Topic: Introduction of digital technologies has radically altered identities

Thesis Statement:
Although digital technologies have made life easier in terms of access to information and communication; but these technologies have altered our true identities by shifting self-perception from internally to externally driven.

Outline:

1. Introduction
a. Self identity
b. Public Perception
c. thesis statement

2. Background: Advent of digital technologies
a. Internet
b. Email and corporate culture
c. Social Media
d. Search Engines

3. Ubiquity of Digital Technology
a. Experiencing things digitally

4. Social Media & self Digital Profiling

5. Vanishing geographical culture and traditions

6. Human beings adapting in to universally approved norms

7. Social engineering altering individual's thought process

8. Breach of Privacy

9. Conclusion

The word identity turns up only once in your outline. Although it comprises 33% of the essay topic. Balance out these ratios, add a few more points on what identity is, what is it prior to the alleged radical change and so on.
The rest of it is nice.

__________________
You enjoy life by living, no pay-to-play needed. God hath thee.

thank you sir