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Old Monday, September 28, 2009
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an aeon in a moment
began with the sky dusky
whispers of the incompleteness
the shattering din of the destroyed
invokes a desire
so blind and wild
struck in whim
obsessed by the fear
craves fulfillment
brings semblance of affect
a Talisman of sensations
the thirst getting alive
rejuvenates life
paves the way to oblivion
sculpts the needs
through darkness of the sky
the dancing desires
taking to the highs
desiccated quenched
as drop touches parched sand
the smell of fulfillment
the touch of completeness
the whispers of madness
all mustered by night beautiful
given to the dawn
gives life to the dead
completes forever
quenched forever
an aeon in a moment
till the dawn


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I started writing these lines after your request to share some writings on fulfilment . Well i cant say it a good piece because I am novice to poetry and I have typed these lines in last five minutes but frankly speaking this is sharing of my original feelings, which are hovering and storming my mind from a couple of days....
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Your meetings urges
have restlessed my body and soul

It has increased so much now that
it seems my body will be parted by my soul,
So my soul will fly to your abode....

Or otherwise,
I will transform or dissolved in air
and I will start flying....

Flying high and high
to reach your city....

But will that be my fulfillment?
Or will it be end of my ecstasy?

Perhaps You know that
i cant come alone,
So please made our wishes come true
and invite us together to your city...

So our bodies sit near your abode
and
our souls roam in streets of ancient tayyabah,
to meet You
to glance You......................
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Fulfill my one request,
I know I am not supposed any to make.
I still want you to settle this,
You can say no, don’t worry about it.
I can’t help to forget the moments together,
Those were not for real, I cannot consider.
I always felt in a comfort field,
Whenever you were there my dear.
I am in such a grief
I cannot explain
Fulfill my last wish
To leave you I will wane
Say you still love me and never un-deared ,
Say there were only things you feared.
Be good to me, If you want to be,
Tell me the truth and set free, me.


Man! I never new this way of expression. How well we can express feelings and emotions. Damn! I am sounding same again.
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sir!!

would you like to add a wave of mind of yours???

this is one of my favorite piece of writings. pls do share your thoughts about "fulfillment"

regards!!
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u people are requested to share some good piece of writing of yours regarding "fulfilment"

regards!
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Wordsworth said and I quote "Poetry is the spontaneous overflow of powerful feelings."
The following free verse is platonic fulfillment in metaphor. And as goes the cliche, I composed it in last 3 mins to honor Purab Sarhan's "Fulfill my one request." and your request to share ours on Fulfillment..


The blistering sun spotted

The drifting green patch,


In the dull blue waters


Looking up leisurely,


They gazed and gazed… and smiled.

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