Originally Posted by Raz

This is the most common topic. Your attempt should be equally competing otherwise you won't impress the examiner. Remember, education, woman and similar topics are very common topics. Candidates tend to prepare such topics as their first priority. Therefore, examiner will be reviewing lot of stuff on such essays. Unique /distinguishing material will impress the examiner, whereas, average attempt will not fetch even passing marks.

You outline is not aligned with the topic.