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musmanhussain Wednesday, January 03, 2018 02:36 PM

Why you add words 'short term'?
The topic is simply elaborated unfair distribution of wealth/misallocation of resources breeds violence,hatred,social intolerance and ignorance.
Impacts of this unequal distribution of wealth is in the form of rising extremism & terrorism, unemployment, social intolerance,ignorance, illiteracy and other social evils. All the industrial revolutions of the world is the manifestation of this cause. Unemployed people and ignorant communities joined terrorists for monetary benefits. Brexit is a real example of this cause.

lovereflector Wednesday, January 03, 2018 03:27 PM

[QUOTE=musmanhussain;1053811]Why you add words 'short term'?
The topic is simply elaborated unfair distribution of wealth/misallocation of resources breeds violence,hatred,social intolerance and ignorance.
Impacts of this unequal distribution of wealth is in the form of rising extremism & terrorism, unemployment, social intolerance,ignorance, illiteracy and other social evils. All the industrial revolutions of the world is the manifestation of this cause. Unemployed people and ignorant communities joined terrorists for monetary benefits. Brexit is a real example of this cause.[/QUOTE]



I take this topic a little bit different. Economic growth without unjust distribution is short term and tend to fall in long run. Economic growth could not be achieved without proper distribution justice.


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ERUDITE5 Saturday, February 10, 2018 12:49 PM

[QUOTE=Yousuf Aziz;1053394]I attempted #4: Can Globalization and Nationalism co-exist in the long run?

[B][U]Outline[/U][/B]

1) Introduction: Recent events in the international political arena suggest that Globalization and Nationalism cannot go side by side.
2) Evidences of the clash:
a) Donald Trump's triumph
b) Brexit
c) French & German Election
d) Australian restraint on Immigrants
e) North Korea
3) Causes of the clash:
a) Economic Factors:
i) Unemployment
ii) Downfall of local industry
iii) Increasing Debts and Deficits
b) Social Elements:
i) Religious Insecurities
ii) Ethnic Demographics
iii) Immigration
iv) Inter-racial Marriages
c) Political Factors:
i) 9/11 and War on Terror
ii) Refugees Crisis
iii) Expenditure on Military Alliances
iv) Representation issue
4) Way-outs
5) Conclusion[/QUOTE]


Brother should we add recommendations in this sort of essay which is argumentative in nature. I totally agree to your stance but you have more focused on national interests than nationalism. Brother kindly answer my these two queries.

Yousuf Aziz Sunday, February 11, 2018 02:02 PM

[QUOTE=ERUDITE5;1057359]Brother should we add recommendations in this sort of essay which is argumentative in nature. I totally agree to your stance but you have more focused on national interests than nationalism. Brother kindly answer my these two queries.[/QUOTE]Saadat Ali Shah's book says one should write suggestive conclusion.
I was more focused on contemporary examples than theoritical perspective of nationalism. I felt such arguments would be more appealing to examiner.

Iram rani Thursday, August 23, 2018 10:48 AM

[QUOTE=Yousuf Aziz;1053394]I attempted #4: Can Globalization and Nationalism co-exist in the long run?

[B][U]Outline[/U][/B]

1) Introduction: Recent events in the international political arena suggest that Globalization and Nationalism cannot go side by side.
2) Evidences of the clash:
a) Donald Trump's triumph
b) Brexit
c) French & German Election
d) Australian restraint on Immigrants
e) North Korea
3) Causes of the clash:
a) Economic Factors:
i) Unemployment
ii) Downfall of local industry
iii) Increasing Debts and Deficits
b) Social Elements:
i) Religious Insecurities
ii) Ethnic Demographics
iii) Immigration
iv) Inter-racial Marriages
c) Political Factors:
i) 9/11 and War on Terror
ii) Refugees Crisis
iii) Expenditure on Military Alliances
iv) Representation issue
4) Way-outs
5) Conclusion[/QUOTE]Can u plzzzz share your essay???

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