kindly give comments on my outline.

Topic from past paper 2010;
Can women be equal to man in Pakistan?
1. Introduction
Thesis statement : women can definitely be equal to man in Pakistan.
2. The struggle of women in Pakistan to become equal to men.
a. Getting their rights of education from family.
b. Getting out from home and understanding the environment.
c. Hurdles of social issues.
d. Facing the problems in adapting the contemporary style of education.
e. Sense of hesitation in adjusting in work place.
f. Gender discrimination at work place.
3. Impact of successful women in Pakistan
a. social harmonious in the society
b. economic prosperity throughout the country
c. political development in the country.
4. Role of women in Islam / Importance of women in Islam
a. Status of women in Islam
b. Women as a working women
c. Women as a mother
d. Women as a sister and daughter
e. Women as a wife
5. Role of women in Pakistan / Importance of women in Pakistan
a. Rise of women empowerment in Pakistan
i. Improvising the opportunities in Zulfiqar Ali Bhutto Government
ii. Institutional building for women's development in Zia-ul-Haq Regime
iii. The status of women in Benazir Bhutto Government
iv. Empowered women in Nawaz Sharif Government
v. Facilitative women in Asif Ali Zardari Government
b. Notable women of Pakistan in various fields.
i. Politics
ii. Education
iii. Sports
iv. Arts and Entertainment
v. Literature
vi. Other fields
6. Conclusion