Originally Posted by plotinium

I wrote my Essay on Democracy in Pakistan: Hopes and Hurdles
1. Introduction
2. Philosophical and Historical Background of Democracy
3. Pakistani Forefathers and their ideology for Pakistan
4. Hurdles
4.1 Failure in Early Consensus
4.2 History of Military rule and colonial legacy
4.3 Low literacy rate
4.4 Regional Dynamics and Insecurities of Pakistan
4.5 Socio-economic inequality and high poverty rate in Pakistan
4.6 Identity Issues
4.7 Lack of Rule of Law and justice
5 Hopes
5.1 1973 Constitution
5.2 Political Parties
5.2 Elections of 2008 and 2013
5.3 Introduction of Local Government
5.4 Changing Balancing of Power between the three branches and institutions of Pakistan
5.5 Political Enlightenment
5.6 Diverse Population of Pakistan
6 Conclusion

I wrote long paragraphs but short sentences. A lot of cutting was also involved. 3 to 4 books were referenced and 3 to 4 philosophers were also pointed out. Moreover, I wrote around 1700 to 1800 words. Lastly, there were 2 to 3 more points in my essay but I don't remember them now.