Thank you so much @Whitehulk and @Greenboat for your comments.
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Originally Posted by Whitehulk
wsalam. i am junior .
i think ''A Little knowledge is bad thing'' will be correct to say .
i have not read your essay thoroughly but u should have given examples in every paragraph to justify stance .it will make your essay lengthy and attractive.
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The way I practice Essay is using arbitrarily one of real Essay question paper of FPSC to face the literal challenge. The topic is exactly the one given in
Essay 2013---Faislabad Re-exam No wonder your topic is more attractive but I think going with something close to reality should be preferred. Thank you so much for you idea and do not hesitate to add anything else you have in mind. I will be thankful to you.
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Originally Posted by Greenboat
Your flow in expressions are good. But improve your outlines, It probably wont work. Give examples to justify the statement. I am also having half knowledge  |
I will keep that in mind and will try to improve my outlines. I have tried to give examples to justify the statements in serveral parts of the essay, but I will review it again for sure. Thank you @Greenboat and do not hesitate to add anything else you have in mind. I will be thankful to you.