I ll suggest that you should write it on a full scale paper and may be post the scan. in exam you will be doing the same
Well it is nice attempt.( Way better than mine though)Here and there few gramatical mistakes and there is much jargon I suggest avoiding it and try to make it interesting . Just see an article in a news paper on the topic. You will find out what i am saying I am pointing towards your beginning bro.
However i am no expert and may be this is the right way of doing but i would have done it differently
