Night is passing by slowly.....
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Tears are flowing by slowly Flowing through the eye lashes. and traversing the cheeks Heart is pinching, Mind is bursting, and eyes are blinking and sticking Desert is everywhere but water is with you Scrotching sun is shining atop but shelter is with you Torrential rainfall is pouring, and umbrella is with you Oh my Lord, is my beloved is love or culmination of love! My each fiber of body is in pain of tiredness, and longing of my beloved My Lord I beseech Thee mercy and Thee help always I beg Thee honour to bless us always with Thee kindness, and utmost mercy from the fire of world, journey after departing the world and of course from the hell My Lord I am tired of living in the state of bewilderness I beg Thee honour to bless us always with Thee kindness, and utmost mercy at each second, at any stage.............. T.S.A. [/COLOR][/SIZE][/FONT][/FONT][/B][/CENTER] |
Nice Poem
Nice divine poem..........realizes the concept of life that is decreasing day by day
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hainnnn
man, you are _________________ (too much, i dnt knw wht exactly):shy
mein ne socha phir bhi dekh loon kya likha hai ... it killed me *brain dead* :angle |
@tsa
sir!!
very beautiful!!!! please do write more and let us have more of such a beautiful thought....... Almaas |
TSA, I happened to read some of your creations- they are novel in themselves indeed- and there is no harm in prosaic poetry as it has been mark of great poets.
But to be a spoilsport, I should say, the poet should master his language, if not rhymes. Poetry,as we know, is the finest of arts which requires the finest of treatment...at least in use of language, or words. I remember a friend using a noun as a verb, and it was a good joke. keep up good work. Regards. |
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