I've written something very similar but at a very basic level. This is amazing.

I thought no one would have attempted this, very nice to see the level of intellect and diction deployed.

Shellar! To which Essay are you refering Sir?

[QUOTE=abrash Durrani;1062806]Shellar! To which Essay are you refering Sir?[/QUOTE]

He is referring to global warming essay.

My outline for global warming essay.

Introduction.
1. Global warming is a serious threat. It is, not only, a threat to humanity. It is also a threat to flora and fauna. It is the result of insatiable greed of man who has failed to exploit the nature appropriately.
2. The threat of global warming can be gauged by its manifestations which have become reality.
Thesis statement.
Through coherent and expansive environment policies the threat of global warming can be assauged.

Global warming has become a serious threat and following are it's manifestations:
1. Increase in earth average temperature since industrial revolution.
2. Melting of permafrost and glaciers which has endangered the lives of many creatures.
3. Acidification of oceans and the fate of coral reefs.
4. Rise in sea level.
5. Change in demography and topography.
6. Change in climate patterns and world has become prone to hurricanes and natural disasters.
7. It has resulted in drought and issue of water scarcity.
8. It has contributed in vector borne diseases.
9. Food insecurity.
10. Extinction of many species in arctic zone.

Causes of global warming.
1. Increase use of fossil fuels and rise in GHGs.
2. Solar activity.
3. Urban sprawling and increase in human population.
4. Economic nationalism.
5. Failure of the states to conform to international protocols
A. Kyoto protocol
B. Copenhagen
C. Rio conferences

Ways to counter the threat:
1. All the states should conform to the Paris accord.
2. Renewable resources should be employed.
3. Afforestation programmes should be initiated as in pakistan 2012 forest policy aims to prevent this issue.
4. Energy efficient vehicles to be made.
5. Car emission tax should be enforced.
6. Decisive rules to be made and global powers should actively participate.
7. The government should follow its climate policy 2013 in its true letter and spirit.
8. Civil societies and green political parties should actively participate.
9. Media and educational institutions should also take an active role.

Conclusion.

[QUOTE=ERUDITE5;1062811]My outline for global warming essay.

Introduction.
1. Global warming is a serious threat. It is, not only, a threat to humanity. It is also a threat to flora and fauna. It is the result of insatiable greed of man who has failed to exploit the nature appropriately.
2. The threat of global warming can be gauged by its manifestations which have become reality.
Thesis statement.
Through coherent and expansive environment policies the threat of global warming can be assauged.

Global warming has become a serious threat and following are it's manifestations:
1. Increase in earth average temperature since industrial revolution.
2. Melting of permafrost and glaciers which has endangered the lives of many creatures.
3. Acidification of oceans and the fate of coral reefs.
4. Rise in sea level.
5. Change in demography and topography.
6. Change in climate patterns and world has become prone to hurricanes and natural disasters.
7. It has resulted in drought and issue of water scarcity.
8. It has contributed in vector borne diseases.
9. Food insecurity.
10. Extinction of many species in arctic zone.

Causes of global warming.
1. Increase use of fossil fuels and rise in GHGs.
2. Solar activity.
3. Urban sprawling and increase in human population.
4. Economic nationalism.
5. Failure of the states to conform to international protocols
A. Kyoto protocol
B. Copenhagen
C. Rio conferences

Ways to counter the threat:
1. All the states should conform to the Paris accord.
2. Renewable resources should be employed.
3. Afforestation programmes should be initiated as in pakistan 2012 forest policy aims to prevent this issue.
4. Energy efficient vehicles to be made.
5. Car emission tax should be enforced.
6. Decisive rules to be made and global powers should actively participate.
7. The government should follow its climate policy 2013 in its true letter and spirit.
8. Civil societies and green political parties should actively participate.
9. Media and educational institutions should also take an active role.

Conclusion.[/QUOTE]
Kindly evaluate it.

[QUOTE=ERUDITE5;1062811]My outline for global warming essay.

Introduction.
1. Global warming is a serious threat. It is, not only, a threat to humanity. It is also a threat to flora and fauna. It is the result of insatiable greed of man who has failed to exploit the nature appropriately.
2. The threat of global warming can be gauged by its manifestations which have become reality.
Thesis statement.
Through coherent and expansive environment policies the threat of global warming can be assauged.

Global warming has become a serious threat and following are it's manifestations:
1. Increase in earth average temperature since industrial revolution.
2. Melting of permafrost and glaciers which has endangered the lives of many creatures.
3. Acidification of oceans and the fate of coral reefs.
4. Rise in sea level.
5. Change in demography and topography.
6. Change in climate patterns and world has become prone to hurricanes and natural disasters.
7. It has resulted in drought and issue of water scarcity.
8. It has contributed in vector borne diseases.
9. Food insecurity.
10. Extinction of many species in arctic zone.

Causes of global warming.
1. Increase use of fossil fuels and rise in GHGs.
2. Solar activity.
3. Urban sprawling and increase in human population.
4. Economic nationalism.
5. Failure of the states to conform to international protocols
A. Kyoto protocol
B. Copenhagen
C. Rio conferences

Ways to counter the threat:
1. All the states should conform to the Paris accord.
2. Renewable resources should be employed.
3. Afforestation programmes should be initiated as in pakistan 2012 forest policy aims to prevent this issue.
4. Energy efficient vehicles to be made.
5. Car emission tax should be enforced.
6. Decisive rules to be made and global powers should actively participate.
7. The government should follow its climate policy 2013 in its true letter and spirit.
8. Civil societies and green political parties should actively participate.
9. Media and educational institutions should also take an active role.

Conclusion.[/QUOTE]

To the point and I hope its up to the mark for the examiner, if your paragraphs are as good as outline. Hoping to see you come through in this subject. Best of luck

[QUOTE=saniam;1062828]To the point and I hope its up to the mark for the examiner, if your paragraphs are as good as outline. Hoping to see you come through in this subject. Best of luck[/QUOTE]

Brother I wrote short sentences with short paragraph. The word limit was 2200 words.

[QUOTE=ERUDITE5;1062811]My outline for global warming essay.

Introduction.
1. Global warming is a serious threat. It is, not only, a threat to humanity. It is also a threat to flora and fauna. It is the result of insatiable greed of man who has failed to exploit the nature appropriately.
2. The threat of global warming can be gauged by its manifestations which have become reality.
Thesis statement.
Through coherent and expansive environment policies the threat of global warming can be assauged.

Global warming has become a serious threat and following are it's manifestations:
1. Increase in earth average temperature since industrial revolution.
2. Melting of permafrost and glaciers which has endangered the lives of many creatures.
3. Acidification of oceans and the fate of coral reefs.
4. Rise in sea level.
5. Change in demography and topography.
6. Change in climate patterns and world has become prone to hurricanes and natural disasters.
7. It has resulted in drought and issue of water scarcity.
8. It has contributed in vector borne diseases.
9. Food insecurity.
10. Extinction of many species in arctic zone.

Causes of global warming.
1. Increase use of fossil fuels and rise in GHGs.
2. Solar activity.
3. Urban sprawling and increase in human population.
4. Economic nationalism.
5. Failure of the states to conform to international protocols
A. Kyoto protocol
B. Copenhagen
C. Rio conferences

Ways to counter the threat:
1. All the states should conform to the Paris accord.
2. Renewable resources should be employed.
3. Afforestation programmes should be initiated as in pakistan 2012 forest policy aims to prevent this issue.
4. Energy efficient vehicles to be made.
5. Car emission tax should be enforced.
6. Decisive rules to be made and global powers should actively participate.
7. The government should follow its climate policy 2013 in its true letter and spirit.
8. Civil societies and green political parties should actively participate.
9. Media and educational institutions should also take an active role.

Conclusion.[/QUOTE]

Wow! Is this your first attempt?

[QUOTE=Bakr;1070757]Wow! Is this your first attempt?[/QUOTE]

Second. Sir is it appropriate and passing?

[QUOTE=ERUDITE5;1070937]Second. Sir is it appropriate and passing?[/QUOTE]

I find it very comprehensive and relevant. To my knowledge it is an expository topic which is fact based and there is not much to deduct for the examiner if facts are stated the way they are. I am speculating that you will score really good marks (In Sha Allah).

Note: This is only a personal opinion, neither am I an examiner nor an expert :pp