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Originally Posted by GanXTeR
your outline is not bad....however some more point were required to be added for elaboration of the topic and the way you going to narrate the whole subject....it makes things easy and clear for the examiner .... otherwise examiner has to check your whole essay which would not be in your favour.
if you have explained all the things related to subject you will definitely get the passing marks.
in my view follwoings point are lacking in outline
-drfinition of democracy given by abraham lincoln as democract is govt of the people
-elaboration as to organs of state and working
- democratic forms of govt
- pre requisite of democracy or chracteristics instead of importance
-hurdles inluding conflict between organs, political and religious parties role etc
- hopes ... timely election, smooth transfer of power , army current stance etc
- role of media in safeguarding democracy
- constitutional measures...treason article 6 application
allah apko pass karay..!!
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Hey GanXTer,
Thank you for your response. I added some to the of those points, but not elaborated in detail. Could have expanded on Media's Role, but rather than pin pointing most of details - I just touched generally like how the masses should be educated etc.
Though, I did discuss all the points mentioned in essay, some in more detail others just top off it.
Thank you, I also hope just to pass tbh.
Good day to you!