Naakaam Hasraton k Siwa Kuch Naheen Raha
 

Naakaam hasratoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha
dunya may aab dukhoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

Aek umar hogaye hay kay dil ki kitaab main
kuch khushk patiyoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

Yaadain kuch istarah say sima-aat pay cha gayeen
pichlee rifakatoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

Lub see liyee tu apnay he kamray may yoon laga
khamoosh aaeenoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

Jazbay tamaam kho gaye lamhoon ki dhool main
aab dil may dharkanoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

[COLOR=Sienna]assalamOalaikuM[/COLOR]
[QUOTE=TiDus]Naakaam hasratoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha
dunya may aab dukhoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

[COLOR=Sienna]dunyaa meN ab duKhoN ke siwaa kuCh naheeN rahaa-very nice-[/COLOR]


Aek umar hogaye hay kay dil ki kitaab main
kuch khushk patiyoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

[COLOR=Sienna]aik u'mr ho ga.ee hay keh dil ki kitaab meN
kuCh khushk pattiyoN ke siwaa kuCh naheeN rahaa[/COLOR]


Yaadain kuch istarah say sima-aat pay cha gayeen
pichlee rifakatoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

[COLOR=Sienna]sima-aat...? ,,is it samaa.a't(sense of hearing)?if it is, then it looks odd here ,as how can be memories dominant on sense of hearing ?[/COLOR]


Lub see liyee tu apnay he kamray may yoon laga
khamoosh aaeenoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

[COLOR=Sienna]kyaa baat hai ? very nice[/COLOR]


Jazbay tamaam kho gaye lamhoon ki dhool main
aab dil may dharkanoon kay siwa kuch naheen raha

[COLOR=Sienna]it is also a great thought-[/COLOR]
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[COLOR=Sienna]I have said on the same rhythm during typing as:

[B]jaa to rahaa hay soo-e-Haram :Shah: too magar
dil meN tire butoN ke siwaa kuCh naheeN rahaa[/B]

Your contribution was very nice--But two fields were weak 1-pronunciation,2-Roman text (writing urdu in english alphabets) -We shouldn't ignore our language in the love of the language of our ex-masters- Please do write the name of the poet also-

regards
yasir [/COLOR]

It was written by Khaild Shareef. Please ignore the roman stuff as I really don't have any idea of that. [QUOTE=yasir shah]sima-aat...? ,,is it samaa.a't(sense of hearing)?if it is, then it looks odd here ,as how can be memories dominant on sense of hearing ?
[/QUOTE] That’s samaa.at the sense of hearing and I guess you took it wrong. He is referring to the memories that are echoing all the time (LETS put it that way)
[QUOTE=yasir shah]
[b][color=black]jaa to rahaa hay soo-e-Haram :Shah: too magar[/b]
[b]dil meN tire butoN ke siwaa kuCh naheeN rahaa[/b][/QUOTE][/color]
[color=black](good one)[/color]

[color=black]how about making it :[/color]

[color=black]Aaab ja raha hay soo-e-Haram :shah: phir magar[/color]
[color=black]dil meN tire butoN ke siwaa kuCh naheeN rahaa[/color]

Tidus:Ignore our temptations of fault finding at all the wrong times.CSS tends to do that to us after a while.
Anyways,welcome to this part of the world !!!

And now a pragmatic comment on...the above verses:

"Sar jhukao gay tow pathar dayota ho jaye ga
Itna mat chaho ussya,wo bewafa ho jaye ga
Ussay keh dow k
Ham bhe darya hain,hamay apna hunar maloom hai
Jis taraf bhe chal paray,rasta ho jaye ga" !!!

(Always works like a magic potion on stone hearts)

Awaiting your text interruptions,Yasir! lolzz

[/B]Haath uljhay huway resham mein phassa baithay hein[/B]
[B]Ab bata kon say dhagay ko juda kis say kerein[/B]

First Aid Kit Follows:
 

[QUOTE=TiDus][B]Haath uljhay huway resham mein phassa baithay hein[/B]
[B]Ab bata kon say dhagay ko juda kis say kerein[/B][/QUOTE]


Well...Just say k :
'Tera khayal bohaut dair tak nahi rehta
Koi milaal bohaut dair tak nahi rehta
Udaas kerti hain aksar teri yaadein
Magar yeh haal bohaut dair tak nahi rehta ' !! lolzzz


Other than that...
[FONT="Arial Black"]"Azeez itna he rakh k jee sambhal jaye
Ab iss kadar bhe na chah k uss ka dam he nikal jaye[/FONT]" !!!