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Dear Fellows I m here with some gupshup in Poetic mood!
Well The rule of Bait-Baazi is User can start verse or poem just either by Last character of Verse or by First character of Verse.I hope it will produce a competition and situational competency potential in forum aspirants.So start verse from my side is;

Rooh koo chootay huay ik nazaray jaisa
Hay woh ik shaksh Subah kay taray jaisa


So next verse can either start from R or A.
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Aap say zyadah koe khubsurat hua tu tu rab sae shikayat ho gy
Or agar aap ko chahnay wala koe or hua tu qiyamat sae pehlay qiyamat hogy.

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Nikal ker khankahoon say ada ker rasm-e-shabiri
Kay fuqr-e-khankahi hay fakat undoh-o-dilgeri


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Na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, Kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, Na hotaa main to kyaa hotaa
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Na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, Kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, Na hotaa main to kyaa hotaa
U should add a verse with Ye..... but you have started with Nuun.... So I m adding with both ends... mean ye and alif

Yaqeen muhakim, aml-e-peham, muhabbat fateh-e-alum
Jihad-e-zindagani main yeh hain marduun ki shamshirain




Aati hay dum-e-subh sada arsh-e-bareen say
Khoya giya kis tarha tera johar-e-idraak...?


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Re:Miss N@qvi
Respected Sis,Actually i done that right,since requirement of Bait-Baazi is
Either 1st Character of shair/verse of the last posted verse that was N(Noon) in my case.Or last character of last posted verse by anyone(Not Necesarily to be mine) which was I(Alif).So i choose N(Noon) for my Shair.
Since Bait-Baazi's essence is shair per shair kahna magar lafz sirf doo hi choose kar saktay hay either first character of last posted shair or last character of last posted shair/nazam/ghazal.
I hope you got it all...Nwayz A bundle of million thanx for ur active participation!!!Let me do my tern of shair!!According to your last posted verse i choose A from Aati!Tou Arz kia hay!!!

AKhlaaq na bartenge mudaaraa na karenge
Ab hum kisii shaKhs kii paravaah na karenge

Kuchh log kaii lafz galat bol rahe hain
Izalaah magar ham bhii ab isalaah na karenge
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yea aur baat terii galii mai na aayen ham
lekin ye kyaa key shahar teraa chhor jaaye ham



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Mujh Ko Nafraat Sey nahi Piyar Sey Mansoob Karoo
Mai Tu Shamil hoon Mohabbat Key Gunha`garoo Main



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