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[tazeen22]

SOME CHILDREN START SCHOOL WHEN THEY ARE 7 YEARS OLD, WHILE OTHER’S START AT THE AGE OF 4. WHAT COULD BE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF STATRTING EARLY (AGE 4).

Some argue that the parents should send their children to school at a young age while others disagree. In this essay, I will examine the arguments for and against the children entering school early.

Starting early has many advantages. First, it can really help the children’s emotional development. Children at school meet new people and make new friends. Away from their family, they learn to be responsible and independent. Secondly, an early start also helps the child to grow academically and intellectually. Good schools offer many new experiences and be more stimulating than many home environments. Finally, it’s easier for parents if children can start school early. They can do more work, have more leisure time, and be less tired when their children come back from school.

However, there are some disadvantages of going to school early. First of all, the surrounding environment can give children the bad influence. Because the children are curious about anything new and they like to imitate the behavior of adults and others. Another point is they get frustrated easily and feel insecure in the classroom. The younger children find difficult to keep abreast of what is taugt and slower to absorb as compared to their old peers. Lastly, it is even more challenging to teach the children for teachers. Early school goers sometimes do the opposite of what is asked and have rapid mood swings. As a result, it is not a good idea to have early entry into school.

To summarize, there are plenty of good reasons for and against starting an early schooling. However, I strongly believe that the parents should not send their children to school too early because they are too young to solve the problems independently.

[adeel abdullah]

dear, your attempt of essay on, "education of earyl age", is quite positive but still you need to get advice from the senoirs members of the css forum. however i am trying to add few points here to your essay to make it more stronger and impressive.



according to j j rousseaue, the children should be sent to school for formal education not earlier than 7 years age. according to his philosophy, the man learns more from his environment rather than at school and institution. the children should be allowed freely to move around and discover their environment. in this way, they will get deeper and more comprehensive understanding and knowdege of things they see, observe and think about.

according to my opion being a student of m phil in education, the following are the marits and demarits of early education.

advantages
a. students develop good habits.
b. moral development
c. social development
d. psychological development
e. it promotes scientific way of thinking in the students in their young age.
f. development of cognitive, affective and psychomotor skills and abilities
g. solid and strong foundation at start of education career.
exlaining all points with little details

disadvantages of early education
a.loss of freedom of the young students
b. early education is not more than cramming and ratalization
c. bad impacts on the health of the students by keeping them over-burdened
d. a wasteful investment for getting by the parents.
e. lack of parents supervision creates many other complex problems.
f. after attending school, they are short of time to play and observe their sorroundings.


there are so many other points to be worthy of mention here.

[Bilal Hassan]

Originally Posted by tazeen22

SOME CHILDREN START SCHOOL WHEN THEY ARE 7 YEARS OLD, WHILE OTHER’S START AT THE AGE OF 4. WHAT COULD BE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF STATRTING EARLY (AGE 4).

Some argue that the parents should send their children to school at a young age while others disagree. In this essay, I will examine the arguments for and against the children entering school early.

Starting early has many advantages. First, it can really help the children’s emotional development. Children at school meet new people and make new friends. Away from their family, they learn to be responsible and independent. Secondly, an early start also helps the child to grow academically and intellectually. Good schools offer many new experiences and be more stimulating than many home environments. Finally, it’s easier for parents if children can start school early. They can do more work, have more leisure time, and be less tired when their children come back from school.

However, there are some disadvantages of going to school early. First of all, the surrounding environment can give children the bad influence. Because the children are curious about anything new and they like to imitate the behavior of adults and others. Another point is they get frustrated easily and feel insecure in the classroom. The younger children find difficult to keep abreast of what is taugt and slower to absorb as compared to their old peers. Lastly, it is even more challenging to teach the children for teachers. Early school goers sometimes do the opposite of what is asked and have rapid mood swings. As a result, it is not a good idea to have early entry into school.

To summarize, there are plenty of good reasons for and against starting an early schooling. However, I strongly believe that the parents should not send their children to school too early because they are too young to solve the problems independently.

we always practice for the real thing, the purpose of practice is to make yourself ready for the real thing. You are attempting an essay but if you don't practice in the same way as you will have to write in exam hall, the suggestions we will give you won't be much helpful...so brother make a comprehensive outline which is the quintessence of a quality essay, though you can write just introduction for evaluation of your composition.....

This would be just like that you have to swim in a river but you practice in bathtub.... hope you din't mind, it was on a lighter note.....

I give you 2.5 marks for that attempt, that i only gave because you asked for that in the subject otherwise i am not an authority

[sajidnuml]

Originally Posted by tazeen22

SOME CHILDREN START SCHOOL WHEN THEY ARE 7 YEARS OLD, WHILE OTHER’S START AT THE AGE OF 4. WHAT COULD BE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF STATRTING EARLY (AGE 4).

Some argue that the parents should send their children to school at a young age while others disagree. In this essay, I will examine the arguments for and against the children entering school early.

Starting early has many advantages. First, it can really help the children’s emotional development. Children at school meet new people and make new friends. Away from their family, they learn to be responsible and independent. Secondly, an early start also helps the child to grow academically and intellectually. Good schools offer many new experiences and be more stimulating than many home environments. Finally, it’s easier for parents if children can start school early. They can do more work, have more leisure time, and be less tired when their children come back from school.

However, there are some disadvantages of going to school early. First of all, the surrounding environment can give children the bad influence. Because the children are curious about anything new and they like to imitate the behavior of adults and others. Another point is they get frustrated easily and feel insecure in the classroom. The younger children find difficult to keep abreast of what is taugt and slower to absorb as compared to their old peers. Lastly, it is even more challenging to teach the children for teachers. Early school goers sometimes do the opposite of what is asked and have rapid mood swings. As a result, it is not a good idea to have early entry into school.

To summarize, there are plenty of good reasons for and against starting an early schooling. However, I strongly believe that the parents should not send their children to school too early because they are too young to solve the problems independently.

Your introduction is excellent as it has the potential to grab the attention of reader. secondly, you are very much clear as to what you are going to do next. Avoid the highlighted words and sentences. be to the point and never be personal. You will pass essay Insha'Allah. 7 out of 9

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Originally Posted by tazeen22

SOME CHILDREN START SCHOOL WHEN THEY ARE 7 YEARS OLD, WHILE OTHER’S START AT THE AGE OF 4. WHAT COULD BE THE ADVANTAGES AND DISADVANTAGES OF STATRTING EARLY (AGE 4).

Some argue that the parents should send their children to school at a young age while others disagree. In this essay, I will examine the arguments for and against the children entering school early.

Starting early has many advantages. First, it can really help the children’s emotional development. Children at school meet new people and make new friends. Away from their family, they learn to be responsible and independent. Secondly, an early start also helps the child to grow academically and intellectually. Good schools offer many new experiences and be more stimulating than many home environments. Finally, it’s easier for parents if children can start school early. They can do more work, have more leisure time, and be less tired when their children come back from school.

However, there are some disadvantages of going to school early. First of all, the surrounding environment can give children the bad influence. Because the children are curious about anything new and they like to imitate the behavior of adults and others. Another point is they get frustrated easily and feel insecure in the classroom. The younger children find difficult to keep abreast of what is taugt and slower to absorb as compared to their old peers. Lastly, it is even more challenging to teach the children for teachers. Early school goers sometimes do the opposite of what is asked and have rapid mood swings. As a result, it is not a good idea to have early entry into school.

To summarize, there are plenty of good reasons for and against starting an early schooling. However, I strongly believe that the parents should not send their children to school too early because they are too young to solve the problems independently.

Nice attempt ...You have the potential to pass the essay paper..best of luck and keep practising

[tazeen22]

Some people think that hardworking and determination is the key factors for being succesful in the life, other people feel that other factors are important. Discuss both sides, what is your opinion?

Every individual aspires to be successful in life. But, the success is influenced by various parameters. Often there are different opinions as to what are the key factors that constitute success. According to some, it is hard work and determination but some feel that other factors are also important.

Success does not come by chance. It happens by continued focus and sincere efforts of an individual. For instance, to be a good dancer one has to practice it regularly. These factors help a person to nurture and enhance his or her talent and skills and also help build self confidence which is crucial ingredient of victory.

On the other hand, the other factors like good health, financial stability, right attitude, opportunity and luck also are needed. For example, no matter how hard the dancer practices the dance, unless he or she gets the platform to showcase the talent his hard work has no meaning. Therefore, the aspects like these also help an individual in achieving success.

Therefore, though hard work is important to polish the skills of an individual without right opportunities, good health and financial stability one does not get a chance to showcase the talent and skills, and hence cannot become successful. After thinking over all the factors including hard work, determination, good health and opportunities all the factors play vital role in the road to success.