Thread: Please evalute outlines of Democracy: Hopes and Hurdles
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Old Tuesday, April 02, 2019
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Don’t use full-stop and colon in outline.
The word ‘level’ is unnecessary.
And, it should be ‘civilian supremacy over the military’.



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