ok.

So what was thesis statement of your essay?

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Verily, with hardship there is relief” (Qur’an 94:6).

me too in the race with said caption, lets hope for the best

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"Patience Ensures Victory" Hazrat Ali ( A.s)

World as a Global Village: Learning to live together

(1) Introduction
(2) World's march towards Global Village
• Commerce & trade
• Silk Route established
• Sea routes
• Voyages undertaken by Columbus/ vasco dagama
• Commercial pursuits resulted in social/cultural intermingling
• Imperialism
• Proselytizing campaigns
• Post colonial world order based on international institutions
(3) How world is learning to live together
(3.1) Formation of Nation-States: ground rules for international conduct, rights and Duties
(3.2) Fostering & promoting multiculturalism
(3.3) Cultural & Educational exchange programs
(3.4) Representation & Role in international multilateral organization such as WTO, UNO,IMF & others as a means to have say in issues of common concern

(4) Why World Should learn to live together
(4.1) Common security threat requires joint, collaborative action that can only be possible if states learn to live together in cordial manner
(4.2) Issues of climate change requires well coordinated, joint action plan by national governments for which living together in a cordial manner is a pre-requisite
(4.3) Public health issues: fighting Ebola, Zika virus, and other pandemics
(4.4) Commercial ties foster interdependence, which rules out escape from globalization, thus making it imperative for states to learn to live together
(5) Benefits that living together can accrue
(5.1) Poverty Reduction
(5.2) Sharing of resources
(5.3) Market efficiency
(5.4) Information revolution
(6) Hurdles that lie in the way of the world becoming a true global village
(6.1) Inadequate representation in multilateral forums(UNO,IMF,WB)
(6.2) Cultural, social, and economic among the states
(6.3) Transnational terrorism
(6.4) Islamophobia/xenophobia
(7) Conclusion

Good Outline

nice attempt

Dear Seniors and fellows please assess the outlines of my essay that i attempted in CS-16

Crisis of good governance in Pakistan : Need for reforms and institutional building
1. Introduction
2. Thesis statement :Pakistan is mired in severe crisis of governance. Corruption, economic meltdown,political instability, terrorism, low public services,poverty, all these factors demonstrating that Pakistan is projecting a picture of extreme poor governance at all fronts.Therefore, Pakistan is in urgent need for reforms and strengthening of institutions for making Pakistan prosperous and developed country.
3.State of governance in Pakistan
a. No rule of Law
b. Absence of independent judiciary
c. Rampant Corruption
d. Low public services
e. Absence of meritocracy
f. Frail administrative capacity
g. Decay of institutions
h. Crippled economy
i. Clash among institutions
j. Illiteracy
k. Political instability
l. Extreme poverty
m. Inactive civil society
n. Inconsistency in policy making
4.How to improve governance and institutional building in Pakistan
a. Ensuring Sound Public administration
b. Revamping Criminal Justice System
c. Introducing Local government system
d. Undertake Civil Service reforms
e. Supremacy of Constitution and law
f. Active and vibrant civil society
g. Strengthening of institutions
h. Introducing e-Governance
i. Tackling Corruption
j. Merit Based appointments
k. Robust mechanism of accountability
l. Public participation in all decision making process
m. Free and uniform education system
n. Ensuring freedom of speech
o. Consistency in policy making process
p. Strong mechanism of policy implementation
q. Invest in basic human need
r. Land reforms
5.Conclusion

any one who has attempted the topic: water crisis and national unity ; kindly share his or her outline .

I'm not wise enough to judge anyone. Anyhow, the point I liked about your essay is targeting more on solution.


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Well written, however my concern is that, you have composed enough quantity but less substances. Hope for the best dear.