hello every one ..below is th eoutline i have made for the very first tym on the topic"women discrimintation in pak" i know it wd not b enf n require much more..... ,so plz suggest me and advise me accordingly...
*what is geneder discrimination?
*reasons of it
*what islam says/does it allow
*its overall impact on pakistan
*comaprision of discrimination in pak and other countries
*conclusion
plz check...

as i am not very good in this thing but let me try....

when you write about what does Islam says or does it allow point...than it will become hard for you to write about discrimination in Pakistan....because these two are the two different ways in opposite direction which can never meet...keep this in mind...

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hmmmm..u ryt ...plz add some points

first of all its bit short length, you have to add some more points
like start from womans status in islam
then in sunna, how Quran guided us about this matter then gives example of other countries, pakistan as a islam state what should do for the eliminating this problem, womans education, and many more aspect can cover this topic.... and the so on....... and concentrate on length

I made some simple outline one womans status in islam
on link
http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...lam-essay.html
not a same topic but can clearify your idea

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its real hard thing for me to prepare an outline...but will do that tomorrow Insha Allah....having done some brainstorming

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Follow the very basic pattern...
1.Introduction
2.Causes
3.Effects
4.Remedies
5.Conclusion
Now, try to find the possible introduction defination meaning etc for the topic... ur topic is descriptive, so causes can b developed so easily. Apply the basic pattern and enrich it wid some sub headings....all done...your outline is a bit up to the mark if fabricated with some good data...Keep doin practice u r gona make it for sure...

and one suggestion never try to be partial in your essay never ever..scrupulously, avoid it....it won't in earnest be formed a welcome move by the examiner...

hey ur outline is tooo short n insufficient...

The best advise I can give you, or anyone else, on this matter is that you shouldn't make your essays so structured and 'formal' that they come off as robotic.

Remember, the whole purpose of an essay is to entertain the reader. You can do that by expressing (even your mediocre) ideas in flowery language or you may add some interesting notions and what not.

I see that a lot of people are worried about the facts that their essays would contain, how they would almost chronologically go from point A to point Z and how they'd give it a proper structure. That's not a very good approach. Fine, you'll pass but you won't get more than 50-60 marks.

Read essays in Time magazine, Dawn, Images, etc. They don't employ the tools that we're made to use and their essays are infinitely more interesting.

If the examiner is entertained, and at the same time convinced by your reasoning, he will give you good marks. If you bore him, he'll pass you but don't expect excellent marks.

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hi,,, i think ur outline is very short and needs a number of points to be added.... My outline would be like this:

 Introduction

• what is geneder discrimination?

 Condition of women in Pre-Islamic Era

•  Women rights in Hinduism
•  Women rights in Judeo-Christian

 Islam and women rights

•  Protection
•  Marriage issues
•  Inheritance
•  Education and health
•  Overall status

 Conditions in Pakistan

•  Constitution of 1973 and men/women rights

 Negative side or discrimination in Pakistan

•  Hudood ordinances, Qazaf laws
•  Swara, Vaani, Karokari, Marriage to the Holly Quran
•  Mutilation, acid throwing, kidnapping, trafficking

 Positive side in Pakistan

•  In politics
•  In Forces (PAF, POLICE, Army)
•  In Hospitals, schools, business etc..

 Conclusion:


It is a very sensitive issue and needs to be researched well before writing an essay on it.....

regards..........

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ur outline having just few point why dont u add subpoints of everypoint.... i think nobody is gonna bother reading complete essay if u've a detailed proper outline n a good startting paragraph