plz check it,, my essay in CSS 2012
 

Energy Crisis in Pakistan: Causes and Consequences

1.Introduction

2.Causes

a.apathy of govt:
b. provincial mistrust
c. indian factor
d.water crisis
e.circular debt
f.PEPCO under performance
g. gas shortages
h. pipelines(TAPI, IP) not materialized
i.wastage of energy
j.tranmission losses
k.power theft
l.slitting of dams
m.population demands
n.tranportation
o.non-harnessing of natural resources


3.Consequences

a.social unrest
b.domestic problems
c.political intolerance
d.threatening of democracy
e.economic loss
f.agriculture and industrial sector low performance

4.Remedies

a.conservation of energy
b.policy making
c.dams construction
d.deslitting of dams
e.materialization of pipelines
f.nuclear energy
g.wind energy
h.coal

5. conclusion

intro of my essay::
Energy crisis is one of the serious problems which Pakistan is facing at present.the energy shortfall fluctuates between 4000MW-9000MW. this situation has arisen because of apathy of government,provincial mistrusts and lack of conservative measures.the energy crisis has brought serious consequences which have affected the political,social and economic sectors of our country. To prevent these adverse effects we should adopt conservative measures and produce energy through alternative resources.



plz tell is it worth passing??

what are the sources of energy ? have a look on it. they are renwabl.and non.renewabl
add facts and figures.and please rearange the order of outline.mention utapped resources also. hum kis alternate pe switch karen jo humen ziada faida day.sirf pak nhe horha pori world suffer kar rhe ha.usko bhe add kren.
any how a good atempt:) all the best

ms hijaab, essay is about causes and conquences and i think one shouldnot add methods to produce energy, i e renewable and nonrenewable. It s my opinion and may be wrong. Overall it is a good outline if explored well then good marks can be attained

Dear
 

dear ur intro is some what worthy but u mentioned that the shortfall is between 4000 to 9000.while the real shotfall is around 4000 megawatt.
2.causes

Bad governance
lack of trust between federal and provinces over untapped natural resources.
delay oil and gas payment to IPP's.are further key to causes.Therefore u also mentioned that transportation is also factor of cuses.While it is not.



3.Consequences
increasing Unemployment
FDI flow out
heavy relied on food import and reduction of export,are key as well.

4.Remedies
good governance
Timely payment to oil companies
i.focusing on renewable resources on immediate basis and
and construction of Basha Dam particulary with capacity of 4400 megawatt.
others generally,
ii,solar energy,geothermal.
Utilization of Thar Coal for electricity but mention only coal is not quite well.
and 2012 attemt.almost all candidate tried this topic.Wish u all the best

Essay on energy crisis in Pakistan
 

Dear!

In the topic 'Energy' is not limited only to electricity. It extends to natural gas, CNG, coal and petroleum as well.

Many a candidates must have attempted the essay but may have overlooked the above point in a hurry.

However, lets hope for the best.

Regards,

what should i have written in cng, natural gas and petroleum??

my point of PEPCO and circular debt was related to oil.... is it ok or not??

thnx wasim for ur worthy comments

should we had to focus more on oil and gas??

Essay on energy crisis in Pakistan
 

[QUOTE=samreen khan 36;425600]what should i have written in cng, natural gas and petroleum??

my point of PEPCO and circular debt was related to oil.... is it ok or not??[/QUOTE]

Dear Samreen!

I think one must have focussed on CNG boom (Pakistan is largest consumer of CNG with 2.5 millions of vehicles converted to CNG as a fuel). For this is the very reason why our Industry is continuously suffering.

Other enegy resources must have been elaborated in this fashion.

Regards,

energy crisis
 

ms samreen according to my knowhow essay was on energy crisis and major focus was on shortage of electricity and its implications. It is a major national issue and examiner wanted ur comment. So u dont worry. And onething more english essay is a tool to know ur correct english level. If u use correct sentences with line and length then u will definitely pass so have faith in allah and pray for ur success.

Samreen it is surely worth passing.. well done and now depends on felicity of expressions.. How you linked sentences after sentences n paras after paras....

[QUOTE=Arslan Shaukat;425624]Dear Samreen!

I think one must have focussed on CNG boom (Pakistan is largest consumer of CNG with 2.5 millions of vehicles converted to CNG as a fuel). For this is the very reason why our Industry is continuously suffering.

Other enegy resources must have been elaborated in this fashion.

Regards,[/QUOTE]


yup you are right..it means i went missed this point..
would it affect whole essay i mean will it give a negative impression to the examiner??