Bait-Baazi!
Dear Fellows I m here with some gupshup in Poetic mood!
Well The rule of [B]Bait-Baazi [/B]is User can start verse or poem just either by [B]Last character [/B]of Verse or by [B]First character [/B]of Verse.I hope it will produce a competition and situational competency potential in forum aspirants.So start verse from my side is; [B][B]R[/B]ooh koo chootay huay ik nazaray jaisa Hay woh ik shaksh Subah kay taray jais[B]a[/B][/B] So next verse can either start from [B]R[/B] or [B]A[/B]. |
Aap say zyadah koe khubsurat hua tu tu rab sae shikayat ho gy
Or agar aap ko chahnay wala koe or hua tu qiyamat sae pehlay qiyamat hogy. next y Regards. |
[B]Yah na thee hamaari qismat kay wisaal-e-yaar hoota
agar oor jeetay rahtay yahi intizaar hootA![/B] |
Aata Hai Jab DurJawani Ka Tu Aay Dostoo
Sundar Sapnay Jehan Mein Basa Deti Hain Ankhein Regards. |
[COLOR="Red"][B][SIZE="2"]Nikal ker khankahoon say ada ker rasm-e-shabiri
Kay fuqr-e-khankahi hay fakat undoh-o-dilgeri[/SIZE][/B][/COLOR] [B]Iqbal[/B] |
[B]Na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, Kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, Na hotaa main to kyaa hotaa [/B] |
[QUOTE=Najabat][B]Na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, Kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, Na hotaa main to kyaa hotaa [/B][/QUOTE] U should add a verse with Ye..... but you have started with Nuun.... So I m adding with both ends... mean [B]ye[/B] and [B]alif [/B] [B]Yaqeen muhakim, aml-e-peham, muhabbat fateh-e-alum Jihad-e-zindagani main yeh hain marduun ki shamshirain[/B] [B]Aati hay dum-e-subh sada arsh-e-bareen say Khoya giya kis tarha tera johar-e-idraak...? [/B] [B][COLOR="Red"]Iqbal [/COLOR][/B] |
Re:Miss N@qvi
Respected Sis,Actually i done that right,since requirement of Bait-Baazi is Either 1st Character of shair/verse of the last posted verse that was N(Noon) in my case.Or last character of last posted verse by anyone(Not Necesarily to be mine) which was I(Alif).So i choose N(Noon) for my Shair. Since Bait-Baazi's essence is shair per shair kahna magar lafz sirf doo hi choose kar saktay hay either first character of last posted shair or last character of last posted shair/nazam/ghazal. I hope you got it all...Nwayz A bundle of million thanx for ur active participation!!!Let me do my tern of shair!!According to your last posted verse i choose A from Aati!Tou Arz kia hay!!! [B]AKhlaaq na bartenge mudaaraa na karenge Ab hum kisii shaKhs kii paravaah na karenge Kuchh log kaii lafz galat bol rahe hain Izalaah magar ham bhii ab isalaah na karenge [/B] |
[B]yea aur baat terii galii mai na aayen ham
lekin ye kyaa key shahar teraa chhor jaaye ham [/B] Yea Meem |
[B]Mujh Ko Nafraat Sey nahi Piyar Sey Mansoob Karoo
Mai Tu Shamil hoon Mohabbat Key Gunha`garoo Main[/B] Meem Noon |
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