[QUOTE=Ammarrashid;1057921]Ok, I get it, you are a serving csp, but that doesn't give you the right to be rude or demoralize others. You are not in any way the examiner, so your opinion is just an opinion.[/QUOTE]

Yes my opinion is just an opinion. I can say whatever i want to on this public forum (within limits). People are sharing their outline to b evaluated. if someone does not want opinion on his/her performance in exam, he may refrain from sharing it with other people. It is quite simple, isn't it?
by the way, i can sense a jealous burnt up person in your form :)
try performing in exam, and we shall see whether you get it right or not because i did it right :)

[QUOTE=lovereflector;1057923]Calm down dude! You are a csp and we respect your freedom of speech.[/QUOTE]

I am calm, i have nothing to lose and very little to achieve

[QUOTE=Mohdarslankhan;1057924]Aoa everyone. I am last year’s qualifier. I just want to say a couple of things. No one has experience to evaluate other’s outline. So please dont disheart anyone. This will demoralize them. What you have done is past and nothing can change it. Just focus on remaining papers. Last time many criticized my essay outline on colonial mentality that i will fail but i passed. So dont lose hope.
Secondly, my recommended outline for global warming will be that which also covers effects of GM on Pakistan and what Pak has done to mitigate it. In addition, what else can be done in Pak. Examiner sees info relating to Pak. He is impressed when one covers from both global as well as national level.

Best of luck everyone. Dont waste time by discussing what you have done. Just focus on future.
God bless you all[/QUOTE]

if something is shared here, it will be discussed and yes people will en/dis courage you. I would say it again, if you don't want people's opinion don't share your stuff here. It is quite simple

[QUOTE=Noormah Khan;1057833]I opted topic 9. ‘Will ‘Rule of law’ always remain an impracticable myth in our country?’

1- Introduction
-How media has desensitised the corruption culture in Pakistan.
-Pakistan rank in Transparent International Corruption
-Pakistan rank in Global Gender Gap Report.
-over 1.8 million cases pending in Pakistan- Dawn Report
-Recent Examples of Zainab, Naqeeb, PM case
Thesis statement : Rule of law is one of the fundamental pillars of democratic countries, Unfortunately Pakistan is one of those democratic crountries where rule of law would always remain impracticable
2- Genesis of Rule of Law in pakistan
3- Brief History of its implementation in early stages
-establishment of FACC
-NAB
4- Manifestation of lack of Rule of Law
- Public sphere
-Economic sphere
-Social sphere
-administrative sphere
5-Why it is a myth ? current Impediments.
- institution victimization
-exploitation of weak
-weak judiciary
- state incompetency to apply education at primary level
-poverty
-political instability
-Economic Instability
6- Why it will remain a Myth ? Future Constraints
-reforms and instituion building
-economic reforms
-political turmoils
-lack of ppl to come forward
-Role of judiciary and Parliament
7- Global view
- Khaleda Zia’s arrest
-Turkey 2013 corruption scandal
-irelan re elections
8- conclusion
How shall we reap fruit of rule of law in future if we are not sowing the seeds today.

Comments ?[/QUOTE]

Consider me a newbie learning from your experiences. Only this outline seems perfect, as it has covered exactly what is asked in the paper and it is driving across the only keyword "Rule of Law" in different aspects and in the context of Pakistan as well, with strong arguments.

Rest, I think it is necessary for an aspirant to first understand the topic and where it belongs, then opt it and present your arguments.

[QUOTE=Farhan Kaif;1057816]I went for ambiguous topic, now thinking that I've misinterpreted the topic
Kindly evaluate my outlines
My outlines for topic 7 were like

- Introduction
- overview of corruption and terrorism
- corruption and terrorism in Pakistan
- Causes
A) corruption
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2
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B) Terrorism
1
2
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- Effects
Corruption
1
2
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B) Terrorism
1
2
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- No Compromise in humans rights and civil liberties
A) Politically
B) Religiously
C) Economically
D) Socially
E) Administratively

( I was planning to provide ways to counter it but I was left with no time at last)

- conclusion

Did I opt it well or not?
My introduction was from the quote

"Power tends to corrupt absolute power corrupts absolutely"
Lord Acton

This is what I did today.[/QUOTE]
1. What are the Human Rights and Civil Liberties Enshrine in 1973 Constitution of Pakistan from articles( 8-28)?

1.1. Right of individuals to be dealt in accordance with the law

1.2. Right of fair trial

1.3. Right of Freedom of Movement

1.4. Right of Assembly

1.5. Right of inviolability of dignity of citizens

1.6. Freedom of speech

2. Why human rights and civil liberties should not be compromised in fight against terrorism and corruption?

Because:

2.1. These are protected under Universal Declaration of Human Rights (1948)

2.2. These are protected under 1973 Constitution of Pakistan

3. How The war against terrorism and corruption is compromising human rights and civil liberties?

3.1. By violating right of individuals to be dealt in accordance with the law (Extrajudicial killings to eliminate hard core terrorists,)

3.2. By violating right to fair trial (Saudi Arab's drive against corruption where alleged were not brought before court, Military courts secret proceedings, abductions in war against terrorism)

3.3. By violating right of Freedom of Movement (blockades near important government installations on the pretext of security)

3.4. By violating right of inviolability of dignity of citizens (humiliation through media trials in corruption cases even offence is yet to prove before the court)

3.6. By violating freedom of speech (ban on loud speakers on the pretext of curbing hate speech)

4. Can human rights and civil liberties absolutely be maintained in fight against terrorism and corruption?

4.1. No, because extraordinary times require extraordinary measures, however, such violations can be reduced.

5. How to avoid compromising human rights and civil liberties in the fight against corruption and terrorism?

By:

5.1. Judicial activism to protect human rights under Article 184 (3) of 1973 Constitution of Pakistan

5.2. Strict vigilance by Human Rights Commission of Pakistan

5.3. Developing consensus in the society to not let down these human rights and civil liberties in any case

5.4. Vibrant civil society

5.5. Pro-active role of media in highlighting such violations

6. Conclusion:

I attempted this way

Yes. Thats the correct approach. Mature attempt. In sha Allah you will score good because you moved in the right direction and proved your claims with appropriate facts. Well you could have written even more on this topic. Still it will help you cross 40 easily

CPEC and its Socio economic implications for the region and the world.
 

CPEC and its Socio economic implications for the region and the world.
[B]Introduction:[/B]
1. Realization of economic prosperity through regional integration in the wake of post-cold war, multi polar and war stricken 20th century
[B]Cpec – an overview:[/B]
1. A series of projects manifesting China’s one belt one route policy
2. 56b dollars project answering all the concerns on Pakistan China Friendship
3. Connecting Xingjian to Gawadar
4. Roads (From Karachi to Peshawar, Hassan Abdal to Khunjrab)
5. Railway track (From Gawadar to Karachi)
6. Dams, Power projects
7. Mass Transit Projects
[B]Socio Economic Implications:[/B]
[B]1. For China[/B]
a. Geo Economic Masterstroke of China
b. Fulfill ever increasing needs for China’s Energy driven policy
c. Maintain its exceptional 9.5% annual economic growth rate
d. Secure and expand its oil trade routes
e. Eliminate transportation and political risks
i. US blockade of Maritime routes in Taiwan Issue
ii. Indian and US Surveillance in Indian Ocean
iii. Threat of Somalian Pirates
iv. Danger to Malaccan Dream
f. Reduction of Distance
i. 13000 miles of dangerous route to 2500 miles safe route
ii. Easy access to central Asian and middle east
[B]2. For Pakistan[/B]
a. Economic Prosperity
b. Development of Balochistan through Gawadar
c. Development of Transit Economy of Pakistan
d. Pakistan can withstand US threat of stopping 1.2 b dollars aid
e. Control US dominating intervention in this region
f. Foreign Direct Investment will be increased
g. Modes of transportation will be modernized
[B]3. For Region:[/B]
a. Central Asian region’s strategic importance: 60% of world oil and 40% of natural gas reserves
b. Access to middle east
c. Stability through infrastructural development
d. Alleviation of poverty in Africa
[B]4. For the world[/B]
a. Easy and swift access to European Markets and Uk
b. Check on US dominating influence
c. Presenting a soft image of China
5. Criticism on CPEC:
a. New East India Company in Making
b. China’s attempt to rule the world
c. Cultural invasion
[B]6. Defense of CPEC:[/B]
a. Dynamics are different. Now no room for imperialism. Unlike East India Company’s hegemonic approach, CPEC has amiable approach.
b. Realism allows every country to enhance its power and rule the world. China’s approach of mutual cooperation is way better than America’s coercive approach that has given nothing but the bloodshed and wars.
c. Globalized world has given way to hybrid identities and pluralistic cultures. Now acceptance for diversity therefore a threat of cultural invasion does not exist.
[B]7. Conclusion.[/B]

What mistakes in essay cause failure ?

[QUOTE=fgump;1057922]i hope and pray i'll get passing marks.
Too many of us are not living our dreams …….

I. Introduction
Many of us are not living our dream of
1 A healthy Globe…….in shape of Global warming & climate change
2 Peaceful Coexistence……...in shape of nuclear arms race
3 Classless society……….. fear of downward spiral
4 Successful Career ……… working as A robot or machine
5 Fruitful Love life…….. adjustments
II. Dreams not pursued owing to
1 Fear of Diverging Interest…...pursuance of self interest instead of collective interest
2 Fear of Retaliation…...proxy wars
3 Fear of losing the status quo……..white collar man theory
4 Fear of Failure……...in case of choosing career path of one's own choice and Aptitude
5 Fear of Rejection…….psychological trauma, violence and unhealthy married life.
III. Suggestions for overcoming fears
leap of faith, fortunes also favour the brave, and many more … quotations if everything was perfect you ll never learn you ll never grow……
IV. Conclusion
On a positive note[/QUOTE]
If you wrote the essay the way you framed the outline and justified your stance with solid examples,you will definitely pass.By the way,i am impressed by your outline.

I wrote my Essay on Democracy in Pakistan: Hopes and Hurdles
1. Introduction
2. Philosophical and Historical Background of Democracy
3. Pakistani Forefathers and their ideology for Pakistan
4. Hurdles
4.1 Failure in Early Consensus
4.2 History of Military rule and colonial legacy
4.3 Low literacy rate
4.4 Regional Dynamics and Insecurities of Pakistan
4.5 Socio-economic inequality and high poverty rate in Pakistan
4.6 Identity Issues
4.7 Lack of Rule of Law and justice
5 Hopes
5.1 1973 Constitution
5.2 Political Parties
5.2 Elections of 2008 and 2013
5.3 Introduction of Local Government
5.4 Changing Balancing of Power between the three branches and institutions of Pakistan
5.5 Political Enlightenment
5.6 Diverse Population of Pakistan
6 Conclusion

I wrote long paragraphs but short sentences. A lot of cutting was also involved. 3 to 4 books were referenced and 3 to 4 philosophers were also pointed out. Moreover, I wrote around 1700 to 1800 words. Lastly, there were 2 to 3 more points in my essay but I don't remember them now.