Let's prepare Essays
 

Essay writing practice for CSS/PMS/PCS.

How
 

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[QUOTE=MMani;1091857]How?:angle[/QUOTE]
You can write expansion, short essay, and outline of essay. Moreover, you can ask any question related to essay writing.

Outline - Pakistan not a poor country but poor in management
 

[B]Pakistan not a poor country but poor in management[/B]

[B][I]1. Introduction[/I][/B]
2. [I][B]Potentials of Pakistan which make Pakistan not a poor country.[/B][/I]
i. Pakistan the land of four powerful ethnic groups – a challenge to rivals
ii. Pakistan rich in natural and mineral resources
iii. Pakistan the fertile land – a economic potential to export
iv. Pakistan the gateway to Central Asia
v. CPEC- the corridor to Middle East
vi. Pakistan the neighbor of two largest markets of Asia
vii. Some world’s largest glacier are in Pakistan
viii. Northern Area of Pakistan is the tourist place
ix. Young population is a great resource of Pakistan
x. Powerful army is a great challenge to adversaries
xi. Deepest sea routes are in Pakistan
xii. Pakistan is the only Muslim Atomic country
3. [B][I]Poor management of Pakistan that makes Pakistan poor.[/I][/B]
i. Bad Governance
ii. Political Instability
iii. Lack of Accountability
iv. Absence of Rule of Law
v. Lack of far-sighted Financial policies
vi. Lack of literacy and technical education
vii. Lack of true leadership to lead Pakistan
viii. Flawed Foreign Policy to counter national interests worldwide.
ix. Lack of independent judiciary
x. Lack of separation of power
xi. Lack of land and agricultural Reforms
xii. Lack of water reserves to conserve water.
xiii. Lack of long-term energy conservation and production policies
[B][I]4. Conclusion[/I][/B]

Role of Youth in rejecting Extremism (Essay)
 

Outline

1. Introduction

Thesis Statement: There is an immense role of youth in curbing extremist tendencies from society.

2. What is extremism?

3. Factors driving youth towards extremism

3.1 Misinterpretation of religion
3.2 Political instability
3.3 Economic disparity
3.4 Social injustices
3.5 Poverty and Unemployment
3.6 Foreign agenda

4. Role of youth in rejecting extremism

4.1 Awareness campaign
4.2 Youth engagement programs
4.3 Dialogue among different shades of youth
4.4 Inter-faith debate
4.5 Support for cultural diversity
4.6 Role of young moderate religious scholars

5. Conclusion.

[QUOTE=Innocent Hafeez;1091881]Outline

1. Introduction

Thesis Statement: There is an immense role of youth in curbing extremist tendencies from society.

2. What is extremism?

3. Factors driving youth towards extremism

3.1 Misinterpretation of religion
3.2 Political instability
3.3 Economic disparity
3.4 Social injustices
3.5 Poverty and Unemployment
3.6 Foreign agenda

4. Role of youth in rejecting extremism

4.1 Awareness campaign
4.2 Youth engagement programs
4.3 Dialogue among different shades of youth
4.4 Inter-faith debate
4.5 Support for cultural diversity
4.6 Role of young moderate religious scholars

5. Conclusion.[/QUOTE]

Role of youth in rejecting extremism needs to be mention first. Factors driving youth towards extremism need to be written after the Role of youth in rejecting extremism.

[QUOTE=Saba Arif;1091889]Role of youth in rejecting extremism needs to be mention first. Factors driving youth towards extremism need to be written after the Role of youth in rejecting extremism.[/QUOTE]

Yes it is. But i think cause should come first, because role is like recommenadations that usually follow the cause. For instance, if you on terrorism you first suggest causes behind it, then impacts and solutions in the end.

I am also posting my Introduction to the aforementioned essay. Kindly, check it too and point out mistakes if you find any.

Essay

A youth driven towards extremism is a youth without a clear idea of its values and identity.
_ COAS QAMAR JAWED BAJWA

Given the involvement of educated youths in recent terrorist activities across the world, especially in the West, it becomes obvious that extremism is rapidly increasing among youth segment of society. Even in Pakistan, incidents such as the arrest of university students form Karachi and other parts of the nation in suspect of links with an insurgent group, mob lynching of Mashall khan at the hands of his fellow students and the case of Naureen Laghari, a medical student, who was alleged to have joined the Islamic state (IS), substantiate the entanglement of youth sector in radical activities. This is a colossal loss for countries like Pakistan where education is already dwindling. Under this condition, the role of the youth segment, especially educated ones, is of paramount importance to cope with this threat.

[QUOTE=Innocent Hafeez;1091906]I am also posting my Introduction to the aforementioned essay. Kindly, check it too and point out mistakes if you find any.

Essay

A youth driven towards extremism is a youth without a clear idea of its values and identity.
_ COAS QAMAR JAWED BAJWA

Given the involvement of educated youths in recent terrorist activities across the world, especially in the West, it becomes obvious that extremism is rapidly increasing among youth segment of society. Even in Pakistan, incidents such as the arrest of university students form Karachi and other parts of the nation in suspect of links with an insurgent group, mob lynching of Mashall khan at the hands of his fellow students and the case of Naureen Laghari, a medical student, who was alleged to have joined the Islamic state (IS), substantiate the entanglement of youth sector in radical activities. This is a colossal loss for countries like Pakistan where education is already dwindling. Under this condition, the role of the youth segment, especially educated ones, is of paramount importance to cope with this threat.[/QUOTE]

Youth is the general word so don't use 'youths'.
I will suggest you to write short and simple sentences. There are many logical errors. Focus on grammar-part and sentence structure.

[QUOTE=Saba Arif;1091916]Youth is the general word so don't use 'youths'.
I will suggest you to write short and simple sentences. There are many logical errors. Focus on grammar-part and sentence structure.[/QUOTE]

Yes, understood now.