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Respect for diversity can lead to unity in nation (Essay paper PMS- 2019)
1. Introduction
Thesis statement: maintenance of diversity helps establish unity in nation.
2. Defining the concept
3. Different groups present in nation that promote diversity
3.1 linguistic and cultural groups
3.2 various ethnicities
3.3 religious and sectarian groups
3.4 several political parties with dissent ideology
4. Respect for diversity can lead to unity in nation because:
4.1 diversity ensures national integration by promoting equality of diverse groups
4.2 diversity strengthens centre-province relations through provincial autonomy
4.3 diversity leads to innovation in the different fields
4.4 diversity increases role of minorities in national progress
4.5 diversity eliminates gender discrimination by empowering women
4.6 diversity helps the survival of endangered languages and cultures
4.7 diversity promotes peace and tolerance in nation
5. Conclusion.
Essay
Diversity is the core of nature. It helps maintain unity in a nation. Every nation has different groups such as linguistic, ethnic, religious, to name just a few that promote multiculturalism. They play a crucial role in building their country. This provides that respect of diversity can ensure national integration, because it emphasizes equality of all people. It strengthens centre-province relations by ensuring provincial autonomy. Through diverse ideas, it develops creativity in the various sectors of the state. In addition to this, it increases the role minorities, and empowers women to strengthen national progress. By preserving endangered languages and cultures, it also curtails the shrinking role of the oppressed in national development. Besides, it helps shape inclusive policies that eliminate discrimination and lead to a peaceful and tolerant nation.
Note: I have revised my Essay by keeping suggestions of members. I hope this time i have worked up to the mark. Still, be free to criticize.
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