Plz share your outlines/experience/suggestions on the topic "Bad Governance is the mother of all evils".

Do you believe CPEC is a game changer? Justify
[B]
1.Introduction

2. CPEC-Current status [/B]
-$46 billion project has reached $62 billion (2017)
-It contains highways, roadways, railways, gas pipelines & infrastructure projects
[B]
3. CPEC is a game changer project because[/B]:
a) It will boom the economy of Sino-Pakistan
b)It will curtail TPP (Trans Pacific Partnership)
c)It will stabilize Balouchistan and Afghanistan
d)It will mitigate the demand and gape supply in energy crisis
e) It will curtail US dominancy in east
f) It will curtail Indian chabar port
g)It will produce financial & cultural integration
It will facilitate China to have short distance for approaching oil abundant states
h)It will generate millions of jobs for Pakistanis as well as for Chinese
i)It will change the destiny of Sino-Pakistan
j)It will change the world politics and world economy

[B]4. Indeed, it is a game changer project

5. Conclusion[/B]


[B]Introduction[/B]
China Pakistan Economic Corridor (CPEC) is a giant project, was initiated by China in 2013. The project was kicked off with the cost of $46 billion which has reached $62 billion at present. This project contains highways, roadways, railroads, airports and many infrastructural developments from Kasghar to Gwadar. It is a game changer project because it will not only boom the economy of Sino-Pakistan, but also will curtail the US dominancy in the east. The TPP and Chabhar port will also not be able to compete with the crown project of OBOR what is called CPEC. The financial and cultural integration will bring a new horizon in the Sino-Pakistan ties. Hence, on account of CPEC, Pakistan is supposed to be one of the developed countries in the near future. Thus, it has rightly been said that CPEC is a game changer.


[B]Conclusion[/B]
Conclusively, even though CPEC is confronted with numerous hurdles, it does not mean it is going to be frozen. Giant projects face multifarious obstacles but together with they work towards the progress and developments. Indeed, CPEC is a game changer project that is going to be a prime cause of the integrated economy of the world. It will doom the hegemony of the US and will not let India to menace Pakistan anymore. CPEC is going to change the world politics and world economy.


Pages: 11
Statistics: 20+
Quotations: 2
Style: Argumentive

Please check whether I cracked it or not! Your constructive arguments will highly be welcomed.

[QUOTE=R channa;1052712]Plz share your outlines/experience/suggestions on the topic "Bad Governance is the mother of all evils".[/QUOTE]

Bad Governance is the mother of all evils".
[B]
1. Introduction

2. Parameters of Governance (World Bank[/B])
a) Accountability
b) Corruption
c) Rule of law
d) Transparency
e) Justice

[B]3. Bad governance is mother of all evils because[/B]:
a) It produces corruption and malpractices
b) It becomes cause of egoism & extremism
c) It shuns the justice and thus the rebellions erupt
d) It disintegrate the national unity
e) It fetches social crimes ranging from theft to murder
f) It makes vendetta between political forces
g) It plants colossal evils to shatter the norms of ethics

[B]4. Roadmap to shun the bad governance

5. Conclusion[/B]

This essay must be like this. Though I did not attempt it. I had passed CSS essay " great nations win without fighting" but I did not attempt it either. Bexause I felt CPEC will fetch good score in PCS so went for that.

It is good effort to have main justification points which will gather good marks.

[QUOTE=Wonderworld;1052729]Do you believe CPEC is a game changer? Justify
[B]
1.Introduction

2. CPEC-Current status [/B]
-$46 billion project has reached $62 billion (2017)
-It contains highways, roadways, railways, gas pipelines & infrastructure projects
[B]
3. CPEC is a game changer project because[/B]:
a) It will boom the economy of Sino-Pakistan
b)It will curtail TPP (Trans Pacific Partnership)
c)It will stabilize Balouchistan and Afghanistan
d)It will mitigate the demand and gape supply in energy crisis
e) It will curtail US dominancy in east
f) It will curtail Indian chabar port
g)It will produce financial & cultural integration
It will facilitate China to have short distance for approaching oil abundant states
h)It will generate millions of jobs for Pakistanis as well as for Chinese
i)It will change the destiny of Sino-Pakistan
j)It will change the world politics and world economy

[B]4. Indeed, it is a game changer project

5. Conclusion[/B]


[B]Introduction[/B]
China Pakistan Economic Corridor (CPEC) is a giant project, was initiated by China in 2013. The project was kicked off with the cost of $46 billion which has reached $62 billion at present. This project contains highways, roadways, railroads, airports and many infrastructural developments from Kasghar to Gwadar. It is a game changer project because it will not only boom the economy of Sino-Pakistan, but also will curtail the US dominancy in the east. The TPP and Chabhar port will also not be able to compete with the crown project of OBOR what is called CPEC. The financial and cultural integration will bring a new horizon in the Sino-Pakistan ties. Hence, on account of CPEC, Pakistan is supposed to be one of the developed countries in the near future. Thus, it has rightly been said that CPEC is a game changer.


[B]Conclusion[/B]
Conclusively, even though CPEC is confronted with numerous hurdles, it does not mean it is going to be frozen. Giant projects face multifarious obstacles but together with they work towards the progress and developments. Indeed, CPEC is a game changer project that is going to be a prime cause of the integrated economy of the world. It will doom the hegemony of the US and will not let India to menace Pakistan anymore. CPEC is going to change the world politics and world economy.


Pages: 11
Statistics: 20+
Quotations: 2
Style: Argumentive

Please check whether I cracked it or not! Your constructive arguments will highly be welcomed.[/QUOTE]

CCE-2013 qualifiers, first of all congratulation and best wishes ahead. Please evaluate my essay, what went wrong! I have been flunked in essay, secured only 15 marks! I want to learn from mistakes so that I may not repeat them in upcoming attempt (CCE-2018, qualified screening again).

Thanks in anticipation

See! I justified the topic to the point. I have read some articles on CPEC as game changet and I found nothing wrong in my essay. Shame on checker! He/She has ruined my entire hard work. I have qualified CSS essays twice, once AD MoD essay conducted by NTS and in many other exams but I dont know what is wrong with SPSC!

[url]https://www.google.com.pk/amp/s/nation.com.pk/12-Jul-2016/cpec-the-game-changer%3fversion=amp[/url]

[QUOTE=Wonderworld;1069455]CCE-2013 qualifiers, first of all congratulation and best wishes ahead. Please evaluate my essay, what went wrong! I have been flunked in essay, secured only 15 marks! I want to learn from mistakes so that I may not repeat them in upcoming attempt (CCE-2018, qualified screening again).

Thanks in anticipation[/QUOTE]
Dear same here. I am also victim of the same topic. Passed the screening test 2018.
Though I am not qualifier,but your essay seems well attempted,at least it deserves 17 marks.
Many of my friends have failed in CPEC essay. Perhaps it has been targeted as they did in Sindhi essay last time.

[QUOTE=Javed Ahmed Abbasi;1069464]Dear same here. I am also victim of the same topic. Passed the screening test 2018.
Though I am not qualifier,but your essay seems well attempted,at least it deserves 17 marks.
Many of my friends have failed in CPEC essay. Perhaps it has been targeted as they did in Sindhi essay last time.[/QUOTE]

Very sad!

Are you going for retotalling? If yes, do contact me. I am thinking to give up for CCE-18 because they fail us delibrately!

[QUOTE=Wonderworld;1069465]Very sad!

Are you going for retotalling? If yes, do contact me. I am thinking to give up for CCE-18 because they fail us delibrately![/QUOTE]

Dear it is just an exam,we should never give up.
God has given us oppertunity, think of those who have failed both in written as well as in screening.
Insha'Allah we will go with better preparation in our next attempt.
For our self satisfaction recounting is better option, let me know the procedure please.

And please tell what is the maximum time given for recounting after the declaration of result.?