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[B][COLOR="Green"][B]CSS-2012[/B][/COLOR][/B]
1- Energy Crisis in Pakistan: Causes and Consequences

2-Obesity is the root cause of all disease

3-Beggars cannot be choosers

4-The United Nations in the 21st Century: Obligations and Limitations

5-Brains like hearts go where they are appreciated

6-The Emerging Power of Public Opinion

7-The suffering Soul in the Scientific Age

8-A Critical Analysis of Education Systems in Pakistan

9-Democracy is a culture rather than a process

10-Social and Economic Securities for Women in Islam

[B][COLOR="Green"][B]1- Energy Crisis in Pakistan: Causes and Consequences[/B][/COLOR][/B]

Outlines:
[B]
1.INTRODUCTION[/B]

[B]2.CURRENT SCENARIO OF ENERGY CRISIS [/B]
a.Energy Generation
Thermal
Hydal
Nuclear

[B]3.DEMAND AND SUPPLY GAP[/B]
a.Consumption is greater than that of Supply
b.5000 MW is required to balance the demand and supply gap.

[B]4.CAUSES OF ENERGY CRISIS [/B]
a.Improper usage of natioral resources
b.Bad governance
c.Corruption
d.Oil Mafia
e.Improper role of institution
f.Electricity theft
[B]

5.CONSEQUENCES[/B]
a.Impact on industries sector
b.Impact on Agriculture sector
c.Decline in FDI
d.Fragile Economy
e.Social Impact
f.Psychological impacts

[B]6.SUGGESTIONS[/B]

[B]7-CONCLUSION[/B]


[B]INTRODUCTION[/B]
Pakistan is facing many problems. But the problem which has affected adversely is energy crisis. The consequences of energy crisis are very adverse, our economy has been weakening since a decade. Industries are being closed. Besides, people are becoming jobless and the rate unemployment is going upward day by day. Apart from that, the agriculture sector is considered a backbone support for our economy. But it is is also going bad to worst condition. More or less impacts on our society has been imposed by energy crisis. Many people are unable to move the wheel of their activities smoothly due to lack of energy. Because, most of the daily work are more or less based upon energy. For instance, a business man can not perform his duty effectively due to shut down of the factories. Similarly, students can not do their home works, and even they can not do their studies into schools due to the usual loadshedding. Therefore, it is the need of hour to solve energy crisis. However, the current government is very serious to sort out this crisis. But, nothing has been achieved. However, this problem can be solved with the effective strategy plan. The government has to be free from corruption, mutual cooperation and coordination among the politicians can do miracles in solving energy crisis.



[B]CONCLUSION[/B]
To the sum up, Pakistan is facing energy crisis. As a matter of fact, it is a global problem. But it is the need of hour to control it as soon as possible, from the above suggestion, the energy crisis can really be sorted out. As this is the 21st centrally nothing is impossible. If honest leadership take considerable part in solving this issue, the problem can be sorted out withing two years. Undoubted, the current government is doing commendable job. But with this, the coordination and cooperation of the masses is also the need of hour. This is our country, we are the best nation as said by the Quid e Azam Muhammad Ali Jinnah. We can do miracles, but there is also the need of mutual cooperation and coordination. Apart from that, every citizen has to perform his/her duty to save our country from the crisis. Though, energy crisis is affecting our lives, our country economically, socially and psychologically. But it is the crisis for the time being, however, with the help of above suggestions, the day will come, there would no energy crisis nor its adverse consequences.


Please pin point my mistakes...

[B]Thanks in anticipation...[/B]

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your first line of introduction is not enough. there may be other attractive sentences

Energy Crisis
 

[B][SIZE="2"]Introduction[/SIZE][/B]
Pakistan Possess multitude problems but energy crisis has badly hit its social and economical fabric. It is hanging like a sword of Damocles on the head of our economy and its repercussions are omnipresent. Poverty is increasing due to fall in GDP rate. People are suffering with psychological diseases. Energy crisis is crippling our society by hitting our social, political and economical walls.

Energy Crisis
 

Outline:
[B][SIZE="1"]Introduction[/SIZE][/B][LIST]
Energy Crisis.......multitude of sins.[/LIST][LIST]
Energy Crisis ..... result of man's curiosity to get more and more luxuries[/LIST]Pakistan.......victim of grave energy crisis.
[B][SIZE="1"]Sources of Energy[/SIZE][/B] [LIST]Fossil Fuels[/LIST][LIST]Nuclear Reactors[/LIST][LIST]Solar light and Heat[/LIST][LIST]Hydel Power Plants[/LIST][LIST]Natural Resviors[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Energy Crisis in the World [/SIZE][/B][LIST]3 billion people .....depended on dirty, harmful fuels[/LIST][LIST]2 billion people .......uses biomass[/LIST][LIST]15% in Africa and 40% in South asia.......users of electricity[/LIST][LIST] Oil and Coal Prices...soaring[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Energy Crisis In Pakistan [/SIZE][/B][LIST][*]Threat for Economy........GDP growth rate is just 3.6%[/LIST][LIST][*]Poverty and unemployment ...... knocking at door step[/LIST][LIST][*]Shortfall of energy ...........3000 MGW to 7000 MGW[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Causes behind this Grave Problem[/SIZE][/B][LIST][*]Shortage of Energy Resources[/LIST][LIST][*]Improper Planning[/LIST][LIST][*]Lack of Funding[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Repercussion of Energy Crisis in Pakistan [/SIZE][/B]

Member although I have not completed it but kindly check it and give me your precious suggestions

[QUOTE=Matee ur Rehman;659732]Outline:
[B][SIZE="1"]Introduction[/SIZE][/B][LIST]
Energy Crisis.......multitude of sins.[/LIST][LIST]
Energy Crisis ..... result of man's curiosity to get more and more luxuries[/LIST]Pakistan.......victim of grave energy crisis.
[B][SIZE="1"]Sources of Energy[/SIZE][/B] [LIST]Fossil Fuels[/LIST][LIST]Nuclear Reactors[/LIST][LIST]Solar light and Heat[/LIST][LIST]Hydel Power Plants[/LIST][LIST]Natural Resviors[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Energy Crisis in the World [/SIZE][/B][LIST]3 billion people .....depended on dirty, harmful fuels[/LIST][LIST]2 billion people .......uses biomass[/LIST][LIST]15% in Africa and 40% in South asia.......users of electricity[/LIST][LIST] Oil and Coal Prices...soaring[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Energy Crisis In Pakistan [/SIZE][/B][LIST][*]Threat for Economy........GDP growth rate is just 3.6%[/LIST][LIST][*]Poverty and unemployment ...... knocking at door step[/LIST][LIST][*]Shortfall of energy ...........3000 MGW to 7000 MGW[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Causes behind this Grave Problem[/SIZE][/B][LIST][*]Shortage of Energy Resources[/LIST][LIST][*]Improper Planning[/LIST][LIST][*]Lack of Funding[/LIST][B][SIZE="1"]Repercussion of Energy Crisis in Pakistan [/SIZE][/B][/QUOTE]

Your attempt is good but you had to explain consequences and suggestions too. Beside this, please write your introduction and conclusion, on the basis of these, we can give you more suggestions to make you to the level of perfection...

[SIZE="6"][COLOR="Blue"][B]Energy Crisis in Pakistan: Causes and Consequences.[/B][/COLOR][/SIZE]

[B]Introduction:[/B]

Pakistan is facing enormity of problems in the present epoch which are affecting social system, political system, economy and Pakistan’s relations with other countries. One of the most crucible scourges, which are endured by citizens of Pakistan, is “Energy Crisis”.
One cannot refrain the fact that energy crisis has been putting restraints in Pakistan’s way to success since a decade or more. Energy crisis in Pakistan is not merely affecting Pakistan’s industry, agriculture, political and social condition, but it’s also jeopardizing the future of our nation.

[B]Problems created because of Energy Crisis:[/B]
1. Industries are being shifted from Pakistan.
2. Unemployment inflation because of shifting Industries.
3. Agricultural problems.
4. Students facing problems in institutions.
5. Pakistan’s image being tarnished in world’s eye.
6. More usage of fuels in personal power generators.
7. Depreciating Economy.

[B]Causes:[/B]

1. Paying no heed to natural resources.
2. Corruption.
3. High consumption of Energy.
4. Burgeoning rate of energy thieves.

[B]Consequences:[/B]

1. Internal conflicts.
2. Zero Industrialization.
3. Disturbed Economy.
4. Tarnished image of country.
5. Lack of modern technologies in country.
6. No advancement.
7. Inflated rates of Energy.
8. Consumption of fuels will be increased.

[B]Critical Analysis:[/B]

[B]Conclusion:[/B]

No doubt, if we failed to overcome this gigantic problem, we will be facing many other scourges in future. Our already disturbed image will be further tarnished. However if we collectively contribute in this fight we can overcome this problem. Low consumption of energy by Pakistani public and serious attempts by Political leaders can haul us from these bad times. No doubt, recent Government is enthusiastically indulged in this fight against energy crisis. They can succeed, if we also put our little efforts and reduce energy consumption in our homes.


Please guys evaluate my outline too. Pinpoint my mistakes, and also point out futile points. (if any).
Thanks

[QUOTE=amannan;659770][SIZE="6"][COLOR="Blue"][B]Energy Crisis in Pakistan: Causes and Consequences.[/B][/COLOR][/SIZE]

[B]Introduction:[/B]

Pakistan is facing enormity of problems in the present epoch which are affecting social system, political system, economy and Pakistan’s relations with other countries. One of the most crucible scourges, which are endured by citizens of Pakistan, is “Energy Crisis”.
One cannot refrain the fact that energy crisis has been putting restraints in Pakistan’s way to success since a decade or more. Energy crisis in Pakistan is not merely affecting Pakistan’s industry, agriculture, political and social condition, but it’s also jeopardizing the future of our nation.

[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"][B]Introduction needs more details, explain some other things e.g consequences in detailed manner such as impact on individual, on daily life and some how it affects agro-industrial sectors. Means you had to explain that due to the shortage of electricity or energy crisis our agro-industrial sectors are going to close day by day, consequently, it renders unemployment and poverty. In last you had to mention one two lines of suggestions that our government must take considerable steps in order to overcome this on going crisis. Indeed, its the need of hour to do so ans so on.....[/B][/COLOR][/B]

[B]Problems created because of Energy Crisis:[/B]
1. Industries are being shifted from Pakistan.
2. Unemployment inflation because of shifting Industries.
3. Agricultural problems.
4. Students facing problems in institutions.
5. Pakistan’s image being tarnished in world’s eye.
6. More usage of fuels in personal power generators.
7. Depreciating Economy.

[B][COLOR="DarkGreen"]The above outlines are also impacts, I think here you need to explain "Present Scenario of our Energy crisis, the developments, besides, there is need to mention some facts and figures, like included energy and demand and supply gap and so on... so that checker may understand that the candidate is updated from every thing [/COLOR][/B]

[B]Causes:[/B]

1. Paying no heed to natural resources.
2. Corruption.
3. High consumption of Energy.
4. Burgeoning rate of energy thieves.
[B]Consequences:[/B]

1. Internal conflicts.
2. Zero Industrialization.
3. Disturbed Economy.
4. Tarnished image of country.
5. Lack of modern technologies in country.
6. No advancement.
7. Inflated rates of Energy.
8. Consumption of fuels will be increased.

[B]Critical Analysis:[/B] (I think no need of this, instead you had to give suggestions, no doubt it is not asked but it is the requirement of this topic in order to complete your essay..... It is an additional point, if you mention suggestion, would be a plus point..

[B]Conclusion:[/B]

No doubt, if we failed to overcome this gigantic problem, we will be facing many other scourges in future. Our already disturbed image will be further tarnished. However if we collectively contribute in this fight we can overcome this problem. Low consumption of energy by Pakistani public and serious attempts by Political leaders can haul us from these bad times. No doubt, recent Government is enthusiastically indulged in this fight against energy crisis. They can succeed, if we also put our little efforts and reduce energy consumption in our homes.


Please guys evaluate my outline too. Pinpoint my mistakes, and also point out futile points. (if any).
Thanks[/QUOTE]

Your conclusion is more or less good but the introduction is the soul of essay it is not up to the mark. Apart from that you have done your job good.

Wish you best of luck for your coming attempt...

Thanks
 

[QUOTE=exclusively;659777]Your conclusion is more or less good but the introduction is the soul of essay it is not up to the mark. Apart from that you have done your job good.

Wish you best of luck for your coming attempt...[/QUOTE]

Thanks, I will try to hone my writing skills.
I will give my 1st attempt in 2017 after completing my bachelors, what about you?