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Old Tuesday, August 29, 2017
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Originally Posted by SyedUsama View Post
Cherokee was the place for holidays as advised by his friend. they arrived at Qualla Boundary, a town of Cherokee, surrounded by mountains. The town depicted its cultural background to tourists by showing various manifests. they went to a souvenir shop, which presented tools and handicrafts of traditional heritage. they met a person who was a guide. he told them during low rush seasons, they earn living by 'Bingo Weekend'. In these weekends, great number of people gathered and played different games.

In the end, they visited a museum which displayed different sculptures and artifacts. He was looking forward to visit another amazing destination next time.

A VISIT TO CHEROKEE

Word Count=106 words

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It is said " Practice makes a man perfect " so no worries...
You could use word " recommend or referred" than advised because it is his friend not doctor...
secondly do not compress sentences unnecessarily as it will give an ugly look to your precis
Title of your precis is good
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work on one word substitution
practise past papers
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