[QUOTE=amannan;659784]Thanks, I will try to hone my writing skills.
I will give my 1st attempt in 2017 after completing my bachelors, what about you?[/QUOTE]

Thats good dear, you have ample time. Prepare at snail pace. Best of luck..

[B]Essay no.3[/B]
[B][SIZE="4"][B][COLOR="DarkGreen"][B]Beggars cannot be choosers[/B][/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/B]

[B][COLOR="Navy"][B]1.INTRODUCTION

2.WHY BEGGARS CAN NOT BE CHOOSERS ?

3.BROAD EXAMPLE OF BEGGING[/B][/COLOR][/B]
[B][I]a)-Pakistan is Beggar in front of world[/I][/B]

[B][COLOR="Navy"]4.PAKISTAN BEGGING AND INTERNATIONAL REPUTATION

5.CAUSES OF BEGGING FROM OTHER COUNTRIES [/COLOR][/B]
-Economic Crisis
-Natural Disasters
-Health Crisis
-Corruption
-Energy Crisis
-Overpopulation
-Illiteracy
-bad governance
-undemocratic practices
-Clash among institutions
-Inefficient role of politicians
-Foreign Hands

[COLOR="Navy"][B]6.SUGGESTIONS FOR PAKISTAN TO STAND ON HER OWN FEET[/B][/COLOR]
-Education imparting to the every corner of the country
-Honest leadership is the need of hour
-Consistency of Democratic governments
-Consensus among the politicians on national interest
-National resources should be used productively
-Strong enough economic policy with both short and long term policies
-Cooperation and coordination with neighboring and western countries
-Getting rid of terrorism
-Foreign policy should be done according to national interests
-Loan Policies should be according to our national interest
-World Bank, IMF’s influence should be demolished by any cost
-Media’s effective role in boosting patriotism
-Role of individual for the betterment of our country
-Indeed, Beggars can not be choosers
-If Beggars work hard sincerely, they can get rid of Begging and then they can be choosers

[COLOR="DarkSlateBlue"][B]7.CONCLUSION[/B][/COLOR]



[B]1.Introduction[/B]
Since the inception of Pakistan, due to insufficient policies and incapable leaders, our country has been begging in front of the western world. As a matter of fact, Pakistan has increased her reputation in begging and has broken the world records. According to the transparency report, Pakistan's number in corruption has been on the apex since a decade, mostly politicians have looted our country with their both hands. Apart from that according to UNDP report another record has been made that despite of having millions of dolers, we are unable to achieve our goals regarding poverty alleviation, health and human discrimination. Fuel the fire, the education rate of our country has been far behind as compare to so-called India, Bangladesh and Srilankan's educations. Terrorism has been hydra headed monster, the business communities are leaving this country to find another heaven abroad for their business activities. Besides, political actors are another problem, they do not work with consensus, many instances can be described even from the current developments e.g corruption scandals, land mafia, extortion and many more. Moreover, our Agra-Industrial sectors are unable to produce the products up to the mark due to energy crisis. More or less, in every corner of the country, people are unable to live their lives peacefully, besides, the rate of poverty is going upward day by day. That is why, in such conditions, our country beg from the other countries. IMF and WB have always been exploiting the severe conditions of our country. Indeed, their plans are their own interests but not for our own national interest. Western world has nearly been our master, every citizen of our country has been beggar and the western world says that we Pakistan-so called beggars can not be choosers. Therefore, it is the need of hour to take considerable steps in order to get rid of such so-called titles. Because, we can not be beggars, we being Muslim have to work with the cooperation and coordination with the Muslim Ummah. Besides, we have to sort out the loopholes, we have to crush the hurdles which are on the way of our betterment regarding socioeconomic and political fronts. Indeed, we are facing severe crisis, and are considered beggars but we can get rid of it if we work hard according to our national interest.




[B]Conclusion.[/B]
To the conclude, as a matter of fact, our country is facing many problems. She is assumed as a beggar, because she is bound to be a beggar before the world. But with the hard work, sincerity and coordination, we can do miracles. It is the need of hour to utilize our own national resources effectively. We have abundance of National resources, and we can even help out other countries if we manage our country rightly. Besides, transparent and pragmatic policies will do miracles in creating our country enough good at both economy and politics. In this regard, politicians, stake holders and citizens have to be understood that without cooperation and coordination we can not do any thing for the betterment of our country. Undoubtedly, we are facing sever problems and are bound to be beggars before the westerns but the time will come when we will be the super power of the world like china and America.


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Please pin point my mistakes, productive criticism would be appreciated.



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[B][SIZE="4"][B][COLOR="Blue"][B]Democracy is a Culture rather than process[/B][/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/B]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"][B]1. INTRODUCTION

2. WHAT IS DEMOCRACY

3. COMPONENTS OF DEMOCRACY[/B][/COLOR][/B]
[B][I]a. Public representation
b. Public involvement in governments
c. Transparency before the people
d. Welfare of the people [/I][/B]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]4. DEMOCRACY AS A CULTURE IN THE DEVELOPED COUNTRIES[/COLOR][/B]
[B][I]a. Europe
b. America
c. And Some other Countries
5. DEMOCRACY AS A PROCESS
a. Developing countries
b. Example of Pakistan[/I][/B]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]6. DISTINGUISH BETWEEN CULTURE AND PROCESS[/COLOR][/B]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]7. WHY DEMOCRACY IS FAILED IN PAKISTAN DESPITE OF BEING A PROCESS [/COLOR][/B]
[B][I]a. Dictatorships
b. Undemocratic norms
c. Inefficient role of Institutions
d. Clash among institutions
e. Social Causes
f. Economic Causes
g. International Causes[/I][/B]

[COLOR="DarkRed"][B]8. SUGGESTIONS FOR THE CONSISTENCY OF DEMOCRATIC PROCESS[/B][/COLOR]
[B][I]a. Strong leadership
b. Consensus among the institutions
c. Political will power and implementation of policies
d. Role of institutions
e. Media’s Role
f. Public’s Role [/I][/B]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]9. CONCLUSION[/COLOR][/B]


[B][COLOR="Blue"][B]“Democracy is a crop to be civilized, not a mere software to be installed like a windows XP” [/B][/COLOR][/B]

[B][COLOR="DarkRed"]INTRODUCTION[/COLOR][/B]


[B]
Introduction [/B]
In western countries the democracy has been flourished to the great extent. America, Europe and many other countries which are called developed countries, they have done miracles due to the culture of democracy. Now they believe in democracy, they have been on the apex in every sphere e.g they are good at economy, political norms, and in their national issues. They appreciate public opinion and devise their policies according to the public demand and national interest. On the other hand, more or less Asian countries have nearly been failed to uphold the democratic process. They are unable to control the undemocratic practices. The third world countries like Pakistan, which is facing a lot of sever problems due to undemocratic process. As a matter of fact, since the inception of Pakistan the democratic process has not been flourished and upholder due to many reasons. If had our country believed in democratic culture, today we would have not been facing so-called problems. Despite of knowing that the democratic culture is highly better, we have not adapted it to the great extent. Indeed, democratic culture is much better than that of mere its process, because with the democratic culture, every body can have his/her own due status in the country. Because, democracy is by the people of the people and for the people. Hence, it is clear that the democratic culture must be opted rather than mere its process in our country.


[B]Conclusion [/B]
To the sum up, democratic culture can do miracles, infact we have many instances in front of us e.g western world has improved its conditions. It was the time when western world was far behind than that of Asian countries in every thing, due to insufficient democratic process we are far behind today. Therefore, it is the need of our to do politics according to the democratic culture and its tendency. No doubt the process of democracy is awful but it would be a culture if we take part in the developments and making our country holy from the undemocratic practices. In this regards, perfect and strong politicians are required as said above and every citizen has to perform his role in creating democratic culture.

[B]
Please members check out my essays….

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[B]CSS Essay 2012[/B]
[B][SIZE="4"][B][COLOR="Purple"][B]The Suffering soul in the scientific age[/B][/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/B]


[B][COLOR="Indigo"][B]1. INTRODUCTION

2. PHILOSOPHY OF SOUL

3. MATERIALISTIC WORLD

4. WAR BETWEEN SOUL AND MATERIALISTIC WORLD

5. SUFFERING SOUL IN THE CONTEMPORARY WORLD

6. CAUSES OF SUFFERING SOUL IN NUCLEAR ERA[/B][/COLOR][/B]
[B][COLOR="Blue"]a. Social Causes [/COLOR][/B]
i. Materialism tendency
ii. Immorality
iii. Lack of mutual coordination and cooperation
iv. Different sects
v. Extremism “people are ready to kill or be killed”
vi. Lack of education
vii. Impurity of souls due to immoral attitudes
viii. Lust for sex
[B][COLOR="Blue"]b. Religious Causes [/COLOR][/B]
i. Away from the religions
ii. According to Mysticism “Nafs” “body” and “Soul’s imbalanced role
iii. Intolerance among religions
iv. Blasphemy laws
[B][COLOR="Blue"]c. Political Causes[/COLOR][/B]
i. Undemocratic norms
ii. Desire for Power
iii. Desire for Money
[B][COLOR="Blue"]d. International Causes [/COLOR][/B]
i. Western dominancy
ii. Western and Turkish dramas
iii. Over modernization
[B][COLOR="Indigo"]
7. CONTEMPORARY ERA'S IMPACT ON SOUL[/COLOR][/B]
a. Far reaching psychological impact
b. Unsatisfactory
c. Increasing the number of suicides
d. Increasing the number of rapes
i. A girl 6 girl rapped
ii. Gang Rapping cases
e. Drug addiction
f. Terrorism, extremism and militancy
g. Wars
i. World War I and II
ii. Indopak Wars
iii. Turk wars (example from Sultan Sulaiman)
iv. Anglo wars
v. War on terror
h. Impurity of soul and suffering from nuclear era

[B][COLOR="Purple"]8. SUGGESTIONS[/COLOR][/B]
a. Getting rid of materialistic ideology
b. Spiritualization
c. Mediation
d. Psychological Therapies
e. Ideology of Love and beloved
f. Islam should be followed to purify soul
g. Mysticism-“Wahdatul Shahood & Wahdatul Wajood”
h. Humanity “Kar bhala to ho Bhala”
i. Balance between modern and Islamic education
i. Last Prophet (PBUH), Other prominent prophets and Hatim Tai’s ideology of life
j. Mutual coordination and cooperation
k. Self motivation

[COLOR="Indigo"][B]9. CONCLUSION[/B][/COLOR]





[B]Introduction [/B]
In the contemporary world, human beings’ souls are suffering. Due to advancement in technology we have got every thing, we are spending our lives luxuriously but lack in satisfying our souls. However, with the advancement of technology and scientific age, we are going far away from ourselves; we are unable to find ourselves in this world. More or less, in this world, we are not satisfied due to suffering from the soul. We are unable to look into our heart’s inner core to justify its needs. As a matter of fact, despite of having every thing e.g airplane, motor car, radio, computer, and satellite we are unable to satisfy our souls. Our souls are suffered a lot. Besides, World War I and II are the biggest examples; many people were killed in these wars. Due to lust of power, money and sex, human being forgets his soul’s voice. That is why,like a fish out of water our souls are suffering. That is why it is the need of our to purify our souls. Without the purification of soul in this scientific age, we can not live our life peacefully.


[B]Conclusion [/B]
Conclusively, in this nuclear age, we have got every thing, but we lack in the purification of our soul. In this regard, we have to try our best to satisfy our soul. We must not have to let our soul suffered by any cost. In addition to this, science and soul have to live together and work simultaneously. It can be said that a person who has satisfied and purified his soul that means he has won every thing in his life. If a human does not purify his soul, then the difference between human and inhuman will not be distinguished. That is why the face of our beautiful world has been bearing awful injustice, unfair, and illegitimate incidents. Therefore, we have to get rid of materialistic ideology and focus our souls in order to live our lives peacefully without any suffering of our souls in this nuclear world.


[B]Please assess my essay.

Thanks..[/B]

Please evaluate, pinpoint the mistakes
 

[COLOR="Blue"][SIZE="7"][B]MEANING AND PURPOSE OF EDUCATION[/B] [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[B]1. Introduction:[/B]
Getting education is the basic right of human being which has been urged in every religion and every political system. There is no any official definition of Education but one can describe it as “to get knowledge about different fields of life”. Memorizing facts and figures merely is not education. Education enhances our character and tells us how to live in this crucial world. Education can be termed as an ocean of knowledge, its one tendency that how much water one can drink. There are different types of education, it varies with different faces of life and the field of observation. One can get knowledge about different fields from Religion to politics, Science to social etc. Our religion Islam and other religions have also emphasized on education.
[B]2. Meaning and Definition of Education.
3. Purpose of education.
4. Education as a benefactor.
5. Types of education.[/B]
a. Religious.
b. Scientific
c. Lingual
d. Cultural
e. Artistic
f. Social
g. Political
[B]6. Importance of education in our religion Islam.
7. Education and Muslim history.
8. Education in western countries.[/B]
a. Lieu of education in western countries.
b. Education standard in western countries.
c. Their strategy.
[B]9. Current Scenario of Education in Pakistan. [/B]
a. Low literacy rate.
b. Devastated standard of education.
c. Low budget given to education sector.
d. No heed paid from Political elites.
e. Ghost Schools.
f. Corruption and Nepotism.
[B]10. Impacts of ignoring education in Pakistan.[/B]
a. Poverty
b. Child labor
c. High unemployment rate
d. Disturbed economy.
e. Internal feuds
f. Limited thinking of people.
g. Gender discrimination.
h. Terrorism.
[B]11. Suggestions.
12. Conclusion:[/B]
Our Pakistan is lacking in many aspects, but most of the aspects are linked with the education. Hence we the people of Pakistan are unaware of the real meaning of education. Our Pakistan is an Islam state despite of this we don’t have rampant education in Pakistan. We should start pondering over the divergence of education in our state, so we can improve our Pakistan in every manner. It is clear that Education is the only commodity which broadens our mind, shows us the right path, teaches us to follow our prestigious religion, chaperones us and makes us behave like a human being.


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Thanks in advance.

[QUOTE=exclusively;660071][B]CSS Essay 2012[/B]
[B][SIZE="4"][B][COLOR="Purple"][B]The Suffering soul in the scientific age[/B][/COLOR][/B][/SIZE][/B]


[B][COLOR="Indigo"][B]1. INTRODUCTION

2. PHILOSOPHY OF SOUL

3. MATERIALISTIC WORLD

4. WAR BETWEEN SOUL AND MATERIALISTIC WORLD

5. SUFFERING SOUL IN THE CONTEMPORARY WORLD

6. CAUSES OF SUFFERING SOUL IN NUCLEAR ERA[/B][/COLOR][/B]
[B][COLOR="Blue"]a. Social Causes [/COLOR][/B]
i. Materialism tendency
ii. Immorality
iii. Lack of mutual coordination and cooperation
iv. Different sects
v. Extremism “people are ready to kill or be killed”
vi. Lack of education
vii. Impurity of souls due to immoral attitudes
viii. Lust for sex
[B][COLOR="Blue"]b. Religious Causes [/COLOR][/B]
i. Away from the religions
ii. According to Mysticism “Nafs” “body” and “Soul’s imbalanced role
iii. Intolerance among religions
iv. Blasphemy laws
[B][COLOR="Blue"]c. Political Causes[/COLOR][/B]
i. Undemocratic norms
ii. Desire for Power
iii. Desire for Money
[B][COLOR="Blue"]d. International Causes [/COLOR][/B]
i. Western dominancy
ii. Western and Turkish dramas
iii. Over modernization
[B][COLOR="Indigo"]
7. CONTEMPORARY ERA'S IMPACT ON SOUL[/COLOR][/B]
a. Far reaching psychological impact
b. Unsatisfactory
c. Increasing the number of suicides
d. Increasing the number of rapes
i. A girl 6 girl rapped
ii. Gang Rapping cases
e. Drug addiction
f. Terrorism, extremism and militancy
g. Wars
i. World War I and II
ii. Indopak Wars
iii. Turk wars (example from Sultan Sulaiman)
iv. Anglo wars
v. War on terror
h. Impurity of soul and suffering from nuclear era

[B][COLOR="Purple"]8. SUGGESTIONS[/COLOR][/B]
a. Getting rid of materialistic ideology
b. Spiritualization
c. Mediation
d. Psychological Therapies
e. Ideology of Love and beloved
f. Islam should be followed to purify soul
g. Mysticism-“Wahdatul Shahood & Wahdatul Wajood”
h. Humanity “Kar bhala to ho Bhala”
i. Balance between modern and Islamic education
i. Last Prophet (PBUH), Other prominent prophets and Hatim Tai’s ideology of life
j. Mutual coordination and cooperation
k. Self motivation

[COLOR="Indigo"][B]9. CONCLUSION[/B][/COLOR]





[B]Introduction [/B]
In the contemporary world, human beings’ souls are suffering. Due to advancement in technology we have got every thing, we are spending our lives luxuriously but lack in satisfying our souls. However, with the advancement of technology and scientific age, we are going far away from ourselves; we are unable to find ourselves in this world. More or less, in this world, we are not satisfied due to suffering from[B](of)[/B] the soul. We are unable to look into our heart’s inner core to justify its needs. As a matter of fact, despite of having every thing e.g airplane, motor car, radio, computer, and satellite we are unable to satisfy our souls. Our souls are[B](have)[/B] suffered a lot. Besides, World War I and II are the biggest examples; many people were killed in these wars. Due to lust of power, money and sex, human being forgets his soul’s voice. That is why,like a fish out of water[B],[/B] our souls are suffering. [B]That is why[/B] [B](No need of using "that is why" here )[/B] it is the need of our [B](hour)[/B] to purify our souls. Without the purification of soul in this scientific age, we can not live our life peacefully.


[B]Conclusion [/B]
Conclusively, in this nuclear age, we have got every thing, but we lack in the purification of our soul. In this regard, we have to try our best to satisfy our soul. We must not [B]have to (No need of using "have to" )[/B] let our soul suffered by [B](at)[/B] any cost. In addition to this, science and soul have to live together and work simultaneously. It can be said that a person who has satisfied and purified his soul that means he has won every thing in his life. If a human does not purify his soul, then the difference between human and inhuman will not be distinguished. That is why the face of our beautiful world has been bearing awful injustice, unfair, and illegitimate incidents. Therefore, we have to get rid of materialistic ideology and focus [B](on)[/B] our souls in order to live our lives peacefully without any suffering of our souls in this nuclear world.


[B]Please assess my essay.

Thanks..[/B][/QUOTE]


There were some grammar mistakes which I have pinpointed.
I am not good at essay writing, So I can't analyze your introduction and conclusion. However I feel it could be done much better than this. Your outline is really good.

correct me If I am wrong at some point.
Sorry, if I pointed out some mistake wrongly.

Try to evaluate my outline too, I have also mentioned introduction and conclusion like you did. Have a look please :)

zohaib babar
 

[QUOTE=amannan;660217][COLOR="Blue"][SIZE="7"][B]MEANING AND PURPOSE OF EDUCATION[/B] [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[B]1. Introduction:[/B]
Getting education is the basic right of human being which has been urged in every religion and every political system. There is no any official definition of Education but one can describe it as “to get knowledge about different fields of life”. Memorizing facts and figures merely is not education. Education enhances our character and tells us how to live in this crucial world. Education can be termed as an ocean of knowledge, its one tendency that how much water one can drink. There are different types of education, it varies with different faces of life and the field of observation. One can get knowledge about different fields from Religion to politics, Science to social etc. Our religion Islam and other religions have also emphasized on education.
[B]2. Meaning and Definition of Education.
3. Purpose of education.
4. Education as a benefactor.
5. Types of education.[/B]
a. Religious.
b. Scientific
c. Lingual
d. Cultural
e. Artistic
f. Social
g. Political
[B]6. Importance of education in our religion Islam.
7. Education and Muslim history.
8. Education in western countries.[/B]
a. Lieu of education in western countries.
b. Education standard in western countries.
c. Their strategy.
[B]9. Current Scenario of Education in Pakistan. [/B]
a. Low literacy rate.
b. Devastated standard of education.
c. Low budget given to education sector.
d. No heed paid from Political elites.
e. Ghost Schools.
f. Corruption and Nepotism.
[B]10. Impacts of ignoring education in Pakistan.[/B]
a. Poverty
b. Child labor
c. High unemployment rate
d. Disturbed economy.
e. Internal feuds
f. Limited thinking of people.
g. Gender discrimination.
h. Terrorism.
[B]11. Suggestions.
12. Conclusion:[/B]
Our Pakistan is lacking in many aspects, but most of the aspects are linked with the education. Hence we the people of Pakistan are unaware of the real meaning of education. Our Pakistan is an Islam state despite of this we don’t have rampant education in Pakistan. We should start pondering over the divergence of education in our state, so we can improve our Pakistan in every manner. It is clear that Education is the only commodity which broadens our mind, shows us the right path, teaches us to follow our prestigious religion, chaperones us and makes us behave like a human being.


Please evaluate my essays' outline.
Thanks in advance.[/QUOTE]

Very good effort i appreciate your effort.Please try to explain it in more detail add some outlines.

[QUOTE=amannan;660217][COLOR="Blue"][SIZE="7"][B]MEANING AND PURPOSE OF EDUCATION[/B] [/SIZE][/COLOR]

[B]1. Introduction:[/B]
Getting education is the basic right of human being which has been urged in every religion and every political system. There is no any official definition of Education but one can describe it as “to get knowledge about different fields of life”. Memorizing facts and figures merely is not education. Education enhances our character and tells us how to live in this crucial world. Education can be termed as an ocean of knowledge, its one tendency that how much water one can drink. There are different types of education, it varies with different faces of life and the field of observation. One can get knowledge about different fields from Religion to politics, Science to social etc. Our religion Islam and other religions have also emphasized on education.
[B]2. Meaning and Definition of Education.
3. Purpose of education.
4. Education as a benefactor.
5. Types of education.[/B]
a. Religious.
b. Scientific
c. Lingual
d. Cultural
e. Artistic
f. Social
g. Political
[B]6. Importance of education in our religion Islam.
7. Education and Muslim history.
8. Education in western countries.[/B]
a. Lieu of education in western countries.
b. Education standard in western countries.
c. Their strategy.
[B]9. Current Scenario of Education in Pakistan. [/B]
a. Low literacy rate.
b. Devastated standard of education.
c. Low budget given to education sector.
d. No heed paid from Political elites.
e. Ghost Schools.
f. Corruption and Nepotism.
[B]10. Impacts of ignoring education in Pakistan.[/B]
a. Poverty
b. Child labor
c. High unemployment rate
d. Disturbed economy.
e. Internal feuds
f. Limited thinking of people.
g. Gender discrimination.
h. Terrorism.
[B]11. Suggestions.
12. Conclusion:[/B]
Our Pakistan is lacking in many aspects, but most of the aspects are linked with the education. Hence we the people of Pakistan are unaware of the real meaning of education. Our Pakistan is an Islam state despite of this we don’t have rampant education in Pakistan. We should start pondering over the divergence of education in our state, so we can improve our Pakistan in every manner. It is clear that Education is the only commodity which broadens our mind, shows us the right path, teaches us to follow our prestigious religion, chaperones us and makes us behave like a human being.





Please evaluate my essays' outline.
Thanks in advance.[/QUOTE]

Nice effort, introduction is good but the conclusion is not up to the mark. No need to justify any thing in your conclusion. Conclusion means sum up. Just end your journey and give optimistic idea about the education. Apart from that you have don your job quite well. Keep it up dear...

[SIZE="5"][B]please check my essay although i have got this material from another essay posted in the forum but i have learnt it and then re written it in my own way. so kindly, check it and comment.

in addition,i would want to know the purpose of writing only the outlines. is preparation of outline sufficient for essay preparation? don't we have to focus on how to highlight each and every point and support it with quotes etc?i thought essay marking is on being "logical,argumentative etc?" is that not so? is outline,intro and conclusion the essence of essay ?[/B][/SIZE]
[B]TERRORISM[/B]

I. Introduction
II. Causes of terrorism
A. Illetracy
B. Injustice
C. Poverty
D. Food insecurity
E. Madrasshs
F. Unemployement
G. Soviet invasion
H. Iranian revolution
I. Intolerance
J. Extremism
K. Geopolitical location
III. IMPACT OF TERRORISM
A. ECONOMIC LOSS
B. SOCIAL BREAKDOWN
C. PSYCHOLOGICAL DIORDERS
IV MEASURES NEEDED TO CURB TERRORISM
A. National commission
B. Propagation of education
C. Religious integration
D. Employment for youth
E. Dispensation of justice
V . conclusion

Pakistan is plagued with myriad problems, the gravest of them probably being terrorism. it has crippled the economy of the country and deteriorated the social fabric. it has also effected the psychological health of the citizens of the country. Many factors such as poverty, illiteracy, social injustice, madrassas, weakness of government among others have bred terrorism.

Strickly speaking, there is no formal definition of terrorism. however, generally it is defined as the use of violence or threat of violence by individuals or groups, against non combatants, to further their vested interests. As is rightly said “ [B]terrorism is tactic of demanding the impossible and demanding it at gun point”[/B]

[B]Illetracy[/B] is probably the most significant contributing factor of terrorism. according to the survey conducted, only one out of 5 aged 18-25 is capable of reading and writing and only one out of 20 individuals holds a college degree. with such a bleak picture, it is little wonder that people become vulnerable to the exploiters who use them for terrorist activities.
Pakistan is a developing country and the rate of poverty has escalated in recent times in accordance with limited resources and population explosion.

Due to[B] poverty[/B], people are unable to fulfil their basic requirements including proper meal, medicare, education,proper living etc.the effect of poverty is felt most strongly by the youth. frustrated by their inability to lead a comfortable and desirable life, people often resort to terrorism.

Recent surveys conducted have highlighted the fact, that a large population of the country is [B]food insecure[/B] and is unable to afford decent meals for two times a day. it has also been found out that food insecurity is more rampant in tribal areas of khyber paktunkwa and balouchistan. such people are willing to go to any extent including suicides.

[B]Unemployment [/B]is on rise. Youth is severely disappointed at the failure of the government to provide employment opportunities to the individuals. Youth, with a surplus of energy and ambition to earn livelihood at every cost is easily exploited by the terrorist organizations. these organizations hire pay the individuals to launch militant attacks and destroy the social life of the country.

In Pakistan, [B]speedy and efficient trials[/B] are a mere illusion. justice even if provided is often delayed.just as the common saying goes, justice delayed is justice denied. Hopeless from the courts and juries, people often pick up weapons themselves to avenge matters.

Historically speaking, terrorism developed roots in Pakistan in 1979 following the [B]Russian invasion of Afghanistan.[/B] pakistan,in alliance with U.S.A supported Taliban.they were trained in Pakistan and sent to Afghanistan to wage “the holy war”.after the dismemberment of U.S.S.R in 1991, many of these individuals settled in Pakistan and continued their use of violence.

[B]Madrasshs[/B] are not a new phenonmenon for a muslim country like Pakistan.however,in the wake of 9/11,they have assumed a new character. instead of advocating lofty islamic principles of peace and tolerance, they teach the young scholars to view people belonging to other religions and even other sects of the same religion as “mushrikeen”. they are often incited to wage jihad against “mushrikeen”.

Islam is a peaceful religion. the word islam itself means “salamati” or “peace”. nevertheless,in recent times, it has gained attention for all the contrary reasons. Quran has stated in clear word “do not aggress- ALLAH is not with the aggresors” People with vested interests use the base of islam to propagate violence. "Islamic law is clearly against terrorism, against any kind of deliberate killing of civilians or similar 'collateral damage.'".They instigate other individuals to adopt their version of jihad and earn eternal bliss. illiterate individuals with little understanding of religion easily fall victim and use violence.

[B]Economic disparity[/B] is in rise in Pakistan. Few individuals have hoarded and accumulated wealth. such individuals have maintained their dominance in all the spheres of social and political life.these individuals often suppress “people of lesser god”. consequently, people turn to any religious parties for the redressal of their grievances and become a puppet in their hands.

In recent times, people are getting more and more [B]dissatisfied [/B]from the role of government. they often feel they are denied basic human rights, their properties are wrongly confiscated, LEA’s are spineless in character. As a result, they refuse to follow the rule of the land and take law in their own hands as was evident in an incidenct in Karachi where citizens caught burglars and killed them to death refusing police intervention.

Government, too has played its role in allowing terrorism to flourish in the country. under the zia regime, [B]state patronage[/B] was given to everything bearing an Islamic emblem. during his period, irrational laws such huddod ordinance and blasphemy laws were enacted.

The role of [B]geostrategic position[/B] of Pakistan , too cannot be negated as a contributing factor of terrorism. according to researchers 1979, Iranian revolution has paved way for militancy and extremism in the country. in addition, the porous nature of pak-afghan border has allowed the extremist elements to use it to their advantage. on the eastern side ,Pakistan has decades old animosity with india. This, too has led to rise in extremism.

Israel and india are violating the basic human rights of Palestinians and kashmiris, respectively. From time and again, they have refused to international solutions to the issues.consequently, innocent blood is shed almost on daily basis. [B]propenents of Palestinian and kashmiri cause[/B] use Pakistan as a pedestal to attract global attention.

[B]Political instability [/B]and lawlessness has also allowed terrorism to develop roots in Pakistan. since her inception, Pakistan has witnessed decades of dictatorial control under the 4 successive martial laws. this has, as a result, led to the failure of establishment of strong political parties. the tug-of war for power between civilian government and martial law has caused the diversion of attention from terrorism to political issues.

Probably, [B]drone strikes[/B] are the largest contributers to the unprecedented increase in terrorism.U.S.A,in a bid to destroy the militants and their safe havens in Pakistan, started launching the drone attacks in 2002. nevertheless,the strategy backfired. Affectess of the drone strike, including mutilated and relatives of the killed were filled with anguish. they resorted to terrorism to avenge their loss.

Terrorism has affected each and every aspect of political and social culture. it has [B]stunted the economic growth[/B] of the country by posing a threat to every source of revenue generation, manufacturing, tourism, agriculture etc. social life of the citizens has been disturbed by the recurrent terrorist attacks. the society is divided into different sections holding opposite views on political cure to the situation.

Surveys conducted have concluded that [B]agriculture sector[/B] has suffered a loss of 20 million rupees.fruit industry of northern areas has been worst-hit. landowners, labourers, farmers, transporters whose livelihood was dependent of fruit industry have all suffered in terms of monetary losses. The contribution of agriculture sector the GDP has also declined from 25.6 % in 1999-2000 to only 21.6% in 2007-2008.the figures corroborate the fact, that terrorism has affected not only agriculture sector of northern areas but also ,all over the country.

Terrorism has also affected [B]manufacturing sector. [/B]small and moderate enterprises are the worst-hit.as a result, there contribution to the national economy has also declined severely. according to international quarters, FDI of a country is inversely propotional to the level of terrorism. in Pakistan, unfortunately the terrorist outfits have targeted foreign investors .consequently, the already dismal situation of economy has deteriorated.

In recent times, Pakistan stands at 113 out of 130 countries as a [B]tourist destination.[/B] This decline as a tourist choice is the result of increase in terrorism and absence of proper tourist organizations. In by gone days, people from different countries enjoyed travelling to Pakistan. the scenic view coupled with exotic traditions of the local tribes were largely appreciated by the onlookers. however,in recent times this industry has suffered colossal damage.according to the government itself, many tourist hotels in northern areas have closed up and the sector has suffered a loss of 65 million rupees.

apart from the decline in economy, terrorism has also targeted the [B]psychology [/B]of civilians. Depression, stress, trauma and other psychological disorders have risen to an unprecedented level.Terrorism is a psychological warfare. [B]Terrorists try to manipulate us and change our behavior by creating fear, uncertainty, and division in society.
Patrick J. Kennedy[/B]

victims of the attacks fail to recover and return back to normal life with the fear of more such attacks in future. even normal citizens always remain fearful. terrorists have no specified targets or specified time or place choices.they target any one and every one ,anywhere and everywhere. So much so, that people feel insecure going to mosques or bazaars or even schools.

Pakistan has witnessed the grave consequences of its locations. Even the world at large acknowledges that after Afghanistan, Pakistan has suffered the most. The losses have been incurred in terms of physical losses, economic decline, psychological and moral depravity.surveys conducted have confirmed that scores of innocent civilians and military officers have lost their lives in this war against terror.in lieu of the stated situation, now is the time that government should play its role to overcome the menace.

Government should set up a [B]national commission[/B] to assess the major causes of the rise in terrorism. this commission should then take all the steps necessary to eradicate terrorism. This commission should highlight the ignominious character of the terrorist organizations and should ensure that the culprits should get due treatment.

As has been already stated, illiteracy is the root cause of terrorism. therefore, government should pay more attention to [B]education sector[/B]. This, however, does not implies allocation of more funds only which too is equally important but also addressing the curricula taught.

It is important that [B]tolerance[/B] should be propagated in the society. Media, due to its dominant role in society, should come to handy in this matter. through different techniques,it should try to inculcate tolerance and patience in the mass.

[B]Religious organizations[/B] should also try to play a positive role. instead of highlighting the segregation between different faiths, they should try to develop harmony and promote peace. Fanaticism and terrorism have no place in Islam.
[B]In the face of terrorism, a united front is one of the strongest weapons.(Virginia foxx)[/B]

it is a matter of general awareness, that some religious leaders exploit the sentiments of their faithful and sow seeds of hatred and intolerance in them. Such individuals should be highlighted and their malpractices severely reprimanded.

Youth is the asset of any society. instead of allowing them to go astray,the government should use them to play a conducive role. they should be provided [B]jobs [/B]and their abilities should be used to the maximum. government should monitor their activities to prevent them from falling into the wrong hands.

Pakistan has suffered innumerable losses. despite the fact, the country has been pressurized to “do more” and its character always held under suspicion. The world should acknowledge its serious efforts and also assist it in eradication of terrorism.

Terrorism may be classified as either extremism or moderate militants.they should be tackled with respect to their respective types. [B]dialogue[/B] is the best way to handle the moderate militants as it would be easy to lead them to a negotiating table. On the contrary, extremist elements cannot be easily talked into. law enforcement agencies should use the best possible measure to handle the extremists, and if nothing seems effective then, [B]coercion[/B] may be the only panacea.

Courts should ensure [B]speedy trials.[/B] People can only be discouraged from taking law into their hands by ensuring that justice is provided to all. justice should be blind. cheif justice in the recent times has taken some worthy decisions in the dispensation of justice. such a tradition should continue in future as well.

To sum it up, terrorism is one of the most critical issues confronting the very sovereignty and integrity of the country. terrorism started penetrating in the Pakistani society following the invasion of Afghanistan by U.S.S.R. terrorist organizations and terrorism were then provided ample space in the society by the faulty legislation of the country. Multifarious factors have nourished the seeds of terrorism. illiteracy, poverty, unemployment are the leading causes of terrorism. in addition intolerance, in recent times, and religious extremism have also contributed to the steep rise in terrorism. It is imperative that government should take all the necessary steps to curb terrorism.

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