Another poem by me
 

Me azal se khali mitti hoon.
kia tum meri zaat bano gy?
man dharti k is sehra me.
junoo ki tm barsat bano gy?
Jal thal krna hai ankho ko..
kaho kia inki aas bano gy?
hasti Apni har Chuka hun?
mil k meri maat saho gy?
baten sari bhool gya hun,
kia meri awaz bano gy?
Me azal se khali mitti hu..
kia tum meri zaat bano gy?

[QUOTE=zahida noor;952648]Me azal se khali mitti hoon.
kia tum meri zaat bano gy?
man dharti k is sehra me.
junoo ki tm barsat bano gy?
Jal thal krna hai ankho ko..
kaho kia inki aas bano gy?
hasti Apni har Chuka hun?
mil k meri maat saho gy?
baten sari bhool gya hun,
kia meri awaz bano gy?
Me azal se khali mitti hu..
kia tum meri zaat bano gy?[/QUOTE]

good attempt. keep it up

Loved it,
Specially the main lines/verses. I'm not a poetry fan but I like this

Me azal se khali mitti hoon.
kia tum meri zaat bano gy?

[QUOTE=zahida noor;952648]
Jal thal krna hai ankho ko..
kaho kia inki aas bano gy?
[/QUOTE]

Jal thal kerne kleay aas banna zaroori nai hota balken ye 2 opposite khayalat lagtay hain, jahan tk main samjha.

Any way, nice poetry, pyara takhayul hy, keep it up.
Also pay some attention to the evils of this society, ye bhi 1 section hy poetry ka. I am dead sure, you can do it.

[QUOTE=zahida noor;952648]Me azal se khali mitti hoon.
kia tum meri zaat bano gy?
man dharti k is sehra me.
junoo ki tm barsat bano gy?
Jal thal krna hai ankho ko..
kaho kia inki aas bano gy?
hasti Apni har Chuka hun?
mil k meri maat saho gy?
baten sari bhool gya hun,
kia meri awaz bano gy?
Me azal se khali mitti hu..
kia tum meri zaat bano gy?[/QUOTE]
Great poem

" Wa tu izzu man tasha,,, Wa tu zillo man tasha "

very nice try.:clap