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Najabat Monday, November 27, 2006 12:46 PM

Bait-Baazi!
 
Dear Fellows I m here with some gupshup in Poetic mood!
Well The rule of [B]Bait-Baazi [/B]is User can start verse or poem just either by [B]Last character [/B]of Verse or by [B]First character [/B]of Verse.I hope it will produce a competition and situational competency potential in forum aspirants.So start verse from my side is;

[B][B]R[/B]ooh koo chootay huay ik nazaray jaisa
Hay woh ik shaksh Subah kay taray jais[B]a[/B][/B]

So next verse can either start from [B]R[/B] or [B]A[/B].

Mehaak Monday, November 27, 2006 12:53 PM

Aap say zyadah koe khubsurat hua tu tu rab sae shikayat ho gy
Or agar aap ko chahnay wala koe or hua tu qiyamat sae pehlay qiyamat hogy.

next y
Regards.

Najabat Monday, November 27, 2006 01:45 PM

[B]Yah na thee hamaari qismat kay wisaal-e-yaar hoota
agar oor jeetay rahtay yahi intizaar hootA![/B]

Mehaak Monday, November 27, 2006 01:49 PM

Aata Hai Jab DurJawani Ka Tu Aay Dostoo
Sundar Sapnay Jehan Mein Basa Deti Hain Ankhein

Regards.

Miss_Naqvi Monday, November 27, 2006 02:52 PM

[COLOR="Red"][B][SIZE="2"]Nikal ker khankahoon say ada ker rasm-e-shabiri
Kay fuqr-e-khankahi hay fakat undoh-o-dilgeri[/SIZE][/B][/COLOR]

[B]Iqbal[/B]

Najabat Monday, November 27, 2006 03:17 PM

[B]Na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, Kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, Na hotaa main to kyaa hotaa [/B]

Miss_Naqvi Monday, November 27, 2006 04:35 PM

[QUOTE=Najabat][B]Na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, Kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, Na hotaa main to kyaa hotaa [/B][/QUOTE]

U should add a verse with Ye..... but you have started with Nuun.... So I m adding with both ends... mean [B]ye[/B] and [B]alif [/B]

[B]Yaqeen muhakim, aml-e-peham, muhabbat fateh-e-alum
Jihad-e-zindagani main yeh hain marduun ki shamshirain[/B]



[B]Aati hay dum-e-subh sada arsh-e-bareen say
Khoya giya kis tarha tera johar-e-idraak...? [/B]

[B][COLOR="Red"]Iqbal [/COLOR][/B]

Najabat Monday, November 27, 2006 05:18 PM

Re:Miss N@qvi
Respected Sis,Actually i done that right,since requirement of Bait-Baazi is
Either 1st Character of shair/verse of the last posted verse that was N(Noon) in my case.Or last character of last posted verse by anyone(Not Necesarily to be mine) which was I(Alif).So i choose N(Noon) for my Shair.
Since Bait-Baazi's essence is shair per shair kahna magar lafz sirf doo hi choose kar saktay hay either first character of last posted shair or last character of last posted shair/nazam/ghazal.
I hope you got it all...Nwayz A bundle of million thanx for ur active participation!!!Let me do my tern of shair!!According to your last posted verse i choose A from Aati!Tou Arz kia hay!!!

[B]AKhlaaq na bartenge mudaaraa na karenge
Ab hum kisii shaKhs kii paravaah na karenge

Kuchh log kaii lafz galat bol rahe hain
Izalaah magar ham bhii ab isalaah na karenge [/B]

KhayaL Monday, November 27, 2006 07:41 PM

[B]yea aur baat terii galii mai na aayen ham
lekin ye kyaa key shahar teraa chhor jaaye ham

[/B]

Yea Meem

KhayaL Monday, November 27, 2006 07:42 PM

[B]Mujh Ko Nafraat Sey nahi Piyar Sey Mansoob Karoo
Mai Tu Shamil hoon Mohabbat Key Gunha`garoo Main[/B]


Meem Noon


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