One can follow the pattern of essay writing from such book but memorising is disastrous.
Moreover, FPSC recommended books are a saviour.

let me tell you the topic related to feminism was that the feminism is not "really " a third world issue.

I never memorized any essay from any book. I just got an idea from his writings that it is okat to go against the statement of essay. He has written an essay on ' frailty thy name is women'. He has gone against the statement so I did the same in my paper.
Thank you all for your valuable guidance.

I know people who have gone against the essay and passed the exam, so don't worry. As long as your arguments are fine and you prove to the examiner as to why you have gone against the topic then he won't fail you.

I am not css aspirant and here is my out line.
seniors plz comment .


ESSAY.
are modern war not holy war?


.causes of holy war:

1 Disunity among muslim umaah .

2 Creation of ISIS to defame Islam.

3 Middle east crisis is a project for greater Israel.

4 American invasions on Muslim states after 9/11.

5 Killings of non-Muslims by the funded extremists in Muslim states.

6 Formation of Islamic military alliance to tackle NATO states who are involved in holy war.

7 Creating reasons for civil wars within Muslim state for further expeditions.

8 Installations of puppet governments to weaken and plunder muslim states.

9 To label muslims as terrorists in the western world.

10 Media is a tool to show controversies regarding the lifestyle of muslims .

11 American interest to conflict between shia-sunni leaders in world politics .

12 Bashing of western leaders against Muslims in their election campaigns.


.Effects of holy war,

1 Victimization of Muslim immigrants .

2 Muslims mass migration with lost hope.

3 Genocide of muslims in all war zones of this century

4 Islamophobia is growing

5 Radicalization

6 Terrorism is increasing day by day.

7 Humanity is suffering.

8 Maximum chances of World war 3.

9 Arms race in the world.

10 Brain wash of the western people against Islam and Muslims.

11 Impartiality of UNO regarding Muslims rights.

12 Sectarianism .

Solution to stop this war.

1 Nato states should call back their army from war zones.

2 To empower UNO by finishing the hegemony of VETO STATES .

3 Ban on military alliance such as nato or Islamic military alliance.

4 To resolve Palestine-israel issue peacefully.

5 Religious clergies should play their role in media to remove misunderstandings .

6 To find similarities between Christianity, Judaism and Islam for love and peace. (as sir syed ahmed khan had done after war of independence ).

7 UN should ban journalists who hit religions .

8 UNO member states referendum for peace invasions .

You're not supposed to focus on the cause and effects of holy wars. You're going to agree or disagree with the statement I.e. are modern wars holy wars or not? You can write up a basic back ground of what's a holy war and mention any that you know of and then focus on modern wars and that give arguments in favour of your thesis statement which should be, " Modern wars are/are not holy wars."

I also attempted the same, can you share the outline?

I am troubled with curiosity that why I flunked twice in English Essay?
I scored 32 twice but cant get it why can someone tell me the reasons why examiner fails a candidate? please waiting anxiously for replies.

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