Seniors plz Edwardians Need your Help....!

[Maryam Wazir]

Salam All Members...!
I'm student of B.A at Edwardes College Peshawar.
our Annual University Examination Will be starting in May. So please i need your Help in Writing an impressive Essay in My English compulsory Paper.
As according to Paper Pattern The Essay will be unseen, mostly About Current situation or problems.
or any one...
Total marks of Essay is 25.
which is 33% of Paper Marks. sp these marks really matter to us.
Please give me an idea like start of An Essay, starting paragraph, mid or main body, and at last end of Essay and end paragraph..... Please you can also give An example of model Essay...

thanks

[sincere khan]

Read english newspaper must, also read articles and column, do practice of writing, try to display your view and ideas on a written form

[Maryam Wazir]

thanks.
i do read Dawn newspaper on Hourly basis, as i hv Dawn newspaper in my mobile... i read Columns and Articles of Dawn on daily basis. My only request is that how i can write a good essay which could give me at least 15 marks out of 25 in University Examination.
tell me by at least one example the model of a good essay. i have vocabulary and knowledge but the problem is i don't know the proper way of writing an impressive essay....

[kingfalcon]

Read DAWN regularly, front page, opinion/editorial pages and international page, you can skip the rest unless you have any interest in them. Write and write and write, write as much as you can and get it checked by a good teacher. You can take a lot of guidance from this sub-forum, it has essays by CSPs and many other things of your interest:
http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...ubjects/essay/


Fellow Edwardian Alumnus

[Maryam Wazir]

Thanks senior,,,,, ! it really means a lot to me,,,, our Exam is going to start from 20th May... and also I'm very glad to find Our senior edwardian here ...

[Maryam Wazir]

Q1: Translate the following into urdu.
(i). He had been afriad to fly with them.
(ii). The Hollands Operate a self sufficient farm.
(iii). In other, words, you are calling me a tyrant.
(iv) There is some inflammation of the gums.
(v). If you can't be a bush, be a bit of grass.

(B). translate into english.
1) Ache taleb-e-alim(students) hamesha saht mehnat krte hn.
2). Shor mat kro bache soo rhe hn.
3). kiya larke(boys) 2 gante se mosiki(music) soon rhe hn?.
4).Mere abba kal suba wapis ayenge.
5).Ham guzishta mah(month) lahore gya thy..

Q2. Change the voice of the following.
i).He is liked by all.
2).the cat drank all the milk.
3).Have you given her the pen?.
4).What will you have for the supper?.
5).He is being watched by the police.

(B) Fill in the blanks with proper propositions.
i).Faisalabad is famous…………its textile industry.
2).He was killed…………the robbers.
3). I haven't seen him……………August.
4).He didn't carry…………my orders.
5). she turned…………the request.

Plzzzzz solve it kindly,,,,,,!

[Maryam Wazir]

please senior help me in contexual.meanings of words in the brackets also how I will attempt it in exam as, for example decade means 10 years so how it would be its meaning in context..


For [decade] and half after WWII , there was [optimism] in the world that we had solved, or that technology would help us solve, the old problems of hunger, disease, illiteracy-- even [intolerance] . But in 1970s two new realities have become all too clear: one, technological progress has created new problems like pollution, unequal distribution of the benefits pf modernity and an uneasiness about the world we have created; and two, this advance has affected only about a quarter of world's people . The other 75 percent is still involved in the old and [bitter] struggles; This is the world of underdeveloped nations.

The picture of this underdeveloped world is a [grim] one.The majority of its population lives without what are considered the [barest] essentials in the Western world. There is a [precarious] balance between the amount of food available and the number of mouths to be fed; disease usually results in early death or permanent [debilitation]. [Vagrant] children fight the flies for food in the streets of Tehran; in calcutta there are homeless masses whose only sleeping places are the city's streets and sidewalks. For a billion and three-quarter inhabitants of south Asia, the annual per capita income is only a little more than $100-- less then the increase in earnings.reported in 1969 by the north atlantic communities. In 1950, the lower two-third of the world's population earned only 13 percent of the total world income; by 1970 this share had fallen to below 11 percent. This situation in brief, grows worse,not better.

Most of the underdeveloped lies in the southern and eastern parts of globe, but it has not always been thus; for centuries Europe looked to the east for riches,and the [misery] and poverty now [epidemic] in Africa were not known 200 years ago. The reasons for this tragic [transition] are various, chief among them the population problem, the food crisis, and the [aftermath] of [colonialism].