[QUOTE=wasioabbasi;562590]Thank you. Things just clicked this way and I kept adding them up to make sense out of it. Since I am attempting British History, i got to know more about Industrial Revolution and used it as illustration. I also visited the old news when videos of cyber cafes were released online about couples and some of the girls had committed suicide as a result (future consequences) and a recent story where a mother in US mistakenly killed her son who disturbed her while she was playing Farmville.
But i guess being a blogger and social media enthusiast i am better able to understand since i have faced and mitigated some of the problems that have been listed on my outline.[/QUOTE] - Yes i can see "social media" in your interests and you have made made excellent use of your knowledge. I wish such things had clicked my mind too! :) |
[QUOTE=dms664;562544]I think I should share the outline before it vanishes off my mind.
My outline which I can recall: -introduction -non tech age w/o internet and telephone -sincere relationships -slow pace of life -arranged marriages -love marriages -postal letters -romeo Juliet, heer ranjha, adam khan durkhanai - telephone and mobile age - internet age - Internet relay chat (IRC) , msn , yahoo messengers - Orkut - Facebook 2004 - mark zukerberg idea of socializing online for educational institutions - Focus on Facebook as it is the concerned social network - Positive use of Facebook - Negative use of Facebook - Discrete private messaging and chat option - how it works -Flirting with multiple people -Effects on marital life of married couples -divorce rate on the rise - honor killings - video chat -dating culture promotion - showing off amid blood relations on social networks - mock up relationships - greedy young hunters searching old but rich ladies - old and rich ladies luring young men for physical needs - time pass relationships - cheating couples -broken families -Recommendations / cure - nothing is good or bad but its use - Educating people - employing religious clerics to educate people - strict control by parents - controlled and monitored internet access - early marriages, kill frustration - Conclusion (end on positive note) :bow My essay was small and people taunted me for writing such small essay. 2 pages for outline and 13 pages essay. I am satisfied with the essay and leaving the results on Allah.[/QUOTE] Bro Good Attempt, but don't you think k ap kuch ziada over nahi ho gaye? Like apki kuch outline embarrasing nahi ha? Like: "old and rich ladies luring young men for physical needs". |
[QUOTE=fary s;562108]gender equality is a myth[/QUOTE]
I think easy paper is followed by a difficult paper marking. |
[QUOTE=Rawalpindi Express;562586]My outline was like this,a relatively short essay i think...(one or two forgotten :D)
Introduction What is communication? What is Modern Day communication? What is Relationship? What is True Relationship? What are Social Networks? Role Of Facebook Facebook Pages Creating hatred -Pages related to Sports -Pages related to Specific Countries -Pages related to different parties Role of Twitter Role Of Google+ Role of Orkut Role of Stumbleupon Role of Messangers Role of skype How they Destroying Relationships Fake Profiles/Accounts Zero in real life hero on social networks Mostly Pre-mature\Teens\Youth Minds on Social Networks Video chat Scandals Creating sense of jealousy among FB users(recent study) Online scams People are more intersted in status updates then work Sunny-side of Social Networks Conclusion.[/QUOTE] Well done:clap, The best outline so far in my point of view. But might include some more points. Like: wastage of time of students Social Media a source of income Insecure |
My essay outline
"Modern day communication via social networks puts an end of true and sincere relationships." Introduction "He who is unable to live in society, or who has no need because he is sufficient for himself, must be either a beast or a god" Communication as a basis for society -Verbal and non verbal communication -evolution of language as a medium of communication - language needed for expression and socialisation Advent of modern means of communication -postal system -telegraph -internet and email -blogging -microblogging Social media Social media thrives on our basic need to express ourselves - Orkut - Google Plus - laptops and hand held devices for social networking - Social media used by people from all walks of life - Journalists, politicians, celebrities , common man and even taliban (here i discussed how taliban have been using twitter and social media to interact with outside world and even recruit) -Social media used by rebels in the arab spring Impact of Social media on our lives -Impact on personal relations - impact on marriage and increasing divorce rate -impact on parent - child relationship - growing gender gap - Parents have no time for children -example of woman who killed her child because he disturbed her while playing farmville - Impact on youngsters and their behaviour - Impact on other relations (friends/peers) - Impact on work ethics - increased procrastination and decreased productivity - Relationship with neighbours - people prefer to stay indoors decreasing their real life social activity -Impact on personality - increased depression - Multiple personaities - Pressure to keep up appearances - loosing self confidence Suggestions to improve this scenario -solution lies within the individual - role of parents in sensitising their children - knowing how to balance life - role of governments - providing safe environment for people to go out without fear Conclusion Social media is here to stay but it depends up the individual to decide whether its benefits outweigh its cost. I did my best, now just praying for a good result! |
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i have done let me take care of today ,future shal take care of it
its context i concluded the present and future are interlinked bright presnt can lead bright future into importnce of prsnt factors leading to brite today/present 1.management 2.devotion 3,education 4.experience 5.clear conscience 6.sincerity and honesty 7.harmony 8.responsibilities 9.long term policies factors for dark .... vise versa relation bw past and future hw to achieve bright future with present |
[QUOTE=Taimoor Gondal;562095]areas are almost the same. Just there is twist in topics to make the paper more analytical.
A candidate, who was reading newspaper continuesly could attempt these topics easily. Anyhow best of luck to all the aspirants.[/QUOTE] please check i have done let me take care of today ,future shall take care of it its context i concluded the present and future are interlinked bright presnt can lead bright future.if you workhard in present you have to work little in future into importnce of prsnt factors leading to brite today/present 1.management 2.devotion 3,education 4.experience 5.clear conscience 6.sincerity and honesty 7.harmony 8.responsibilities 9.long term policies 10.hardworking factors for dark .... vise versa relation bw past and future hw to achieve bright future with present |
[QUOTE=siddiqui88;562114]An easy paper but not so easy to pass; needs analytical approach to pose a difference. Majority of students would have selected general topics with generalized content and approach which would hardly give a credit. Anyhow best of luck to aspirants.[/QUOTE]
i have done let me take care of today ,future shal take care of it its context i concluded the present and future are interlinked bright presnt can lead bright future. into importnce of prsnt factors leading to brite today/present 1.management 2.devotion 3,education 4.experience 5.clear conscience 6.sincerity and honesty 7.harmony 8.responsibilities 9.long term policies 10.hardworking factors for dark .... vise versa relation bw past and future hw to achieve bright future with present |
My Essay: Country Life is Better than City Life
Well, first of all, at least the Essays I prepared never came this time around. I left Women Rights and Education and that's the greatest hit I got. When few people left after 15 min, it further added to stress level :sick.
However, I then decided NOT TO QUIT and to spend 3 hours at least by picking up a Random topic so picked up the subjected. The outline, as far I remember, goes as under: Intro -Man's desire to achieve economic prosperity -Urge to learn more and self esteem -No attention towards personal life and depleting norms -Two major sorts of living: country life and city life -Population of people living in Pakistan Merits of Country Life (opposite of which become demerits of City Life) -Pollution free environment -Pure diet and availability of pure water ensuring better health -No traffic ensuring peace of mind and preventing psychological problems such as frustration, anger and anxiety -Social bonding; gathering of marriages, deaths etc. -Collective decision making on a common cause -Ample time for family, friends and neighbours -Most of the disputes resolved at internal level; quoted customs of Chopaal and Panchayat in sub-continent as example -Joint family system -Social norms and values are held in high esteem -Comparatively much secure than city life Demerits (opposite of which become merits of City Life) -Lack of health facilities -Inadequate educational facilities -Under-developed infrastructure -Economic influence on a rise -Deprivation of facilities like gas, telephone, internet, electricity etc. -Less job opportunities due to poor education system and lack of knowledge Conclusion -Both lives having pluses and minuses and have their own importance -Varies from person to person to prefer the sort of lifestyle -City life assists in economic development while country life upholds cultural image and projects social norms; both roles much necessary for any country -Education, health facilities and infrastructure to be developed in country life -People of city need to take out time for themselves, as social values are depleting rapidly -Concluding note Let's hope ke bachat ho jaye :thinking |
Paper was a real ugly one. It seems easy but that wasn't exactly the case. The essence of CE lies not only in assessing creativity and expression but also the overall general knowledge of the candidates....
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