this is by far the best outline i have seen.well done

war on terror
 

Good effort brother, keep it up

Let's discuss about expectations from exam 2015.
 

Such self explanatory outlines fall in the good books of checkers. I hope his approach isn't one sided in Essay, outline suggests that he hasn't missed the point. If you compare this Essay with the Essay of Cogito Ergo Sum then one can clearly see that Cogito has stolen the march but looking through the eyes of checker , Darkmoon seems to be on safe side

Darkmoon has missed the causes which cogito explained eloquently in his Essay. Include causes and stress a bit more on solutions in that outline then this Essay is worth 50+ ( even in worst case scenario)

[QUOTE=Monk;860435]Such self explanatory outlines fall in the good books of checkers. I hope his approach isn't one sided in Essay, outline suggests that he hasn't missed the point. If you compare this Essay with the Essay of Cogito Ergo Sum then one can clearly see that Cogito has stolen the march but looking through the eyes of checker , Darkmoon seems to be on safe side

Darkmoon has missed the causes which cogito explained eloquently in his Essay. Include causes and stress a bit more on solutions in that outline then this Essay is worth 50+ ( even in worst case scenario)[/QUOTE]

Thanks monk for your comments.And what would you say regarding qoutes?Are they relevant and well articulated??

[QUOTE=darkmoon;860436]Thanks monk for your comments.And what would you say regarding qoutes?Are they relevant and well articulated??[/QUOTE]


Yes they are apt and i think must bring some extra points

[QUOTE=Monk;860437]Yes they are apt and i think must bring some extra points[/QUOTE]

Thanks monk....rest depends on examiner whether he likes my essay or not...and im hopeful this time.IA i ll make it.

Well , exactly same were mine outlines and added how these are abused by war on terror. I started the topic with nelson mandela quote ,, to deny people their human rights , is to challange their very humanity " . . . . Moreover, i hit the topic from very first line without going into backgrounds and ended with quotation of roseau. . . . . I think essay is all about technique.those who followed that will sail through it.

Let see when the band begins to play

[QUOTE=Ghaffar khan;868671]Well , exactly same were mine outlines and added how these are abused by war on terror. I started the topic with nelson mandela quote ,, to deny people their human rights , is to challange their very humanity " . . . . Moreover, i hit the topic from very first line without going into backgrounds and ended with quotation of roseau. . . . . I think essay is all about technique.those who followed that will sail through it.[/QUOTE]

Good luck then bro.I hope our technique has worked.

[QUOTE=darkmoon;805071]Introduction:
Concept OF war on Terror:
War on Terror has abused:
1.Right to Life
2.Right to Education
3.Right to Health
4.Right to Property
5.Right to Employment
6.Right to Freedom
7.Right to Vote
8.Women Rights
Impacts Of the violation of Human Rights due to war on Terror:
1.Growing Violence in Societies
2.Increasing Socio-economic Disparities
3.Severe Setback to Economies
4.Political Instability
Recommendations to stop Abuse of HRs in the name of war on Terror:
1.Responsibility of the United Nations
2.Responsible role of Human Rights Activists
3.Dialogue must be given a chance
4.Role of media
conclusion:
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started with Noam Chomsky'S words "Wanton killing of innocent civilians is terrorism,not war against terrorism"

In the of intro.."How can you have a war on terrorism when war itself is terrorism?"Howard Zinn

in the concept of terrorism....."The US is not waging a war on terror,but a war of Terror."of Noam Chomsky

middle men b 2 3 quotes dale....related to war on terror...

Role of Human Rights Activists-should no more remain silent and fixed"History will have to record that the greatest tragedy of this period of social transition was not the strident clamor of the bad people, but the appalling silence of the good people."of Martin Luther King, Jr.

The end with "The only thing that will redeem mankind is Cooperation" of Bertrand Russel.

Substantiated every paragraph with examples,facts and figures.
Its all what i could do..... :thinking
Ab ALLAH p chhor dya hai...He will HELP me to sail through...AMEEEN.


And Guys this essay topic was written on my file of essays and mene kabhi file cover ko dekhne ki zehmat nh ki....agar ek bar nazar parti tab b mn is p outline zaroor bnata...i made around 50 outlines on different odd topics...its luck...ab wo file mj itna haunt karta h you can imagine :sad[/QUOTE]
Excellent as it is to the point and doesn't dangle from the the core of the essay.

Would you please take the pain to go through the outlines I have posted in another thread! I'd be highly obliged.

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