Over all essay is well framed, better grip over grammar , coherent ,interesting and informative. But it is too much lengthy essay hardly can be completed in 3 hours duration , in my view such outline should be more comprehensive. Time management is first important point for essay writing, if one can not complete essay according to given outline ,it left bad impression for examiner , ultimately failure in essay; one of main causes aspirants fails in Essay.

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