [/SIZE][/B]
[B](i) Political and administrative strategies[/B]
(a) Divide and rule policy
(b) Genocide of ruling and politically strong leaders along with families and relatives
(c) Kept ordinary local masses away from politics for decades
(d) Introduction of democratic system of government—Discrimination with minorities
(e) Production of administrative elite class
[B](ii) Religious strategies[/B]
(a) Campaigns of Christian Missionaries throughout India for religion conversion
(b) Targeted lowest class Hindus and Muslims by providing educational and medical benefits
[B](iii)Economic and Financial strategies[/B]
(a) Drainage of subcontinental resources and riches—retardation of economy
(b) Common man was forced to think about fetching basic necessities of life only
(c) Focus on revenue collection
[B](iv) Socio-Cultural strategies[/B]
(a) Production of class system i.e. elite, middle class and poor—rewarded on the basis of loyalty with colonial masters
(b) English perceived as language of elite and powerful ruling class was made compulsory to get high level government job
(c) No culture of freedom of expression
(d) Lack of rule of law
(e) Discriminatory judiciary
(f) No attention towards social development

[B][SIZE="3"]4. Impacts of colonial mentality-impeded progress of present day Pakistan[/SIZE][/B]
[B] (i) political and administrative impacts [/B]
(a) Elites, feudal lords and clergy consider ruling their birth right
(b) Continuous military intervention in politics—reason of failure of democratic system
(c) Administrative elite class—no relief for ordinary individual
(d) Division on the basis of religion, sects, castes, provinces, ethnicity—divide and rule policy
(e) Culture of corruption, bribery and zero accountability—retarding Pakistan
(f) Nepotism and red tapism—adherence to colonial rules and procedures
(g) Suppression of voice of common man—lack of freedom of expression leading to public aggression
[B](ii) Religious impacts[/B]
(a) Influence of clergy—illiterate people blindly follow them generation after generation
(a) Division on the basis of religion—strategy to weaken national integration
(c) Promotion of sectarianism—creation of diversion for common man to keep them away from national affairs
[B](iii) Financial and economic impacts[/B]
(a) Unfair taxation system—same tax rates for rich and poor
(b) Discriminatory financial policies make rich richer and poor poorer
(c) Money laundering—turning black money into white and hoarding it in foreign banks
(d) Focus of ruling class on increasing personal wealth—looting of public money
(e) Financially retarded economy—country running on foreign loans with deficit budget
[B](iv) Socio-Economic impacts[/B]
(a) Socially sick society with superiority complex
(b) Supremacy of English language-causing rift in national unity
(c) Reluctant to change—adaptation of modernization
(d) Partial judiciary and prolonged judicial procedure—justice delayed is justice denied
(e) Absence of rule of law—Denial of human rights to common man

[B][SIZE="3"]5. The way forward—Steps towards developed Pakistan [/SIZE][/B]
(i) Rule of law must prevail
(ii) Fair and just accountability culture
(iii) Curbing corruption, nepotism, bribery and red tapism
(iv) Independent judiciary and police
(v) No military intervention in politics
(vi) End of ruling era of feudal lords and clergy
(vii) Equal opportunities for all and sundry
(viii) Promotion of nationalism—national unity leads towards progress
(ix) End of black money businesses, money laundering and stoppage of drainage of country resources as well as financial assets
(x) Self-reliant economy
(xi) Acceptance of positive change confidently

[B][SIZE="3"]6. Conclusion[/SIZE][/B][/QUOTE]
Then in which subject you flunked? Anum Zara?

[QUOTE=saddam hassain;1062520]Then in which subject you flunked? Anum Zara?[/QUOTE]
Public Administration.

Remarkable. is it possible for me to mail you my outline for the checkup?
Thanks:wait

@Anum Zara
:clap:clapYour outline along with strategy and tips are more than remarkable.
I am your super junior, and probably give my CSS attempt in 2020.Now please let me know, that according to points in the outline we have to write a separate paragraphs. I have found some bold characters along with simple ones in your first post of the thread. I want to ask, that may we have to put headings inside the essay while writing it, and if it is then may headings should be only on the place of bold letters or along with the every point and every paragraph?
Respected senior, i shall be greatly thank full to you.
I am waiting for you reply anxiously.