Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Tuesday, November 20, 2012
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I have corrected/ amended some of your...
I have corrected/ amended some of your grammatical mistakes, errors, omissions, and structure of sentence. Despite this could have been much better...Overall you doing good job...keep it up.
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Tuesday, November 20, 2012
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Replies: 1,123
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Thursday, November 08, 2012
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@faixa
Some people earn little money but they spend more money in their expenditures.( This proverb tells us to live within our means and not to spend more than our resources and pocket allows.) ...
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Wednesday, November 07, 2012
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@faixa
Honesty is a best policy
First.....It is my own analysis
OPENING SENTENCE SHOULD BE CATCHY. It is a true and universal reality that honesty is the best policy. Dishonest people can not be a...
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Tuesday, November 06, 2012
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Replies: 1,123
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Sis, don't call me 'SIR' call me LiL bro. :) ...
Sis, don't call me 'SIR' call me LiL bro. :)
Undoubtedly, I will be checking your expansions. Keep on practising and posting. Other seniors are also here to guide you well. :)
We don't expect...
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Tuesday, November 06, 2012
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Replies: 1,123
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. Try to hit the topic in the very start of...
. Try to hit the topic in the very start of expansion.
. You have made your ideas complex. You say we can achieve our targets if we have will power and at other hand you go against your point.
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Forum: Expansion/Paragraph
Tuesday, November 06, 2012
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Replies: 1,123
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it is because of due to laziness is repeatation...
it is because of due to laziness is repeatation either use because of or due to. He did not give up from his determinations and will power in this sentence from should be removed and rewritten as He...
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