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Originally Posted by Aiya
Need input on the following outline. The thesis statement carried a positive stance that yes Pakistan is ready for a digital revolution based on following needs and opportunities, if we cater so & so reservations properly.
1. Introduction
2. Digital revolution and Pakistan- understanding the possibilities
3. Scope- significance of a digital world
4. SWOT analysis- gauging the reality checks
-Strength: Youth potential
-Weakness: Insfrastructure
-Opportunity: Partnership ventures
-Threat: Political instability
5. Stakeholders- need to revolutionalise
-Academia
-Industry
-Government
6. Challenges- obstacles to cater
-Lack of strategic framework
-Limited circulation of D-services
-Implementation menace
7. Recommendations- A rational approach
-Formulation of national framework policy
-Incorporation of public-private partnership
-Political ownership of project
8. Conclusion
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Your outline is not self explanatory. Make outlines that gives a complete picture of your essay and on the same time hit the very theme of the essay statement asked by the examiner. I am sure your essay would be catering to the needs of the question asked once read completely but I am not sure if the examiner has enough time to read beyond one's outline. You know he has thousands of copies to check and that is what makes CSS a wild goose chase.
I also attempted the same essay in my attempt. And I am trying to post it on the forum; however, due to some technical issues unable to do so. Will post it as soon as the issue is resolved.