The War on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights
 

Introduction:
Concept OF war on Terror:
War on Terror has abused:
1.Right to Life
2.Right to Education
3.Right to Health
4.Right to Property
5.Right to Employment
6.Right to Freedom
7.Right to Vote
8.Women Rights
Impacts Of the violation of Human Rights due to war on Terror:
1.Growing Violence in Societies
2.Increasing Socio-economic Disparities
3.Severe Setback to Economies
4.Political Instability
Recommendations to stop Abuse of HRs in the name of war on Terror:
1.Responsibility of the United Nations
2.Responsible role of Human Rights Activists
3.Dialogue must be given a chance
4.Role of media
conclusion:
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started with Noam Chomsky'S words "Wanton killing of innocent civilians is terrorism,not war against terrorism"

In the of intro.."How can you have a war on terrorism when war itself is terrorism?"Howard Zinn

in the concept of terrorism....."The US is not waging a war on terror,but a war of Terror."of Noam Chomsky

middle men b 2 3 quotes dale....related to war on terror...

Role of Human Rights Activists-should no more remain silent and fixed"History will have to record that the greatest tragedy of this period of social transition was not the strident clamor of the bad people, but the appalling silence of the good people."of Martin Luther King, Jr.

The end with "The only thing that will redeem mankind is Cooperation" of Bertrand Russel.

Substantiated every paragraph with examples,facts and figures.
Its all what i could do..... :thinking
Ab ALLAH p chhor dya hai...He will HELP me to sail through...AMEEEN.


And Guys this essay topic was written on my file of essays and mene kabhi file cover ko dekhne ki zehmat nh ki....agar ek bar nazar parti tab b mn is p outline zaroor bnata...i made around 50 outlines on different odd topics...its luck...ab wo file mj itna haunt karta h you can imagine :sad

[B][LEFT]It is an effective outline I have come through. Though, I love literary topics, I liked it very much. If i were you, i would write same. Best of luck.

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IA u will succeed this year. your essay is really really astounding

Relevant quotes. Fantastic outline. Unlike thousands who have elaborated more on terrorism and its counter strategies you have addressed the topic examiner sought for. If your grammar and sentence structure was as good as your outline you will definitely score a 50+ here. Mark my words.

[QUOTE=malik20;805160]Relevant quotes. Fantastic outline. Unlike thousands who have elaborated more on terrorism and its counter strategies you have addressed the topic examiner sought for. If your grammar and sentence structure was as good as your outline you will definitely score a 50+ here. Mark my words.[/QUOTE]

i focused on everything while writing my essay such as Grammar,exposition,clarity of thought,organization and presentation......

[QUOTE=darkmoon;805175]i focused on everything while writing my essay such as Grammar,exposition,clarity of thought,organization and presentation......[/QUOTE]

Well the examiner would be the judge of that..;) Sincerely hope to see u sail through my friend. Best of luck for the remainder of your journey.

exactly the kindly of outline I had would say around 90 percent similar, apart from the suggestions you mentioned I also emphasized on the unbiased role of Human rights commission and highlighted the human rights abuse in the context of war on terror in Pakistan and middle east,


Lets hope for the best now and yes after getting the same sort of outline feeling much relaxed:pp

U have grabbed essence of that essay
InshallAllah you will be pass


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Minorities exploitation, the discrimination with Muslims in west, rise of extremism in societies etc. also add much to already artfully made outline.

Essay 2015 outline
 

There were more interesting and philosophical topics in the CSS Essay paper of 2015. But I attempted following.


The War on terror has contributed to the growing abuse of human rights

Outline
(i)Introduction
(ii)War on Terror
(a)Its background history
(iii)US war on terror owned by Pakistan
(iv)What are human rights
(v)War on terror , how it has abused the human rights?
(a)The right to Live
(b)The right to Home
(c)The right to Health
(d)The right Education
(vi)The Impacts of War on terror
(a)The mass migration
(b)Influx of IDPs on urban areas and Metropolitan
(c)The Drone attacks and violation of sovereignity
(vii)Retaliation by the terrorists
(a)Attacks on streets
(b)Attacks on schools
(c)Attacks on Civilian as well as military
(viii)Conclusion