Tuesday, November 13, 2018
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Join Date: Oct 2018
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Acidius
The word identity turns up only once in your outline. Although it comprises 33% of the essay topic. Balance out these ratios, add a few more points on what identity is, what is it prior to the alleged radical change and so on.
The rest of it is nice.
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thank you sir
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