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Though, you are right that conclusion must have positive points and ending. Plus, you are right that hurdles will be mentioned in summary. I have written this essay. If members need I'll post conclusion. Hope it helps. P.S. all members are requested to review others essay. Like the above someone's: "let there be lights more lights...." |
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Kindly review my attempt.
Dear members,
I have made an outline of this (following) essay. Kindly review and share you opinions. Besides, intensively pointing mistakes. Thanks Gender equality is a myth or reality 1. Introduction 2. Gender equality is a myth; how: 3. Abysmal status of women: a. Under-nourished b. Under-educated c. Under-paid d. Unacknowledged e. Undocumented for labor f. Lack access to social services g. Lack access to financial services h. Vulnerable to violence 4. Different roles of women: a. Women as a care-giver b. Women as a educator c. Women as a society developer d. Women as a nation builder e. Women as a farmer f. Women as a labor force g. Women as a entrepreneur 5. Women's comparative analysis with men: proof of the inequality 6. Conclusion. |
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Gender equality is a myth or reality- Feedback
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Great outline. 1- You don't need to write, "Gender equality is a myth; how:". Just merge this item of outline into items number 3 by adding "Gender equality is myth because:" 2-Try to write thesis statement as well. Your thesis statement will tell your stance on a topic. 3- Outline should be self-explanatory. You have used one-word items in the outline such as "Unacknowledged". It is not making any sense. You must make outline in the way that it should be comprehensible by the first look. You can use words like, "Lower literacy rate of women across the globe" instead of "Under-educated". I hope this will make sense. Thanks |
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The 1 and 3 points you have raised are considerable and convincing. The outline needs modification. The point 2 is an aspirant's personal choice. Some like to write thesis statement in the outline, some don't. I am from the latter ones. P.S. @SabaArif I'm not into women-related essays, though u asked for "thesis statement" about the topic. So i gave it a try making outline in 30 mins. |
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Interested?
Anyone interested in cracking following literary essays? We should make outline of the following literary essays and post in the thread.
1. If gold rusts what shall iron do? 2. Can meaning be fixed? 3. Great nations win without fighting. 4. Post-modern ethos - a challenge to the West. 5. Modernity is an unending process. 6. Life without change moreover is no life, but why one should not chose the safe haven of conformism? 7. All recorded history is Contemporaneous. 8. Ideologies thrive on the notion of resistance, yet change is a simulation. 9. Punctuality is the virtue of the bored. 10. Violence is the last refuge of the incompetent. 11. I disapprove of what you say, but I defend to death your right to say it. 12. Luxury of predecessors becomes the necessity of successors. 13. Art for Peace. 14. Truth is lived, not taught. 15. Sometime we do not see, what we see. 16. Too many of us are not living our dreams because we are living our fears. 17. Beware the barrenness of a busy life! |
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I really want to begin such essays. So post your outlines avoiding Nay-Sayers. Just post and let the members review. I'll post soon too. Plus, you are right interpretation is a challenge not argumentation. |
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Voilence is the last refuge of the Incompetent
1. Introduction 2. Psychological underpinnings of voilence being the last resort of an incompetent individual: a. The Dunning–Kruger effect3. Philosophical link between incompetennce and voilence: a.Thomas Hobbes and the State of Nature4. Political/Power viewpoint: a.The powerful seek to hold on to their power. To cover up their incompetence, they will resort to voilence especially if it is a Dictorial or an Illegitimate group5. The way forward:i-Stalin and the Great Purges of Russiab. Revoltions have failed in the past because instead of negotiating and engaging in dialogue, unnecessary voilence was the chosen route. a. Nurturing curious and critical-thinking individuals through education reforms and outreach6. Conclusion |
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