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Originally Posted by wasxxm
Overall, your outline is good, however, it would have been far better if you had made a single point of history of democracy in Pakistan (for that is a complementary point). Also, merging the 3rd and the 5th principle headings into a single heading pertaining to the hopes would have made it more organized.
I hope you have not made mistakes in your Essay such as writing 'A birdeye view' when it should have been 'A bird's eye view'.
Do not worry about the facts and figures thing - I did not refer to even a single fact / figure in my Essay of CE 2017; essay is not a research paper.
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Hey Wasxxm,
Thank you for your input. Hopefully, not many such mistakes though you may understand writing with just some time left on the clock would to certain minor mistakes - though hopefully not major ones as I tried to keep correcting them as I went along.
Yeah, I just hope them facts and figures aren't THAAAT important. Again, a pass would be enough.
Good day and Good luck to you!