Essay paper 2011
 

[B]Essay paper 2011[/B]
1. Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom by the print and electronic media

2.Without good communication skills, life becomes impossible in the modern world.

3.The time we live in is the winter of the world.

4. In this country reason does not apply to anything,

5.Does Pakistan society regard woman as the angel in the house or source of all evils?

6. Disaster management and government preparedness

7.Fair play and life, as it is lived,in the land of the pure.

8.The pleasures of reading.

9.What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?

10.Insanity in individuals is something rare but in groups,parties and nations it is the rule.

very unexpected paper.i prepared 10 essays and non of them appeared.i attempted the hurdles .I attempted ":What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state."Let us see what happens.

[QUOTE=mechrose37;271401]very unexpected paper.i prepared 10 essays and non of them appeared.i attempted the hurdles .I attempted ":What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state."Let us see what happens.[/QUOTE]

Disaster Management was very much discussed in Forum and I hope Forum Members must have attempted that topic well. Because in almost every expected topics list its was mentioned. :king

a tough one... please members share ur outline..

pretty easy
 

pretty easy yar but very technical as expected........ i attempted Disaster Management as DeadlyDoctor said it was discussd......my outlines were

Definition
Risk assessment
Prevention measures
Preparedness to cope with future disasters
Emergency response to a disaster
Recovery and reconstruction
Good Development
EarthQuake and our govt responce
Floods and our govt responce
Launch of DMP and its effectiveness
Conclusion

Seniors plz comment

What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?

1.Introduction
2.A brief hstory of pakistan.
3.Hurdles in the path of truly independent state:
Fragile Economy
Lack of iNDEPENDENT fOREIGN pOLICY
Mistrust between provinces
Absence of true democracy
terrorism
Increasing influence of clergy in politics
4.How these hurdles can be removed
Self reliance
End of feudalism
True Spirit of democracy
Independent foreign policy
5.Are aforementioned goals realy achievable?
6.Conclusion

yes its a difficult but i did second essay

its comme from literatue and sociology and 2 are extrmely controversal essay

Essays seems to be easy but tricky...Keep sharing your outlines

Introduction

Disaster Management
 Disaster Management Cycle
 Pre-Disaster strategies
 Running-State Disaster strategies
 Post- Disaster strategies

Pakistan Scenario
 Geography
 Floods
 Drought
 Earthquake
 Cyclone

Disaster Management Policy at National Level

Organizations with Overall Disaster Management Responsibilities
 Emergency Relief Cell
 Pakistan Meteorological Department
 Federal Flood Commission
 National Crisis Management Cell
 Dams Safety Council , SUPARCO
 Civil Defence, Provincial Relief Departments , Provincial Irrigation Departments Provincial Health Departments
 Provincial Agriculture & Livestock Departments , Provincial Food Departments
 Communication & Works , Planning & Development
 Army & Police Role

Legislation for Disaster Mitigation and Management
 The National Calamities (Prevention and Relief) Act, 1958
 Emergency Services Ordinance, 2002

Role of the Key Players in facing Disasters
 Communities
 Local govt
 National govt
 Regional institutions and organizations .
 International bodies
 Non-governmental organizations (NGOs)
 The private sector
 The scientific community

Conclusion

easiest one
 

these r the actual topics

1.freedom of press n its effects
2.importance of communication skills
5. status of women
6. disaster management
8. reading
9. hurdles in development of Pakistan OR socio-economic problems of Pakistan
10. unity is strength

Essay Paper 2011
 

[SIZE="4"][FONT="Georgia"][CENTER][B]Compitive Examination for
Recruitment to posts in BS-17
Under the federal government of Pakistan, 2011[/B][/CENTER][/FONT][/SIZE]

[B][U][COLOR="Black"][SIZE="4"][CENTER][FONT="Georgia"][U]Essay[/U][/FONT][/CENTER][/SIZE][/COLOR][/U][/B]

[B][LEFT][U]Time allowed: Three Houres[/U] [/LEFT][/B] [RIGHT][B][U]Maximum Marks: 100[/U][/B][/RIGHT]

[U][B]NOTE:[/B][/U] Make an outline and write a [B]Comprihensive Essay (2500-3500 words)[/B] on any one of the following.



[B]1. Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom enjoys by the print media and electronic media.

2. Whithout good comunication skills, life becomes impossible in the modern world.

3. The time we live in is the winter of the world.

4. In this country reason does not apply to anything.

5. Does pakistani society regard women as the angle in the house of the source of all evils?

6. Disaster managment and govenment preparedness.

7. Fair play and life, as it is lived, in the land of poor.

8. The pleasure of reading.

9. What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truely indipendent state?

10. Insanity in individual is something rare but groups, parties and nations it is the rule.[/B]

I wrote 2200 words on

[B][U]What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?[/U][/B]

My Outline was

[B]INTRODUCTION[/B]
Hallmarks of our dependence
What are truly independent states

[B]HISTORICAL PERSPECTIVE[/B]
Alignment towards one superpower
1950s
1960s-1980s
1990s
Post 9/11

External Interferences
Dismemberment of East Pakistan 1971

Nuclear Explosions 1998

[B]MAIN CAUSES[/B]
Lack of National Integration
Failure of Democracy
Poor Economic Growth
Lack of Education & Health care
Dependence on foreign aid

[B]REMEDIAL MEASURES[/B]
Economic Turnaround
National Integration
Provision of Social services
Democracy must be allowed to flourish

[B]CONCLUSION[/B]

Outline was on 1.5 pages and essay on 11 pages

[QUOTE=Yasinleo;271426]these r the actual topics

1.freedom of press n its effects
2.importance of communication skills
5. status of women
6. disaster management
8. reading
9. hurdles in development of Pakistan OR socio-economic problems of Pakistan
10. unity is strength[/QUOTE]
1.statement demands why media having freedom lacks truth factor
2.statement demands importance but it also has two more words life and modern world
5.you have to say her angel or source of evil,not both
6.disaster management is only a part,government facts and figures and measures are also important
pleasures are asked only in case of reading
hurdles to be an independent state-yes socio-economic

I think it was an easy one for the person who prepared..!! I think I prepapared just one essay full fledged :D and dat was in paper ;)

Mein e Bismillah ker deti hun
Logo mera essay nae acha hua,I attempted the first one:(:(:
Only 7 pages and perhaps the wrong handling of the topic:(
:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:

[QUOTE=mani1;271469]I wrote 2200 words on

[B][U]What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?[/U][/B]

My Outline was

[B]INTRODUCTION[/B]
Hallmarks of our dependence
What are truly independent states

[B]HISTORICAL PERSPECTIVE[/B]
Alignment towards one superpower
1950s
1960s-1980s
1990s
Post 9/11

External Interferences
Dismemberment of East Pakistan 1971

Nuclear Explosions 1998

[B]MAIN CAUSES[/B]
Lack of National Integration
Failure of Democracy
Poor Economic Growth
Lack of Education & Health care
Dependence on foreign aid

[B]REMEDIAL MEASURES[/B]
Economic Turnaround
National Integration
Provision of Social services
Democracy must be allowed to flourish

[B]CONCLUSION[/B]

Outline was on 1.5 pages and essay on 11 pages[/QUOTE]



Same topic and same outline:vic

I chose topic no. [B]9: Hurdles to being independent[/B]

[B]1) Introduction[/B]
(a) The meaning of Independence/Sovereignty
(b) The sovereign states of the world
(c) The Third World and Pakistan

[B]2) Hurdles[/B]
(a) Illiteracy, lack of awareness, "sheep" mentality.
(b) Weak economy - interdependence, neocolonialism.
(c) Disunity, nationalist sentiments, political instability.
(d) Opportunism, self-serving politicians and people. Brain drain.
(e) Lack of freedom for citizens results in an oppressed state.

[B]3) Solutions[/B]
(a) Introducing rural education to most backward areas, improving overall quality.
(b) Aim for self-sufficiency, land reform, nurture growth.
(c) Promote national ideology,
(d) Promotion of human rights, curbing of power of establishment.


It was something like this. I think it was average at best. I could've written a lot better but I felt so tired after the half-way mark! =(

OOps..!! Farrah..!! Better luck next time :P
Dont woory ho jayay ga clear :)

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;271476]Mein e Bismillah ker deti hun
Logo mera essay nae acha hua,I attempted the first one:(:(:
Only 7 pages and perhaps the wrong handling of the topic:(
:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:[/QUOTE]

Dont worry dear. you have too much time and two remaining chances yet. Attempt your papers for exprience:ph34r:

I did a major blunder by allocating 45 minutes to outline; Yes 45 mins! Therefore due to lack of time I could only write 2200 words. This however has been a very humbling and interesting experience. Hopefully I would do better in next papers

Im quite happy with my essay ppr:pp:pp..but compostion was lil tough....:thinking:thinking

i wrote an essay on [B]Disaster mangt and Govt preparedness[/B] which i hav prepared jst a couple of days befor ppr...:P:P:P now need prayers for the rest....

@Mani: I did the same mistake :D But its experience yar :P

BEST of luck to farah...dont worry

Best ov luck!

Hey Farrah..!! Now dont do foolishness of leaving rest of the papers unattempted or with less concentration..!! Ur attempt is counted, so complete it..!! They will help u in future :)

By the way, can anyone tell me how many marks they usually give? I was told that you'd be lucky if you got 50. I thought people would score up to 70 in this. Can anyone shed some light on this?

Hey Farrah no worries, mine was of 10 pages...i went for the 9th one... my composition paper was a disaster...uss mein tou mai gaey:sad

[QUOTE=Invincible;271497][B]I would love to attempt on

[U]8. The pleasure of reading[/U][/B][/QUOTE]

Hey what would be your outline?
I planned to attempt it but I had no quotes for it as well as I couldn't make its outline in spite of thinking hard:(

hey farah dear...
 

Best of luck yara

inshallah u will be through it smoothly, last time hua tha aise mere sath but i cleared...

So with regards and prayers....

[B] 6. Disaster management and government preparedness.

I attempted this one and I hope did fine.
[/B]

I think This Paper was a bit easy than that of CE-2010. Becoz the common topics likke Media, women, Failure of democracy, Disaster management etc can be seen.

9.What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?, is very easy topic and one can write thosands of words on this topic,

[quote=rfarooq;271505][b] 6. Disaster management and government preparedness.

I attempted this one and i hope did fine.
[/b][/quote]

ya i think u made a good choice.

[QUOTE=islah_G;271506]I think This Paper was a bit easy than that of CE-2010. Becoz the common topics likke Media, women, Failure of democracy, Disaster management etc can be seen.

9.What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?, is very easy topic and one can write thosands of words on this topic,[/QUOTE]

How much did you score in your essay paper, by the way? And how much do people generally score?

[B][SIZE="4"]Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom enjoyed by the print and electronic media[/SIZE][/B]:(..

Please koi mujhe Yaqeen dilaye k meray pass honay k chances hain becz I wrote only 7 pages:(

[SIZE="4"][B]Introduction[/B][/SIZE]

[FONT="Comic Sans MS"][/FONT][B]Mightiest of the mighty means,
On which the arm of progress leans,
man's noblest mission to advance,
His woes assuage,his heal enhance,
His rights enforce,his wrongs redress,
Mightiest of the mighty is press.
(Sir John Bowring)[/B]

-Power of media
-struggle to achieve freedom
-relationship between freedom of speech and truth
-Keats's line

[B]"Beauty is truth,truth beauty,that is all ye know on earth and all ye need to know"[/B]

[B][SIZE="4"]Print Media
[/SIZE][/B]-pre partition news papers' hadn't freedom but truth
-Example of Zamindar newspaper
-Now a days biased columns
-Half truth itself is a lie

[B][SIZE="4"]Electronic Media[/SIZE][/B]

-Convey news without confirming
-produce thrill and sensation
-an influencing power but misuses
-Quote by Conrad

[B]"Power corrupts man and absolute power corrupts absolutely"[/B]

[B][SIZE="4"]Reasons behind untruthfulness [/SIZE][/B]

-Political pressure
-materialism(no noble cause)
[B]"materialism is the death of spirituality"[/B]
-Islam is not followed whose main emphasis is upon truth

[B][SIZE="4"]Remedies[/SIZE][/B]

-teaching of Islam through instituition of Family
-Holy Prophet sticked to truth in spite of sufferings
-Socrates Example

aakhir mein Ghalib ka shair ager ap logon ko aitraz na ho tou...bcz I wrote it in the end:pp

[B]Saadiq hun apnay qaul pe Ghalib khuda gawah,
kehta hun sach k jhoot ki aadat nahi mujhe..![/B]

[B](I'm sticked to my saying,God is witness,I speak truth as I'm not used to tell a lie)
[/B]

My Essay
 

Guys i have tried to attempt Disaster Management and government preparedness and almost covered everything :thinking.

I had written around 2700 words.
I am trying to list down my outline which i think i have forgotten. :ohmy:

My outline
 

[SIZE="4"][B]What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truely independent state?[/B][/SIZE]

[SIZE="4"][U][B]Outline[/B][/U][/SIZE]

[B]1. Introduction[/B]
[B][LIST][*]Main points of the stability of a state[*]Good Governance[*]Loyalty of leaders to the nation[*]Democracy[*]Independent Judiciary[*]Foreign Policy[*]Interior policies, planing and legislature[*]Power resources, there best use[/LIST][/B]

[B][SIZE="4"]2. Hurdles[/SIZE][/B]
[B][LIST][*]Our economical situation on the day of our independence[*]Migration[*]Division of assets between India and Pakistan[*]Martial laws and economy[*]wars and our economy[*]energy crisis and its impact on our economy[*]War on terror and its impact on our economy and national sovereignity [*]Loss of 4o billion[*]Politics in Pakistan[*]Corruption, Malpractice [*]provincial prejudices[*]Mismanagement of natural resources[*]Debts and Loans[*]Price hiking due to our crippling economy[*]Dissaster, floods, earthquacks[*]Another Dhaka situation in Balochistan[*]Bad policies and bad politics[/LIST][/B]

[B][SIZE="4"]3. How to be an independent State?[/SIZE][/B][LIST][*]To revive our foreign policy[*]to review our ties with other countries (usa)[*]Central Asian countries and Pakistan[*]Pakistan, India Afghanistan relations[*]Pakistan, Iran, India relations and gas pipeline[*]Gawadar port and its use by CA countries and in reward we can get petrollium and gas[*]International debt and Pakistan[*]Good governance[*]strict punishments for such actions which are harmful for whole the nation(corruption)[*]NFC Awards[*]truely managment and use of our natural resources (thar coal)[*]Back industries to make a rapid change nd progress in overall economical situation[*]Steps to the betterment of Law and order[*]Mature legislature[*]Independent Judiciary[*]Loyal Adminstration[*]Acknowlegment of people to back country by saving natural resources through media[*]Conclusion[*]"God helps those who help themselves"[/LIST][B][/B];)

[QUOTE=maha4799;271504]Best of luck yara

inshallah u will be through it smoothly, last time hua tha aise mere sath but i cleared...

So with regards and prayers....[/QUOTE]

Thanx Maha..ap ne kitnay pages likhay thay last time aur kitnay marks aye?

CSS Forum should give me the "Best Guess Award". I suggested three essays and two came in the exams.
[url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compulsory-subjects/essay/41149-top-5-essay-2011-a-2.html[/url]

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;271476]Mein e Bismillah ker deti hun
Logo mera essay nae acha hua,I attempted the first one:(:(:
Only 7 pages and perhaps the wrong handling of the topic:(
:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:cry:[/QUOTE]

[B]No physician is really good before he has killed one or two patients. ~Hindu Proverb

You would learn alot from this experience.

Allah bless you[/B]

[QUOTE=waseem gurmani;271516]CSS Forum should give me the "Best Guess Award". I suggested three essays and two came in the exams.
[url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compulsory-subjects/essay/41149-top-5-essay-2011-a-2.html[/url][/QUOTE]

ap award le lain>>>>:king

yahan pass honay k laalay paray hain:(