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Originally Posted by Saba Arif
My Opinion:
Great outline.
1- You don't need to write, "Gender equality is a myth; how:". Just merge this item of outline into items number 3 by adding "Gender equality is myth because:"
2-Try to write thesis statement as well. Your thesis statement will tell your stance on a topic.
3- Outline should be self-explanatory. You have used one-word items in the outline such as "Unacknowledged". It is not making any sense. You must make outline in the way that it should be comprehensible by the first look. You can use words like, "Lower literacy rate of women across the globe" instead of "Under-educated".
I hope this will make sense.
Thanks
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Thanks, your reviews are appreciated.
The 1 and 3 points you have raised are considerable and convincing. The outline needs modification.
The point 2 is an aspirant's personal choice. Some like to write thesis statement in the outline, some don't. I am from the latter ones.
P.S.
@SabaArif I'm not into women-related essays, though u asked for "thesis statement" about the topic. So i gave it a try making outline in 30 mins.