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Originally Posted by sidraaslam View Post
Don't you think so that the way you drafted outline it seems more to do with water crisis and exhibits little link of the water scarcity with national unity?

Mean hereby, 'water scarcity' and 'national unity' are keywords so that one should construct the outline by explicitly revealing their intrinsic link which is so critical, as water scarcity endangers and threatens national unity and integrity. Afterward, one can mention the causes of the crisis and relevant solutions.
I consider that lack of federal-provincial coordination, coupled with animous water policy and mismanagement, all threaten national unity. Other causes I mentioned related to natural calamities. I appreciate your suggestion though.
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