My opinion:
1- You need to follow rule of making outline. Give a proper numbering
Like this
1-Introduction
2-How Democracy and illiteracy do not go together?
a) illiteracy leads to mass poverty which deters democracy.
b) illiterate societies are engulfed in the feudal system and caste system which is against the principle of democracy.
c) illiterate societies deny women their right to vote. This is against the norm of democracy.
d) least focus on human development by political leaders is also against the value of democracy.
e) Absence of knowledge about constitutional rights and duties among illiterate masses also lead to the decline of democracy.
f) Media plays a role as an agenda setter in illiterate society. this also deters democracy.
g) the elements of religious extremism is High in illiterate societies which also leads to the decline of democracy.
h) the elements of accountability and transparency are least followed. This lead towards corruption. Resultantly, deters democracy.
3- Conclusion.


2- illiteracy(First letter of outline item must be capital)
3- Write items of outline in short sentences or in few words.