Good try dear, try to align the outline and add some more points.

I had presented the topic somewhere at beginning of last year and had shared the essay at [url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compulsory-subjects/essay/essays/46177-energy-crisis-pakistan.html[/url] . you may like to have a look to it as well..

regards

Dear all
I would like to share my experience,
According to a renowned teacher of essay, It does not require
1. History
2. Philosophy
3. Generalization
(In short, No INTRODUCTION)
Come to the issue directly & main emphasis should be on the required statement.
We were not supposed to give suggestions.
I'll try to post Outline in my spare time.

@saqib and samreen
I followed one principle in my first attempt i.e to remain relevant that's why I didn't extend it too long .I included solutions of the problem because its seems odd to me that one is explaining an issue at length and gives no solution to it.

@ M T S AWAN
Dear you may right but I agree to Ghazanfar that you included many irrelevant things.I think the part of your essay above causes of crisis is irrelevant but I may wrong also.

We must remember 1 thing......FPSC has no specific criteria for checking. Its ur LUCK.:haha

[QUOTE=muddasar ali;427530]@ M T S AWAN
Dear you may right but I agree to Ghazanfar that you included many irrelevant things.I think the part of your essay above causes of crisis is irrelevant but I may wrong also.[/QUOTE]

Dear actually it depends upon the requirement of the party whom you are presenting the matter/essay. It was the requirement of my invigilator to write causes etc thats why it was done.

[QUOTE=Ghazanfar Ali;427537]We must remember 1 thing......FPSC has no specific criteria for checking. Its ur LUCK.:haha[/QUOTE]

Yes there is no hard and fast rule for essay checking , luck matters a lot... I have seen gold medalist of english literature from g.c. failing in english essay..... A greater portion of css relates to luck...

[QUOTE=Muhammad T S Awan;427541]Yes there is no hard and fast rule for essay checking , luck matters a lot... I have seen gold medalist of english literature from g.c. failing in english essay..... A greater portion of css relates to luck...[/QUOTE]

My friends got 62 & 41 respectively in their 1st attempt. Both of them are fail in Esssay in their 2nd attempt. What does it depicts?

Unpredictable essay scores!
 

Dear!

I think that being a gold medalist in English does not certify that one can also pass CSS Essay paper with flying colors.

This is because one gets reward of what he or she has put there in answer book. Organization of data, clarity and relevance to the topic are the tools required to pass this paper. Well structured outline and clear handwriting are also necessary.

If somebody is very good at English but he or she fails to utilize the three hour time effectively then he or she can not succeed.

FPSC is a very organized institution and there must be a set criteria for paper checking. Please don't lose hope and pray to Allah for success.

Regards,

[QUOTE=Arslan Shaukat;428427]FPSC is a very organized institution and there must be a set criteria for paper checking. Please don't lose hope and pray to Allah for success.[/QUOTE]

We can only struggle & the results are in the hands of ALLAH almighty.