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Originally Posted by SikanderAbbasi
Water Scarcity and National Unity
1. Introduction (Opening and Thesis Statement)
2. Retrospection of water mismanagement
2.1. Indus Water Treaty and subsequent emergence of water scarcity
2.2. Civilian governments' ineptness to render water conservation strategies
2.3. Lack of unanimous national water policy
2.4. Interminable animosity between federal and provincial governments
3. The present natural calamities
3.1. Unpredictable climate extremes
3.2. Melting of glaciers and resultant flood crisis
3.3. Volcanic eruptions and eventual soil erosion
4. Agricultural issues
4.1. Waterlogging
4.2. Low crop yield and ultimate food insecurity
4.3. Lack of techniques to preserve surplus water flow
5. Industrial issues
5.1. Profuse wastage of groundwater for production/manufacturing
5.2. Huge profits of bottled water/water distributing companies
6. Other issues
6.1. Prevalence of diseases from importable water consumption
6.2. Scarcity of dams
6.3. Overpopulation
6.4 A long-simmering issues of Kalabagh dam
6.5 Lethargy of public to consume only required water
6.6 Unequal share of water for provinces and its diversion
7. How can national unity be achieved?
7.1. accountability of industrial (public and privately owned) companies
7.2. Construction of more dams
7.3. Plantation of more trees to reduce GHG emissions
7.4 Imposition of company tax for privately-owned companies
7.5. Installation of modern agricultural equipment
7.6. Voluntary family planning programs to prevent population growth
8. Conclusion
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Don't you think so that the way you drafted outline it seems more to do with water crisis and exhibits little link of the water scarcity with national unity?
Mean hereby, '
water scarcity' and '
national unity' are keywords so that one should construct the outline by explicitly revealing their intrinsic link which is so critical, as
water scarcity endangers and threatens national unity and integrity. Afterward, one can mention the causes of the crisis and relevant solutions.