For my Best Friend Only~!

[Najabat]

Best Friends Over The Years

You've Always Been There,

You've Helped Me

When No One Else Cared Over The Years

You've Always Been There,

You've Helped Me When No One Else Cared.

Through All The Things That Have Gone Wrong

Our Friendship Has Grown Ever So Strong

You've Always Cared Through All The Tears,

And All The Laughter Throughout The Years

We've Been Through Good Times And

We've Been Through Sad,

But We Got Through It No Matter How Bad.

You Gave Me Hope When I Thought There Was None,

We've Stayed Friends And Had Lots Of Fun.

If I Could Go Back And Live My Life Again,

Some Things Might Change..

But You'd Always Be My Best Friend

[Miss_Naqvi]

Brother well done nice work,

Cared for rhyming scheme but repetition of ideas is there. In poetry its not considered good to repeat same ideas, You can go through my poems "Lonely Night" and "What is Beauty" the member Proem made corrections and I reshaped my poems according to it. So it will help you alot to learn more.

Keep it Up........ !